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By : GrizzlyTeddyBear
  • From eva24 on September 29, 2007
    Super-Paige!!! *Dadadadaadada* XD That's our utterly awesome girl for ya!! Yeah, I really have absolutely no idea as to villains. I am SO disappointed in myself, usually I'm quite good as figuring it out. :( I guess that I'll just have to wait for the update for Paige to don her cand boots and stride into battle (Maybe it's just me but that seems kinda kinky XD I bet Shino'd enjoy that. It has just as much material as an Aburame coat but it's so revealing :D) Lovely characteristion of Kankuro (Kittttyyyyyyyy, it's just too appropriate) and Gaara (I read him as serious and contemplative but calm verging on the laid back and lo and behold look how you write him. A man with the burden of responisbility, the perfect charaacter to empathise with Paiges' duty) and as for Casahouse, I did review after the puppydogeyes XD just hold them off and I'll continue to do so-ROFL
    But one more thing-Shinobi Endurance. Thank You. Hardly anyone thinks about that and it is most important, most important indeed.
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  • From ANON - Ian Sarver on September 28, 2007
    One word for this review...
    Awesome!
    (So that was more than one but there you go.)
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  • From eva24 on September 24, 2007
    more Gaara huh? That's always good. ^__^ Things are progressing nicely, you style and characters are consistent and as for the Gaara mellowing thing, hell it is canon so you cannot be challenged on that. Hmmm, I wonder where you're going with this now *broooood* hah, keep going, keep going Now that Gaara is in it, I 'm not quite sure how it could get better
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  • From ANON - ObsidianLace on September 23, 2007
    This is one of the most interesting stories I've read in a long time. Paige is an absolute doll of an OC and the Naruto cast is very well portrayed. The descriptions of the totems and the tools she uses are just enough without going overboard. I think I could very easily fall in love with your Shino. I'm going to follow this story to it's end. You have a new follower my dear!
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  • From ANON - kimahrigirl on September 23, 2007
    Good Chapter! Gaara was wonderful and I look forward to more of him! I like that Paige is affected by her surroundings as she is too, that was interesting. I took your suggestion and read The Code and am thoroughly hooked. I shall be one to constantly bother CasaHouse to update now as well. Thanks for that recommendation! And, as always, I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on September 23, 2007
    I love Gaara, THANK YOU!
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  • From ANON - kimahrigirl on September 15, 2007
    Shino and Paige are so great together! I was impressed with her powers as well. Yay for some fighting strength! And Yay for Gaara coming soon! I can't wait to see how you write him and what his reading will be and what he thinks of Paige and her powers. Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From eva24 on September 15, 2007
    Yay! an update and groundwork. So important in writing XD Plus Super-Paige power up (Woot!!) Keep going, keep going ^__^
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on September 15, 2007
    'wub you! Hope you are doing ok. I'm fine. Decided to go to Japan for a year. New start and all that. Sorry about not getting back to you sooner. I've lost access to my blog. Just another loss, hey?

    Good luck and keep on writing.
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  • From zeroharm on September 15, 2007
    fun chapter as always grizzly... I would write more, but you already know how much you kick ass, so I will instead direct my efforts to annoying casahouse. If he makes us wait for 5 weeks again I will have to cry :-(
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  • From MakeupGiddess on September 15, 2007
    Its awesome that she has found her own way of combating with the shinobi and varying jutsus! I really like that you implemented that! Mwahaha.. more steamy scenes between the two of them. I can't wait for her to meet Kankurou and Gaara...and see how they react to her! Beautiful story as always!
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  • From ANON - Ian Sarver on September 14, 2007
    Wow...Just Wow. Now I find out that Shino isn't the only one that can kick @$$ though I know that she doesn't want to kill. Of course I always thought that Paige could kick @$$ but to use her totem of the Grizzly to do that and to hold back when she knew it was a training exercise...TOO COOL!!! d^_^b GO PAIGE!!!!! And she is romantic, just like Shino...Way too awesome *Dies overwhelmed by the awesomeness that is Paige.*
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  • From dragongold3 on September 11, 2007
    You continue to amaze me...
    Your talent with words has made it worth the wait for my internet to come back. Well worth the wait.
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  • From ANON - wastelandsofthemind on September 09, 2007
    About time! Although I can see why it took so long. But still, woo for them!
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  • From ANON - Ian Sarver on September 08, 2007
    Awwwwwwwwww...Shino is so romantic and very protective. This is great! Keep up the good work.
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