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Reviews for Conquest

By : Adi
  • From ANON - vikuta on February 12, 2008
    hey! i'm reading now just the second chapter, but i can't not comment! dude! that's so amazing, i can't stop gigglin and laughin and yes my english is horroble but that's not the point, you're so..... wow!!!!!!!!! ok. back to reading.
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  • From ANON - Rose on February 12, 2008
    Wow that was an amazing chapter. I love your characterization of Sasuke, trying to seem untouchable when we all really know hes nowhere near it. I also like the balance you've created between him and Naruto. As is in the show, they both have their strengths and weaknesses, and I think you've found a good way to show that off without forcing it down our throats. Generally at this point I would put in some constructive criticism, but honestly I've enjoyed the story so much that I haven't seen any if it is there at all. On another note, my inner whore is still asking for some sex scenes between them, but my sensible mind likes the pace you are taking, and thinks it should stay they same. Can't wait for the next chapter. Goodluck!
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  • From riddlestar on February 12, 2008
    you know.. i could really really murder someone for that cliff hangar!! *runs around in frustration* aaaa!! i totally approve of Sasukewhore.hehe.. i think he's my fav character.
    update soon, yeah?
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  • From squirrelc on February 11, 2008
    I love love love you story
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  • From Totaltruth on February 11, 2008
    AHHHHHHH cliffhanger!!!!!!

    I can't wait until next chapter!

    Happy belated birthday btw. :)
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  • From Aidiya on February 11, 2008
    I've never pictured Gaara bowling before but that style of ever so slow made me laugh. But Gaara and Sasuke's interaction made me laugh even more, the silent glare war was good. Poor Sasuke distracted by Naruto's ass. And gah! When Gai interupted them at the lab I wanted to scream! NO DYNAMIC ENTRY FOR YOU!! But my eyes went wide and my mouth dropped open when Sasuke whore took over, I was not expecting it to happen this chapter. I wonder what Sasuke whore will do when he finds out that he's the one being bent over and not Naruto :P
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  • From raaka on February 11, 2008
    Yayy! you updated again XD Omg, I love this story
    Everything you write is amazing, how do you do it??
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  • From Ljiljana on February 11, 2008
    I can't believe I read 11 chapters all at once, dead sick, only for you to leave me open mouthed and breathless here!!! And now I have to wait!
    And if you make me wait really long, I'll find the way to do something incredible mean to you in turn!
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  • From Glorial on February 11, 2008
    I love you for updating that puppy! (how weird does that sound?)

    I loved the whole day progress even if I sighed in frustration everytime they almost kissed.

    I say Sasuke-whore and The Dagger *must* take over!

    I've seen that Sasuke snapped and let Sasuke-whore out so hopefully The Dagger will reciprocate.

    You just had to leave it when the good stuff started happening, huh? You authors are evil, evil I tell you.

    *tackles and glomps*
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2008
    I love this story but I'm torn between being ecstatic that there is more to read and devastated at the cliff hanger. I'm going with ecstatic and waiting with batted breath for the next update.
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  • From VRon8899 on February 11, 2008
    OMG..you suck. XDDD I've been dying for this chapter..i'm so glad to see your still alive! Please please pleeeeeeease update soon!!!
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  • From Anaheyla on February 11, 2008
    "the sheer force of his glare should have levelled them, and the pins of all the other games as well"

    Hi-frickin-larious.
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  • From Anaheyla on February 11, 2008
    YAY!!!

    Adi's updated Conquest! I heart this story. *runs off to read it that he might better praise it*
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  • From nekochannya on February 11, 2008
    fINALLY!!! GO FOR IT SASUKE-WHORE!! THAT WAS GOOD!!!
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  • From ANON - fini on February 11, 2008
    yay so good
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