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By : GrizzlyTeddyBear
  • From ANON - Ox King on July 03, 2007
    Just a after thought. I would like to know what the council discusses about Paige after she leaves. Also, what is Shibi's thoughts about his son and Paige and the relationship that is between them. Thanks.
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  • From Kilrath on July 03, 2007
    this was another excelent chapter. As far as who saw through the naruto kiba and shino leaving i had a feeling that they would be involved in some way because they are some of the people who would protect her.

    Anyways keep writing your oc fic that i normally wouldn't read but i am doing so

    Kilrath Sluzath
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  • From eva24 on July 03, 2007
    XD that was great and now I'm all excited about the next chapter. Danzou.......So evil >.< I can't wait to see how you develop him. EEEEEEEEeevil!! ^_^ This just seems to get better and better.
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  • From Navygirl9999 on July 03, 2007
    I had a faint idea that what Shino and them where doing but I was positive. Anyway this is a great chapter!! I can't to read more!! please hurry with the next chapter!! :)
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on July 03, 2007
    I am so glad that you are having fun. That means you will keep on writing and that means I will get to read more of this wonderful tale. I like that you are using Danzo, it brings a new dimension to the story. Making the boys the ANBU for the story, no, I did not see that coming. Thank you again, I love this.
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  • From ANON - Ox King on July 03, 2007
    This was an awesome chapter. Your best one yet. Thanks for taking the time to update so fast.
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  • From CasaHouse on July 02, 2007
    Yay! New chapter! The interplay with Scarab was humorous... I didn't see the Shino/Naruto/Kiba mission coming... and Danzo seems to be a fairly likely antagonistic force in the situation. Kudos for giving Anko and Kurenai some closure... and then giving us a somewhat snuggly Shino/Paige moment... can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!
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  • From eva24 on June 29, 2007
    XD Short but definitely sweet. I loved how she handles ero-sennin. Hilarious!! Definitely a kick-ass kind of girl.
    Making him work >.< probably the most he's done in years and it's paperwork!!! The enemy of all ninjas (particuarly the high-ranked ones)
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  • From LDE on June 29, 2007
    ummm what can i say that isn't repeating myself yet again? short,yes but still very detailed and well written. one small typo where you put 'he' instead of 'she' but i can't for the life of me recall where..2nd or 3rd paragraaph i think? unfortunately i forgot to open this in a new window so yeah... beautiful,beautiful....i'm waiting on tender-hooks (what the hell does that mean?) for the council meeting :) keep it up, i've got my eye on you :P
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  • From CasaHouse on June 29, 2007
    Just read these 12 chapters in one go... I like this story a lot... your writing style is clean and easy to read, your characters are believable, as is the story... and as a fan/scholar of non-mainstream world religions, the information on Totemism is a huge bonus. Keep it up!

    P.S. The pacing is fine, some of us read for stories, not just smut. The only bad pacing would be if you stopped updating it...
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  • From Navygirl9999 on June 29, 2007
    This is a great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)
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  • From CelticFantasy on June 28, 2007
    “ 'This one…a tanuki…never heard of that before.' " ~GAARA!!! Heheh, I found it.

    You have a very good fic going on here. Everytime you post a new chapter I find myself waiting rather impatiently for the next one to come along. Please keep up the great job. Until next time.

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  • From ANON - kimahrigirl on June 28, 2007
    The Gaara reference was the Tanuki info. And I love your story btw! I read it all last night and was really happy to see this chapter (12) up so soon! I can't wait for more!!! *eagerly awaits her cookie*
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 28, 2007
    I am delighted to say that I have no idea where you are going with this. I LOVE THAT!!!! So Gaara is coming, yeay, I love him a lot to. Don't worry about Shino going off, absence makes the heart grow fonder. Thank you for the update, and really, there was no need to appologise, this was a desent length update.

    Now, back to typing I'm waiting for the next update!!! (please)
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  • From Navygirl9999 on June 28, 2007
    This is a great chapter! I can kinda see where is is headed. I can't wait to read more Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)
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