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Reviews for Conquest

By : Adi
  • From ladywolfTerri on February 10, 2008
    WOOT!! Go Sasuke-whore!! Drive that into the nearest garage and park it for some serious groping!!!

    Thanks for the update!! It was just what I needed, now I'll be waiting for the next one!!..^^..
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  • From NaoAngel on February 10, 2008
    omfg adi. omfg. FUCKING MASTERPIECE. i really loved the chappie. i loved so many things in it. I loved how it started with Sasuke eyeing Naruto up. and omg, every mention of the dagger had me bouncing all over the place. it was awesome! I laughed so hard every time Sasuke tried to control himself, and omg the part when sasu was explaining stuff on Kakashi's computer was amazing *___* it made my mind go all mushy. no seriously, it was sweet and funny and perfect. BUT GAI HAS THE WORST TIMING EVER >_< lol. and then the whole part with Gaara was awesome, uwaaaah, sasuke was jealous XD
    omfg. my heart melted when sasuke smiled and naruto grinned back. i went all nuuuuuuuuh >_< and the LAUNDRY!!!!!! AH! awesomely hot. I'm happy Sasuke's whore is on a roll now. Sasuke-whore and the Dagger = love and cookies. I LOVED THE CHAPPIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *flails* nuh.
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  • From marquesgue1 on February 10, 2008
    *cracks knuckles* hehe ^_^ can you notice the sinister in that 'hehe' just gave you/ it's there because you're going to suffer. ^_^ yup that's right you're soooooooooooooooo going to suffer for CUTTING IT OFF THERE! WHAT IS THE MATTER WITH YOU! WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO DO TO ME!!! and now now >.< when are you going to update, you're going to leave me to suffer and imagine the end of the kiss but it's not the same cause the damn kiss isn't THERE *glares*

    *calms self*

    I loved how Gaara just dropped his bowling ball! I could so just see him picking it up and dropping it down completely dead pan expression in place before turning and going back XD brilliant oh oh and the cute 'girl' punches Sakura kept on giving Naruto and poor Naruto winced from them *glomps Naruto* but GAI-SENSEI *glares* YOU DON'T INTERRYPT POTENTIAL SMUT SCENES THAT MIGHT HAVE SASUKE BENT OVER A DESK TAKING IT FROM NARUTO! no matter how youthful you feel!

    Gah! >.< *takes deep breath*

    :D Glad you updated btw and it was definitely worth it although i do feel like ^_^ forcing you to write the rest right at this moment but, it's okay *pats* i can be patient

    :D great update *chu*
    hina xXxx
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  • From sweetciel on February 10, 2008
    Now that they are living together, the sexual tension is sure to go through the roof. There are all sorts of opprotunities to catch each other naked and wet from the shower. Or to even walking in while the other is having some 'self love' time...^_^ yeah....GREAT!!!
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  • From nawatia on February 06, 2008
    "...Night...." GAH!!!!! Thats it?...Night...ARGH!!!!

    OK, now that I have that out of my system - great story so far - I am looking forward to chapter 11!
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  • From MoveThemHands on January 30, 2008
    I love this story! Took me two days to read all of it because I have a short attention span but I actually read it!! I can't believe how much I love this story! *giggles* While reading it I kept copying and pasting parts of it and showing it to my friends and laughing for a long time until they told me to shut up XDD

    I actually started reading this cause I clicked on your profile and I saw the link to the fanart and that got me interested enough to start reading.

    Oh man I totally look forward to the update!! Do you send update notices through email? If you do I'd like to be on that list, if not thats cool ^__^ Ita4Kyu@hotmail.com is my email address if you do.

    Thanks so much for this story!
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  • From Dysia on January 11, 2008
    I love this! I love your story-line/plot! I LOVE GAARA. He's amazing in this story. I love how you use him to lighten the mood (even if lightening the mood involves murdering intent, wait, does that make any sense?) haha. I love how he seems like a dog who escaped his leash when he's hyped up on his happy pills. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
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  • From ANON - k_citrus on January 07, 2008
    really like this !!! ^.^ can't wait for more. I bet Sasuke wanted to kiss Naruto soooooo badly near the refrigerator lolz

    and the way you talk about the students life is so realistic... well at least for me because i'm not a student yet :]

    good luck!
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  • From animeaddict666 on December 22, 2007
    Ah! Naruto you chicken! *shakes fist* Dammit. Silly, insecure boys...
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  • From ANON - Chrysler on December 20, 2007
    Grrrrrr.........NARUTO!

    I guess it was TOO easy but still....now Naruto is pushing him away? *sigh* Well the going away party was hilarious, the twister and then Kakashi pulling out the Gai threat. Fun! And then Neji coming to castrate Kiba was priceless not too mention that Naruto and him kept babbling and the porn scene...wow. But Sasuke apologized, he's easing up and I love it. Now, they live together. YAY! Yay until he sees Gaara. Ha! But it's gonna be fun, I can tell. Ooooh and please more Neji, I LOBE him!
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  • From Zrina on December 19, 2007
    See what happens when I disappear off the net? You WRITE!! Maybe I should vanish more often? Nah... couldn't get my Adi fix then.

    Loved the chapter, hon. OMG, Naruto was hilarious with his house cleaning trip!! Poor kid. That was probably the cleanest his place has ever been. I felt soooooo sorry for Sasuke when he was trying to leave Kakashi's place. And I can just picture (although I wish I couldn't) Kakashi doing that to Gai and Lee during twister. *Shudders*

    Kiba is an idiot. That's all I have to say about him. That and I hope he realizes that he can't move back in with Naruto now!!

    And of course, the hottest part... the sexual tension between Sasuke and Naruto. I like that Naruto didn't give in and the mindless rutting began. He is showing restraint and a little bit of forethought into making Sasuke be the one to make the first move. After all, it is hard to cry foul play if you were the one to start the game.

    Can't wait to see how things develop, dear!! XD *hugs and nuzzles*
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  • From ANON - Mewa on December 18, 2007
    Yay!! You updated! :D Aww poor thing. You have the flu D: but nice update! I liked it!
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  • From ValkyrieNiennaHelyanwe on December 18, 2007
    *Hump*



    ....yeah, I had to do that. I like this. Bet Sasuke is feeling the ass bite that came back eh? Bet he wishes he wasnt such a jerkwad. hehe. I hope he regrets turning Naruto down after that near kiss....and of course, I wonder what he was thinking that whole time.

    ....and Neji/Kiba...cute
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  • From Anaheyla on December 17, 2007
    Excellent work as always. Please continue, I love this story!
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  • From NaoAngel on December 17, 2007
    I CAN HUMP YOU SIX WAYS TO SUNDAY BABE. hn. anyways, you already know how much i loved the chappie, i think i've fangirled enough over your tight ass XD THE ENDING WAS SO EVIL THOUGH. OMG i think i stopped breathing for a moment, SASUKE MADE A MOVE. which is crazy coz he's been pushing naru away all this time. what a teme. omg. i know! he's in love of course!!! *giggles* erm. yeah. and WHY WHY WHY WHY why did naruto freak out??? i mean, he was like i gotta go...and i went O_O NOES. NOES. that wasn't fan service adi, that was fan torture -_- but i LOVED it. torture me more often. of course the chappie was hilarious! from James Bond to Mr Muscle, and lol, i think the funniest thing was when naruto thought it was neji knocking again when in fact it was sasuke. and lol he closed and reopened the door immediately. that was the best. thanks for the wonderful update adi!!! you rock *hugz* now. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol. *flails*
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