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Reviews for Reading Totems

By : GrizzlyTeddyBear
  • From spooksies on February 11, 2011
    hey just to let you know the majority of your story has some errors from the codes you used to make the italics and other such stuff.

    the only chapter that had no such problems is ch.11. other than that the rest need some help.



    Mizu(mary)
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  • From MrsCake on September 12, 2008
    Ooh a collaboration! It'll be cool to see your two styles together. I'm really looking forward to your next story. Yeah for Shino/Paige!
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  • From ANON - HumanInfiltrator on September 09, 2008
    *happy dance*

    *stalks off to poke CasaHouse with a pointy stick. Gently.*
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  • From Archfiend on June 03, 2008
    In the past few days I read your story,and I am thoroughly impressed in your writing style and of your OC. Making Shino the main character in your main pairing is very unusual too, as there are only a few Shino stories out there and your idea is very priginal. The idea of yours using totems must be uniqure and I can only bow my head and congratulate you on such a great idea. I was also very sad now that your story has ended, though I hope that you are already working on the second part, because it would be very interesting , now that she is pregnat, anyway keep your good work up, and I hope to see a new story of yours soon.
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  • From CasaHouse on May 18, 2008
    I really loved this story too! If you are making any new ones and don't want to use Kate's idea, maybe you could write one about some random guy with a non-japanese name who wanders into the leaf village one day but has a special power nobody knows about!!!1 And have a bunch of the female characters fall head over heels for him because why not? And have him pick TenTen! That'd show 'em... Oh wait... Damn.

    Sorry... satire is what I do best.

    Love
    -Casa
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  • From ANON - kate on May 11, 2008
    I rally loved this story. are you making any new ones? i would love to read any more you would make. I think it would be cool (if you take any suggestions) that if sakura met a new shinobi that came to the leaf village, and they fell in love. and the shinobi is a musician, and gets sakura into expressing herself by singing. naruto, kikashi, sasuke are all curious and get a little over-protective, and stalkish and could make the story interesting. i have no idea gow i came up with this. but i like reading long stories in the prospective of girls, like you reading totams. let me know what you think!

    thanks,
    kate
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  • From Aoekae on April 13, 2008
    I love the ending! It's perfect! *bows down* Wonderful!

    Please tell me you're planning on writing another story after this! I think you're my new favorite writer!

    Hehe.
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  • From ANON - vilekyle on February 20, 2008
    two thumbs up
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  • From ANON - Ian Sarver on February 20, 2008
    I think that was a beautiful and happy ending to the most awesome story ever. I think that I may have an idea for you but email me and I will tell you. Hopefully what I say will be an inspiration. But back to the review I thought that the end was especially cute and Paige's reaction was very hilarious. Good job on the fic. 10000000000/10
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  • From ANON - Auric on February 19, 2008
    Great ending, but now I have a problem. there seems to be a dearth of Well Written stories on AFF.net and an overabundance of Xeroxed Yaoi Shlock that buries the few good stories. I'd beg you to keep writing, but if you're going to write more you will, and if you aren't, no amount of begging will get you to. So, for the record I'll just say Thank you for sharing your tale and good luck in future endeavors.

    In Appreciation
    Auric
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  • From oohshiny on February 19, 2008
    KYAAAAAAAA~! your first story was a fcking....um.... what's a more extreme word for success? like.......SUCCESS? uh... anyway......YA!!! WOOT!!! if you decide to do another superb 'experiment', you sure as hell know where to find me! ~^^~
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  • From MrsCake on February 19, 2008
    Paige and Shino are gonna be parents! Sweet! If your busy schedule does allow you some free time, a sequel would be great fun to read. A great ending for a great story! Gratz!
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  • From dragongold3 on February 19, 2008
    NOOOOOO! How could you leave us with a cliff-hanger like that? "Would she be larva or a cub?" indeed...

    As a side note I would like to read more about Paige. Hell, I'd like to read more of anything you would make with this quality...

    I have found few authors who could pull me into a story in such a complete and demanding way, professional or other wise. continue on, and may your journey have many resting spots amongst your adventures.

    Alexa Ebonscathe
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  • From zeroharm on February 19, 2008
    it is hard to believe that it has been a year already... not much to say other that it has been a fun ride! will be keeping an eye out for anything else you might think up, or I am sure casahouse will be dropping a note in "the code" if you do. Much appreciation from a grateful reader.
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  • From Luciana on February 19, 2008
    SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!! Please?
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