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By : GrizzlyTeddyBear
  • From Dynamo on January 17, 2008
    *twitch*THE...*twitch*END...THE END?! OMG WTF NOOOOOOO! I WANT MORE!MORE I SAY!
    anyways you did a great job, cant wait for the epilogue. although i realy didnt expect the end to some so soon *sob*
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  • From MrsCake on January 17, 2008
    Awesome chapter! Shino is definitely worth the risk. Not to mention that gift was a doozy! :-)
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  • From echolock on January 17, 2008
    I look forward to the epilogue! Good story.
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  • From oohshiny on January 17, 2008
    KYAAAAAAAA XDDDD I LUUUUURVE THE ENDING!!!! IT MAKE ME CRY X33333 its SOOOOO SWEEEEEET ;D i can't wait for the epilogue!!! write it as fast as possible kay?? cuz you are fcking AWESOME!!!!
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  • From ANON - MsMina on December 30, 2007
    Sorry. I haven't reviewed in a while. Life has been crazy. And, wow, you have been busy. I couldn't remember where I stopped at exactly so I reread from the beginning. What a treat. Everything flows so well. I was moved with everything all over again - arrival, meetings, plans, Shino (very nice. And I think I wrote before that I have a new appreciation for Shino. If so I had to repeat it.), events in Sand, abduction, and escape. It was a delight. I almost can't wait to see what happens next. If help arrives soon enough ;)? How Shino deals with the bug in amber promise of marriage/love? How things settle down for everyone? But the otherside is I don't want the story to end, and I think that tells more than anything how well crafted this story is. So I guess the best way to put things is I look forward to future installments, but take your time to get them right. We can stand the wait (barely).

    -- Oh, on a grammer note, I noticed "rights" instead of "writes" when Naruto discusses Ero-sensi's books in chapter 5. Hope that helps with any revisions being made.
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  • From oohshiny on December 26, 2007
    ne, you havent updated in quite a while. are you dead by any chance? plz return to your faithful readers TT^TT
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  • From eva24 on December 21, 2007
    Kagi is terrifying in so many ways..... Well it has been a while hasn't it? Clearly I had to take a trip to find a decent place to read it ^^;; The way the raven speaks... is really, really creepy. I have shivers XD How appropriate, It's APT!!!! Apt, I say ;) There was a real sense of fear and urgency in this chapter, not to mention the apprehension of those gone to fight on their behalf. Eeeeeeee I'm all excited (again) Enjoy life (eheh) but don't ever forget your oh-so-wonderful fic
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  • From Aoekae on December 17, 2007
    You are officially awesome. Write more!
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  • From ANON - mary on December 06, 2007
    please grizzly i NEED more!!! please??
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  • From ANON - vilekyle on December 06, 2007
    one word "brillient". it took me a little while to reed but i thourghly enjoyed it and i hope to read even more.
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  • From MrsCake on November 30, 2007
    Oh yes, a VERY satisfying ending to Masa! And the first thing I thought about Kagi Taka was "Yoda?", but wasn't sure. Looking forward to the next chap! :-)
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  • From Tricia1224 on November 28, 2007
    It has taken me several days to read this story, and so far it has been more than worth the time. I am enjoying this story immensely. Your story is the only one I have seen like this. I love how the Naruto characters are portrayed. All older, some have mellowed with age (Naruto), some have become stronger and more outspoken (Hinata), one has become more "vibrant" (Lee) and others who have learned the hard lessons in life and have come back to what is important (Sasuke). I love Paige. She is strong, but has her weaknesses. You have not made her to be an overly strong or dramatic character. She is human. I did my share of laughing and crying in this story. This story, for me, rates up there with Across the Ages by inuyoukai8 (one of my most faorites) and Tales From the House of the Moon by Resmiranda. I am looking forward to your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - mary on November 26, 2007
    the revenge was awesome!!!! please some more soon!!
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  • From LDE on November 24, 2007
    holy crizzap! i have been away too long..come back to find 15 new chapters....as always you take my breath away girl. know i'm still reading and ejoying..although lagging behind due to that pesky thing called life.

    lets see torture,burrowing beetles,bears and bastards..as well as a yoda-fied bird....yep, i think we have all the components of a kick ass story here :P however you have ever ruined my ability to write OC fics as a result of your awesomness..i write then read it and go "oh this is crap compared to Grizzly's stuff" and into data heaven it goes..lol. you best hurry up with the new chapter since now that i am caught up i'm dying to know what happens next!

    all my luv to you. drop me a line anytime girl, my metaphorical door is always open!
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  • From ANON - zeroharm on November 18, 2007
    NNNOOOOOOO! After such a long time you leave us with another cliff-hanger? The chapter was great as usual, but I can't wait to read the next... it seems like a lot of authors I like just took a few weaks break and just now came back... now if casa and dim song would update all would be right with the world :-)
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