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By : GrizzlyTeddyBear
  • From ANON - Ian Sarver on November 18, 2007
    The funny thing here is that I fell for an illusion. I am talking about the scene with Paige and seeing "Shino" die in front of her. I fell for it and I have to say that was one of the awesomest moments in ths story. The way you described Shino getting himself killed made me see red for real. but then when you said in this chapter that it was all an illusion made me feel stupid. Don't get me wrong, that was a good thing.LOL I should have known that you wouldn't kill off Paige's love interest at all. 10/10 for this chapter.

    EDIT-Forgot to put my name and in email in the last review...^^; Gomen.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2007
    The funny thing here is that I fell for an illusion. I am talking about the scene with Paige and seeing "Shino" die in front of her. I fell for it and I have to say that was one of the awesomest moments in ths story. The way you described Shino getting himself killed made me see red for real. but then when you said in this chapter that it was all an illusion made me feel stupid. Don't get me wrong, that was a good thing.LOL I should have known that you wouldn't kill off Paige's love interest at all. 10/10 for this chapter.
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  • From oohshiny on November 18, 2007
    good.. if you hadn't killed masa, or had killed shino, the story would've ended and there'd be many a furious reader, me included. but THANK YOU for destroying masa instead of killing him, otherwise he'd've tortured ppl in the afterlife too.... grr.
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  • From ANON - wastelandsofthemind on November 18, 2007
    Sorry. Anon review was mine.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2007
    Ha. Excellent chapter (but no Shino! Damn it...) yet again, and yay! You're back!
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  • From Dynamo on November 18, 2007
    *does a happy dance* woo he died! *another happy dance* Matohota and Kagi Taka were awesome! but i like Kagi Taka better, hes exentric i love it (and the genjutsu shino thing was evil)
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  • From ANON - Vivichan on November 18, 2007
    I am so glad you're back, I am also glad that Shino's alive too. I loved you characterizations of the Bear and ravens. I love how you describe them, great work!
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  • From oohshiny on November 07, 2007
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOO DAMMIT YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS FIC NOW!!! NOWWWW!!!! OMG!!! @_@" THIS IS THE 1ST HET FIC IVE EVER OBSESSED OVER!!! alslo email me when you update. its deannathx@comcast.net
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  • From ANON - Vivichan on October 29, 2007
    Oh, I feel so bad for paige, but is that really Shino he killed? Could it be someone or something else disguised as him to trick her? I liked this chapter, although I kind of had a silent gasp of pain when Masa killed "Shino" at the end of the chapter. I really hope it's not him lol. I am keeping hope alive! I am also glad to hear that you are recovering well.
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  • From MrsCake on October 28, 2007
    Oh crap! I can only imagine Paige going absolutely insane on Masa. I'm on pins and needles now!
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  • From Dynamo on October 23, 2007
    Ok first things first, i LOVE the story. I'm sorry i didn't find it sooner but i just recently started frequenting this site :) i did get the gaara reference way early in the beginning, do i get a cookie? i was really surprised that the bad guys were the hosi nin, but i did know it was them when they were first introduced. the torture was sickening but I'm really susceptible to that sort of stuff.
    GOOD GOD NOT SHINO!, paige better go NUTS on masa with her totems next chapter! MASA MUST DIE....and the hoshikage....
    i have faith that shino isn't really dead......i hope
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  • From echolock on October 22, 2007
    You are an evil person... It's not actually Shino, is it? Say it isn't! Please?
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  • From ANON - Ian Sarver on October 22, 2007
    *Resists urge to use a Chidori on Masa* Why that good for nothing....paltry....dishonorable....evil....Grrrrrr....
    I think that this story is shaping up to be a good one as it always has. Masa is so going to get it from Paige and it sure as heck ain't gonna be pleasant for him. Torturing her by killing Shino....Masa....Why I ought to go and zap his sorry ass with a Chidori!!! Anyways, good job with the story so far! I hope that Masa get his butt kicked!!! *looks for Masa with a feral grin on his face.*
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  • From ANON - mary on October 21, 2007
    NNNOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! i waited and waited for the last week and a half for some kind of good news for our dear paige! please say you have some good stuff for me!
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  • From zeroharm on October 21, 2007
    . . . . Ouch? I don't think I have wanted anyone killed in a fan fic more than these guys. I assume it was an illusion or something, but if they did kill off Shino... I am going to be pissed. Will be waiting on the edge of seat for next chap.
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