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Reviews for Reading Totems

By : GrizzlyTeddyBear
  • From eva24 on October 20, 2007
    Gahh!! A cliffhanger :'( Cruel, cruel tease.How could you be so cruel. Regarding the actual ending, I shall say nothing lest my theories prove to be true and hence spoileriffic, they need fine-tuning regardless XD But you're drawing from filler arcs..................I guess I can forgive you providing you keep up the standard. ^__^
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  • From ANON - Vivichan on October 12, 2007
    I really liked this chapter, I was kind of taken by surprise by the outcome, but it was great plot development. My only concern is that I got confused in the bathroom scene when she prepares to leave. I had to read it twice because I was getting lost in what she was trying to do. great chapter, I am eager to read more. Hope you're having a wonderful week!
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  • From MakeupGiddess on October 10, 2007
    I think you did a good job of building up to the Hoshi Shinobi being the badguys! I'm excited to see the next one, but eep! Are you alright? I hope you didn't suffer anything serious in your wreck! Take all the time you need, of course.. Life comes vastly before fanfiction! So please take care and I (and everyone else I'm sure) will be patiently waiting for you when things return to normal :).
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  • From eva24 on October 06, 2007
    A car accident!!!!OMG 0_0 Thank god you're alright. Cars are insured, your body is less easily replaced. Don't worry about your update rate. Some of the authors I read can take months to update (they know who they are) but it is always worth the wait. I'm all thrilled now. Just what do they want, I can't wait to see XD
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  • From MrsCake on October 06, 2007
    Bear Country! *Slaps forehead* Of course! Heh heh, sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I have been reading fervently. Just wanted say GREAT story and lotsa luck with the car buying.
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on October 06, 2007
    It never rains but it pours. Good luck!

    So, this was very, very interesting. Thank you.
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  • From zeroharm on October 06, 2007
    sorry to hear about your car, but great chapter as always....the sociopath shinobi really pisses me off though; I hope we are going to get to see him taken down eventually. Looking forward to 29 0/
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  • From ANON - Airemir on October 06, 2007
    Wow! What a great story! I never read anything about Pagans before! And you have such great interpretation of their personalities through their totems!

    But can I ask what a cat would be? Trust me, I need to know.

    Hey, I've had a great inspiration! I was thinking of making a Guardian for Ms. Paige Stone from Spira of FFX. A black mage/warrior that can defend her by her chains and her scimitar and her black magic. She'll be a half Guado and will go by the name of Ayako and was sent by Wakan Tanka. I could write up a chapter or two for you and you can decide whether you'd like it or not. Just e-mail me if you want it or not. 'Cause if you don't, I'll just use it for my own character.
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  • From ANON - Ox King on October 05, 2007
    Thanks for updating. This story is getting better and better. Thank you for keeping with the story and not ditching it like a lot of other people do.
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  • From ANON - Vivichan on October 05, 2007
    Wow, I love this story. I have become really emotionally attached to the characters, I love how you mixed in the religious aspects so smoothly with the story. I think it flows so well from chapter to chapter. I am so excited to read more of this story so I am looking forward to your next update! Although I will have to kill ObsidianLace for not telling me it wasn't finished. I think I might be falling in love with Shino too...*looks a little embarassed* Can I be paige? ;)
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  • From ANON - wastelandsofthemind on October 04, 2007
    Another excellent chapter, I must say. I love Kanuro in this story. He makes me laugh.
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  • From ANON - Ian Sarver on October 02, 2007
    Yeah, Phoenix Downs will do that for ya. LOL I may need another one from the awesomness of this chapter. Paige kicks ass as usual and Shino is ever romantic. I think that you are a good author and have made me a fan. Not many authors here know how to write a story as deep and involved as this one. Mainly it is all about sex, which as a guy I don't mind so much but they don't hold my interest like this one. You have created a real original character with Paige. She is more human than other OCs that I have seen and that is saying alot. She is smart, emotional, a tease(I love the look on Shino's face when she teases him) and awesome(As if you didn't know that from my previous review.XD) But all kidding aside Paige is a character that I can cry with, laugh along with, feel sad and worried with. That is rare and it is an awesome(there's that word again. LOL) thing that you did with Paige. 100000000000000/10 stars always.

    Ian Sarver
    PS just so you know I may just go with Ian as the Name when I review the next chapter but it will be me in all of my weird and strange glory.
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  • From ANON - Ox King on September 30, 2007
    Awesome chapters. I love how the relationship is moving. I like how she handled Garra. This is getting so good. Thanks for your update.
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  • From zeroharm on September 30, 2007
    lovely chapter as always... makes you fell sorry for the poor guards though... ninja duty just doesn't prepare you for certain things :-)
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  • From ANON - Onitsu on September 29, 2007
    OMG! This was AWSOME! And I really am enjoying the pagan tones with the medicine wheel workings. I'm actualy trying to construct one for myself. Though I already know my toten is a Deer. But anyhoo your Shino Smexiness is just superb. I actualy got butterflies in my tummy reading your steamy scenes. Hes SO romantic in his sentiments its SO cute! Keep it coming! Oh and good job with Gaara and Kankuro. And you should know that Temari has an animal summon of a Ferret or weasel, I cant tell which. :p
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