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Reviews for Reading Totems

By : GrizzlyTeddyBear
  • From jadedkatrina on July 26, 2007
    Heya I know I emailed you yesterday before reviewing... this story is amazing and I cannot wait till the next chapter is posted up. Very few write Shino stories and even those few that do write them do not portray him very well. The way you portray him is amazing. You keep his stoic, enigmatic, quiet personality while expanding upon his own romance life very nicely. I love how you can mix his public life and personal life well so that they run hand in hand and not over take one or the other. Your original character Paige is amazing as well. You portray her beautifully as well, keeping her independant and strong yet when the time calls for it, weak but not to the point that she is one of those mary sues that are always needing rescuing.

    Keep up the wonderful work and hope to read another update soon... and I'll be waiting on baited breath as well.

    Jadedkatrina
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  • From ANON - kimahrigirl on July 25, 2007
    Yay for angsty goodness and fabulous flashbacks! Not to mention wonderful fluffiness. You never cease to give me what I want from this story! And I think you are the first authoress to ever actually answer the remarks I've given...YAY! That clinches it, I'm your loyal minion. I eagerly await the next chapter!
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  • From eva24 on July 25, 2007
    We are trusted. The honour, It's too much *sniff* But look how far it's come. You're approaching twenty submissions of chapters. It really is such an accomplishment. So many writers start out well but tend to abandon their fics altogether. It really is great that you have such commitment to your muse XD Keep going, We're all behind you, Cookies for all XD
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  • From Navygirl9999 on July 25, 2007
    This was a great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on July 24, 2007
    Yippee! Thank you for updating, I enjoyed the fluff. I don't think I've mentioned before, but I've always been rather partial to Shino with black eyes, so thank you for that. *pout* I'm not really happy about weekly updated but I do understand, so good luck and thank you for keeping going.
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  • From ANON - KilrathSluzath on July 24, 2007
    another excelent chapter, keep up the writing
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  • From Navygirl9999 on July 23, 2007
    Great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)
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  • From ANON - kimahrigirl on July 22, 2007
    Help Konoha heal? Didnt seem like they suffered that much...I am looking forward to seeing how you flesh this plot out more. I adore the story so far so you are definitley doing something right! *thumbs up*I hope you bring in more of the characters from the series like a particular red-headed sandnin I am obsessed with. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Onitsu B. on July 20, 2007
    WOW! I loved this chapter:) it was GREAT! Shino was just as stoic as he usually is in the anime. In the manga he would quote Confucious but you have made him to be the quiet wise observer. I don't see any OCness besides the usual tastefully done artistic additions :-) Your really getting me to like Shino. I never looked at him in that way before, being a Gaara and Kakashi fan. But you've opened my eyes to the sexyness that is Shino Aburame. My own stomach did back flips when i read that kiss scene (^_^) Thanks for the update. I'll be watching! Your loyal fan. Onitsu B. (I shortened my handle cause it's too much of a pain to punch it out on my phone)
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  • From eva24 on July 20, 2007
    ^_________^ *Hurls cookies* Excellent work, you never slip below the bar XD Yes Shino is IC, Yes, you balance Paige well, She comes across as naturally spunky, intelligent and independent but you clearly show her struggling with a lot of issues that would get anyone down. Plus, You gotta love Kiba summation of the meeting XD I can't wait until the next one >.< EEEEeeeeeee I'm so excited Lol

    P.S. I'm glad that someone took notice and supported the story I plugged in the reviews for the code (I'm Aoihand on that website ;) ) Great writers need support and encouragement to grow, as well you know and prove XD
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  • From ANON - alexa ebonscathe on July 20, 2007
    You have pulled off what few author's/authoresses have ever been able to do for me... You have made me concerned about the health of the main character, in the very first chapter, knowing about the other 15 that come after it, and have continued to amaze me with your ability's with the other chapters. You have had me laughing so hard that I had to stop reading for at least five minutes, a very rare occurrence believe me, then crying so hard that I had to do the same for the same amount of time, some times in the same chapter. You have made me believe that Paige is a real living being, human, with all the faults and strengths that go along with being such a being. and Shino? you portray him in a way that makes me believe that you have him right there next to you when your typing/writing your stories.

    anticipation consumes me for more.
    Alexa Ebonscathe
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  • From CasaHouse on July 20, 2007
    Woot! New chapter! I think Paige's purpose is well handled, and I eagerly await more. I'd write more, but I've been awake for 22 hours straight, so I'm just going to go to sleep. Keep it up!

    -Casa
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on July 20, 2007
    I love when I get to read one of your updates before I head of to work. Hmmm, love the romance, is not sure about Paige's purpose, still love Shino, just as you make him. Keep it UP!!!

    Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Ox King on July 19, 2007
    This a really great chapter. It centered less on reading totems and more on the people that revolve around Paige. I think that was the missing element that the story needed.
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  • From ANON - jewel on July 19, 2007
    I love this story. It's so unique.
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