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Reviews for Conquest

By : Adi
  • From ANON - punkin02 on May 07, 2007
    I'm really enjoying this story so far. :) And of course Sasuke would notice Naruto's stalking, he's not really being very stealthy. Is Kiba the bartender??? Well...I hope to see more of this soon. Gotta head to work for now.
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  • From yaoilover07 on May 07, 2007
    I think it would be funny if Sasuke told Kiba all about how Naruto was stalking him and that he was having dreams of him. As for a beta I will do it if you need me too.
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  • From LifeonHiatus on May 07, 2007
    woot woot. here's to the college life! sleepless nights and party days. haha. anywho, ::clears throat:: this story is pretty entertaining. you have an appealing sense of humor. ^^ splendid first fic. update soon. :-P
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  • From Allys on May 07, 2007
    ZOMG!! Naruto humping Akamaru is just wrong, Hilarious, but oh so wrong, XD. I Love that we got Sasuke's POV this time, I've been wondering about him. I can't wait to see what he's telling Kiba :Grins Evilly: I hope he spills his guts about Naruto, LOL, he'll never hear the end of it. Kiba should totally give Naruto a call. How are you at writing smut? Have you tried it yet? After that little dream sequence I totally think you be good at it. Did you want this to be a long story or more of a ficlet? You should make at least a loose plan, or you'll probably run into some trouble in the future. But probably nothing too solid, cause it won't be as much fun anymore. You're a talented writer, especially when it comes to humour, but everybody needs a plan, even if it's just that you have an idea of where you want the next chapter to go.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2007
    Naruto reallyn is trying to win Sasuke albeit a weird way. But, interesting story. Please continue!!
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  • From ANON - Nami on May 06, 2007
    This was brilliant XD. *still laughing* Poor Sasu's got himself a stalker! And Sasuke in glasses? Mm hm. Hot. And getting jumped by Naruto, again hot... it didn't happen, but it would have been hot. I just know it.
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  • From ANON - xpyne on May 06, 2007
    that was pretty hilarious. i could just see naruto doing something stupid like stalking sasuke, or naming his little naruto "the Dagger" lmaowtf??!?! this whole thing vaguely reminds me of like--an AU filler episode or something. hope you continue. :)
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  • From ANON - kyu77ryu on May 06, 2007
    Really?! This is your first?!

    This is a really good one for a first.

    Well, good luck on your exams and keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Lady Diamond on May 06, 2007
    lmao! update asap that was hilarious! =D
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  • From ANON - loC on May 06, 2007
    Thank you aff for cutting off my review. D
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 06, 2007
    Yes
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  • From yaoilover07 on May 06, 2007
    I like this fic. I think it is hilariously funny. I found myself laughing the whole time I was reading it.
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  • From Allys on May 06, 2007
    XD, LOL, Well I'm glad you liked it- it was the honest to gods truth. So here I am again, (sans all food or drink, and with a touch of review anxiety O.o) doing the happy dance, cause you're so prompt XD. This is still hilarious, I love your take on Sakura, I can totally see her with the whips and chains, inner Sakura mentally screaming for blood. And I love that yet again, Naruto is an equal opportunity kind of cat, and oh, umm... Biomedical sciences :face faults: LOL. Sadly I can say I totally feel Naru-chan's pain, I can't do the eyebrow thing either :S, all of us genetically defective people need to stick together XD. This looks like a lot of fun XD. Congratulations on your first story! and Good Luck in your exams! Ja ne.
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  • From ursweetheartless on May 06, 2007
    OMG sasuke's got a stalker, how romantic. teehee, i love how naruto's cock seems to have fallen in love with Sasuke, and i bet it's done this just to spite him for naming it something stupid like "the dagger" ^.^

    for some reason i was expecting naruto to catch sasuke jerking off or something
    but that could just be vague stalker fantasy on my part >.
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  • From ANON - Nanaka on May 06, 2007
    Yee a second chapter already... i could hug ya, if could find ya first.... i'll be eagerly waiting the next chapter
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