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By : GrizzlyTeddyBear
  • From MakeupGiddess on June 27, 2007
    Nice addition! I am always amused at people's take on Genma, though I must say I agree. This has become one of my favorite stories to read online. Though I admit, I'm not a fan of Ino/Shika pairing, but to each their own I say! I like the natural and methodical way Shino and Paige are opening up to one another. Seeing Shino flirt is just too cute! I was wondering though, is there any chance you'll be updating the story any quicker than you do now? It seems like the updates come about twice a week, and still I find myself checking everyday! I am just excited to know what'll happen next.
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  • From eva24 on June 26, 2007
    An Update!! *sheer joy* A resounding Yes to a flirty Shino ;) I love how you have so many throwaway lines that emphasise how Paige is a normal young woman. E.g. the giddiness when Shino sits close and her serious contemplation to crawling over the table to pull down the front of Shinos coat (which she filed away for later reference XD )
    Yeah, I don't know what plot hole you could be worried about. I didn't notice one developing in the previous chapters but maybe I'm just failing-ROFL. also, lucky girl being fluent in Shinoese. Are there any plans for the sand siblings, I'd love to see her react the only question would be who would surprise her out more; Gaara or Kankuros Facepaint ^_______^ Great work............as always
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  • From ANON - jewel on June 25, 2007
    just found your fic. usually I don't go for the oc's but this one is fabulous. can't wait for the council meeting.
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  • From ANON - kilrathsluzath on June 25, 2007
    OMG, i normally don't read fics with oc's but my curiosity about this one finally got to me so i decided to read it, i haven't stopped reading it since i started and its great. I love the fact that this story is developing so well and i love the fact that you are taking the time to develop the plot. I often find myself saying that the stories are just smut and need more development but again like i have already stated this is well developed.

    Awsome work

    Kilrath Sluzath
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 25, 2007
    Sunshine, thank you for updating. Plot hole, what plot hole? I like that you brought in the whole rookie 9, I like them. No totem for Choji, I wonder why. Here is a thought, what would she do with Gaara, hmmm? Keep up the good work, I love it|!!
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  • From Navygirl9999 on June 25, 2007
    Great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)
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  • From LDE on June 20, 2007
    lovely as usual, although i really have to read backwards first, i found myself a little lost when i started chapter 10 but about halfway through realized i didn't read chapter 9..lol. i think your pace is just fine...i prefer the slow unraveling of the plot (a'la stephen king) to the rapid wham, bam, thank you maam style. you're doing great in my eyes, please keep it coming..i particularly like the dry wit you interject into paige (which i assume is your own personal sense of humor as well). but would yo ulike to know the best part for me? the fact that an 'our world' interjection is NOT suddenly a nija! god how i hate that, like they would immediately be trained as a ninja,it's too far-fetched for me. you have found a great balance here. i can't wait to read the next chapter!

    Lady S
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  • From MakeupGiddess on June 20, 2007
    Yay for flirtiness! I love the rare moments Shino is able to come out of his shell! I'm really excited to see how this progresses, simply dying for the day she sees his face and to know her reactions to it.
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  • From eva24 on June 19, 2007
    Hee, a new chapter *giddy squeals* I love to see you update. but you listen here, if you want to take six days or six years (hopefully not the latter) you do that. what we want most of all is for you to keep up your oh-so-excellent standard. I expect Hinata to have the lowdown on the council works (stuffy hyuuga clan, ultra formal remember? At leat that is how they seem to have been represented...) I'm loving Paige more and more, She's so sassy and witty, that always makes for an excellent heroine XD There was excellent interaction between her and the rest of team 8. Kiba and Shino out on the town, Pfft the mental images, it's far too much. Keep goin we're all here for you.......*Shakes Pom-poms* Go team totem ^_^
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 19, 2007
    I have no complaints about your pace. Slower means better and the story is bound too last longer. Sometimes short and smutty is fun, but I definitly prefer long involving tales. Shino blushing, yeay!
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  • From ANON - Jess on June 19, 2007
    I love your story.. though this time there one sentence that was confusing
    “Not that that leaves much that I can’t do.”
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  • From ANON - Ox King on June 17, 2007
    Hey there, just wondering if your going to back away from all the Totem reading and develop the main characters in other ways? Your centering an lot on that.
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  • From MakeupGiddess on June 16, 2007
    I wanted to say you're doing an awesome job with this story! normally I'm not a fan of OCs, but I really like Paige and I love the interaction between her and Shino! I check this story daily for updates so I can see what will happen next. Great story so far, I'm anxious to read more!
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  • From Navygirl9999 on June 15, 2007
    This is a great chapter!! I think you are doing a great job with Shino!! Your right they don't show what he's like in privet(sp?) and not much in public either. Well I'm done with my commentary, I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! Oh also I would like to say most of the time I can't stand stories that have OC's in them exspecilily(sp?) when they are a romantic intrest but you are doing a great job with Pagie and I just love her character!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! :)
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  • From eva24 on June 14, 2007
    I'm not obsessive....Am I? Heh, I know that I make a point of checking once a day because Aff.net lacks the convenience of update alerts that FF.net has. Hee, great stuff as always, keep up your excellent standard. Ah, Shino and his sexy voice XD and a striptease Ha, I like the way paige thinks ;)
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