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By : Adi
  • From ANON - Nanaka on May 08, 2007
    hehehehe....god i just love this story!! ... i can't wait to see wht happens next
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  • From Allys on May 08, 2007
    OMG, Hooray for long chapters XD. I really Love this story, it never fails to make me grin like an idiot XD. I'm so excited about Naruto going to get Sasuke. And I adore how you make these guys interact. Gaara, Naruto and the Falling thing, LOL. And OMG... LMAO, Neji and Kiba XD, that was fantastic. I'm so happy you updated. And HOORAY for SMUT!! LOL XD. I'm really bad at plot points so I'll spare you :D. I think you're doing marvelously, I totally :heart: you.
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  • From ANON - May-N on May 08, 2007
    Adiii, I love how this chapter turns out. Although, I was kinda expecting naruto to show up and sweep our resident uke-in-denial off his feet XD, I didn't expect Kiba to be teh bartender. I WANT SMUT! Okay, to the point. And I know you can write a decent one since 1) you're a pervert, so am I, and we both are proud of it *grins* 2) so far, you've managed to keep them both IC even with the jokes thrown here and there. And I asolutely love your Gaara.

    However, can readers have Itachi? Just for the sake of torturing poor Sasuke :3 you know either he's molesting Naruto until Sasu-chan gets jealous or he can 'peep' at them while NaruSasu is in session. But he's not homicidal enough. Or perhaps, next chapters should have an orange wearing Sasuke? Because he pukes his gut out on his shirt and there's no other shirt in Naruto's wardrobe. Can you imagine what the situation can cause the next day??? XDXD Okay okay, I'll stop here but I'll try keep on reviewing. Love, and take care *hugs*

    ~ m a y ~
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  • From Dragon7 on May 08, 2007
    Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From flameofthenight on May 08, 2007
    ...there are only four chapters. Why are there only four chapters! I demand explanations!

    Anyway the story is very good. Love the way you've written Gaara. Are you considering pairing him with anyone? Might I suggest Neji?

    After all, you've already established he's gay, and even though he hasn't really made an official entrance, you already have the

    perfect way for the two of them to meet. Have Neji go over to Kiba's (he doesn't like him so he can be in all protective mode)and have

    them meet there. Might even have Gaara be the only one there. Anyway, just a suggestion.

    Please don't have Sasuke and Naruto start liking (ie:going out, having sex)Sasuke is a tight ass he doesn't seem like he'd be the type

    to give it up easily.

    Thank you for not having crazy grammatical errors. I look forward to your next update.

    ~The Flame Reviews~

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  • From ANON - Jane_Lane on May 08, 2007
    If it wasn't for date rape I would never get layed?
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  • From ursweetheartless on May 08, 2007
    teehee, oh sasuke, kakashi IS right, you know, you DO need to get laid, you just have to get the right KIND of laid (believ it ^.^) Naruto, no no, the damage is done, the only way "the dagger" will listen to you is to find an Uchiha and sink it in, besides, remember the wonderful ancient wisdom here: Confuscious says, the dagger always knows whats best.

    oh kiba, your too soft. I would have made naruto suffer more before telling him, even if it WAS a mutually benifitial situation, everyone wins here, Kiba doesnt have to drag the drunk uchiha home, sasuke gets to vent, then shut up and take kakshi's advice (wishful thinking much?) and naruto, well naruto owes him a bajillion times over now.

    but still, i can't wait for a drunk sasuke to embarras the fuck out of himself ^.^
    p.s. you update like woah, keep up the good work, you're helping to make finals season THAT MUCH more bearable
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  • From feisu on May 08, 2007
    Yo.

    Interesting story, keep going. I hope you update soon enough :)

    ps: if you're "scared" to write smut, just read some stories and you get the idea... its not that hard :D

    see ya

    faith
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  • From Dream2010 on May 08, 2007
    Such cute adorable story. Love it.
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on May 07, 2007
    XD So he told Kiba his problems, eh? Nice. Please update soon!
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  • From ursweetheartless on May 07, 2007
    OMG that was SO kiba, and he's gonna tattle on Sasuke SO SO badly, but he'll probably make naruto suffer for the information first, just to get him back. mmm, naruto's wet dream was tasty, i so almost thought it was actually happening for a second, at the beginning, and i totally went off into delicious-lecture-hal-vouyerism land, because i can imagine sasuke getting off on that, then getting caught by kakashi or something, that would make me giggle (sasuke would be adorable, blushing and stuttering, trying to come up with an explaination ^.^)

    kiba and hinata are adorable together, i can totally see them together, being all blushy and cute, kiba can be remarkably sweet, and it strikes me as being IC for him for some reason. teehee. when you started on Sasuke being in the lab i had a vision of naruto popping in to the class, just to be schooled, even if he wasn't in it to begin with. i think kakashi would find that funny. i guess he did pop in in a way though, because he was all OVER uchiha's head. the boys are destined to be together, this IS slash fiction after all

    p.s. i prey to you for classroom sex at some point, that would be HAWT ^.^ *total fic love*
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  • From ANON - Nami on May 07, 2007
    All I saw was this sort of strange clothing and hair evolution for Sasuke while drunk. A strange and wonderful evolution. And... Naruto and Aka XDDD *dies*. My friend had a dog like that once... only he was a really old dog. A grandpa, really. But he'd hump just about everything. But but... that scene had me dying. Naruto's so... brilliant. And I'm not surprised that Sasuke knew. Running around in orange like that, you may as well try and spy on someone while toting a small elephant.
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  • From ANON - loC on May 07, 2007
    Oh the love I have for this fic why
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2007
    Dance Crack whore dance! LOL...and write more...it's entertaining ^^
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  • From ANON - Nanaka on May 07, 2007
    *snicker* That was great... hehehe... loved it! can't wait till the next chap.
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