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Reviews for Reading Totems

By : GrizzlyTeddyBear
  • From zeroharm on September 08, 2007
    wow... that was actually worth the wait :-) a different tone to say the least from the previous chapters but well done. One of the advantages of putting a lemon in this late on is it feels more natural than more tacked on scenes in other stories. It really made you feel for the couple, and was an excellent chapter as always.... now if we can just get some love from CasaHouse o_-
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on September 08, 2007
    Whoooo-heeee!!! Deep breaths.

    Thank you. There is a cosmic truth for you. Things always get worse before they get better, but if you believe (whatever you choose to believe) it will never be more than you can handle. I still love this and can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From eva24 on September 08, 2007
    Well, don't I feel loved *blush* and apparently Paige does too XD (that lucky....) Yay for erotica (which is what fanfiction is really about don'cha know *snicker* jokes aside, I'm not sure whether to gush over the sweetness of it all or to go have a cold shower hmmmm........the jury is still out on that decision. Well congrats on managing to slip in some plot development while you were at it XD Yay!! and taunting with teasers ooom, I wanna know what happens next.
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  • From eva24 on September 07, 2007
    Gah! It has been so long since I've been around to review and enjoy your work. (Recently relocated from Ireland to Aberdeen, home os sexy men in kilts ;P) So courtesy of my newly installed connection I'm sending you some love XD Great updates, god, I really can't wait to see how Gaara will react to 'this'.
    Shino and Paige are just too cute as a couple, fluffy love *sparkle* so sweet. Keep up the standard ^_^
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  • From zeroharm on September 05, 2007
    A great chapter as always! The only think I would suggest is out of story; Stop talking to CasaHouse! You both have great OCs who are holding out on us for lemon scenes,and I sense a conspiracy :-) Anyway, keep up the Paige-edy goodness.
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  • From ANON - wastelandsofthemind on September 04, 2007
    Hey, I got mentioned!

    Anyways, Gaara's showing up? Woo! I love Gaara. He be rockin'.
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  • From ANON - kimahrigirl on September 03, 2007
    Yay! Gaara's coming! Gaara's coming!! *does a happy dance about the room* You never disappoint! I cant wait to hear his reading! I wish I could go to that con but it is too far and I am a little to low of any sort of funds for travel, shopping, or even registration for the thing... Have fun anyways!! And, as always, I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Ox King on September 03, 2007
    Great chapter. I'm looking forward to what Garra's Totem is going to be. Even though I haven't been reviewing your story lately, I'm still here reading. Thanks for taking the time to write for us readers.
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  • From Starspear on September 03, 2007
    Fantastic as per usual...although do I see some competition between Gaara and Shino. Perhaps not, BUT I DID have a very steamy 'she's MY woman' dream after I read this chapter. Hehehe...God let there be competition!
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  • From DraikoDraven on September 02, 2007
    Hrmm, I really like your story so far, the only complaints I can come up with is that Hinata seems largely out of character, and the amount of energy you put into explaining the Medicine Wheel more than once, sorry if I offend, it's just.... I kinda don't really like re-reading though explantions and symbolisms that the Medicine Wheel is... I got the fact it is a Meditation device used to empower her abilitys don't need to know that everytime its spoken of... sorry again strong feelings i guess.. but its all good :) i'm Pegan also kinda.. kinda waiting for my brother to teach me more like he promised -.-
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  • From ANON - Ian Sarver on September 02, 2007
    Git'er done! Great job on this chapter. I hoope that you let me know when you do another story. You have such a genuine love for your characters that I can see as I read this and it really makes me care about Paige and the others that surround her. Keep up the good work.

    Edit-Sorry about the double post but I forgot to put my name and such on the last one. Sumimasen!!! *bows deeply*
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2007
    Git'er done! Great job on this chapter. I hoope that you let me know when you do another story. You have such a genuine love for your characters that I can see as I read this and it really makes me care about Paige and the others that surround her. Keep up the good work.
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on September 02, 2007
    Ah, yes, finally, the meeting with Gaara, can't wait! Still love your writing and this story, Thank You!!! Again, don't worry about the flow it is good you need slow chappies to break the tension between high action ones. It allows for good, solid character development which is central to this story. Don't rush, no matter who moans about it!
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  • From ANON - Ian Sarver on August 28, 2007
    I apologize if I seemed as though I was rushing you. Anywho, I just can't seem to find anything that I need to point out here except that this is getting really good.
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  • From ANON - kimahrigirl on August 27, 2007
    This chapter had me laughing so much! Two quotes in particular: "..you can keep doing that and make me into a puddle of Paige-goo." and "Thats somehow sweet and psychotic all at the same time." You make all of the characters so lovable. Thanks for the chapter and I cant wait for the next one! And I find Shino in a sort of teaching role just so irresistable...thanks for that!
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