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Reviews for Conquest

By : Adi

From ANON - Drago on May 05, 2008
“What is it Konoha-”

“Wanna fuck?”

Silence.

“Get. Out.”

I love this part.
Well. Actually. I love the whole thing. Like. From the first to the last chapter.
You're MASTER OF FANFICTION! *dies happily*
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From animeaddict666 on May 05, 2008
What a wonderful expose. I really enjoyed everything, especially dinner with the folks! Also, last chapter, when you were talking about "Look, shiny," as a distraction tactic for Kiba, I almost peed myself. Thanks for a great fic, love. It's been a bright spot in my day.

~AA666
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From RyuuOokami on May 05, 2008
Okay so now when the epilogue came out I was thinking that I should read the whoole story all over again. *grin* I even think I said that when the "last" chapter came out. *scratch back of neck*
Sadly I'm really bad at this reviewing stuff but since I really like your story I'm gonne at least try. Hehe.

*thinking* You know when Sakura is all like 'Sasuke is not gay. Geti it?' on Naruto in chapter one? That's what my sister keeps telling me about him. *sweatdrop* She just doesn't believe in SasuNaru. *shakes head*

Hehehe I love how 'the love of the Dagger' is "spreading" through Naruto's body. *snicker* Talk about denial! But a very... special kind of denial (after all, he does admit that his dick is in love *shakes head*). It's funny that they're both so horny and both want the other through th whole story but you don't even let them go at it at the end. *laugh* (that's NOT a bad thing, I think it was great that you left the whole seme/uke-thing open) I just really REALLY liked that BOTH of them was always thinking that they would be the one to top. *laughs*
And I think everyone who have ever read this story will forever like Sasuke-whore. *snicker* It just wouldn't be the same without him. He and the Dagger maybe should team up more?
Both Sasuke and Naruto are so damn stubborn through th whole story. And in denial, of course. But that feels more in character for them doesn't it? Hehe.

Naruto's relationship with Gaara is so hilarious. Actually, Gaara is hilarious overall but when the two of them interact I just can't stop laughing. I mean, Gaara really likes Naruto. He's a good friend and everything. And somehow Naruto can sense that and sees Gaara as his friend as well, even if Gaara is really bad a espressing himself. But he's really trying! With the "I will kill them for you" and everything. That's what makes it so great! That shows that he really cares for Naruto, but it's just so funny!
Ok, sometimes he doesn't feel all THAT friendly with Naruto (like when he shows up at the doorstep at 3am). But he still puts up with it! (Ok, so it's all because of his therapist and all that but I still have so much fun over their relationship).
"If this Sasuke couldn�t love Naruto, then there was something wrong with him, and he did not deserve to live." Gaara's a true friend! *water-eyed chibi* And of course the scene where Gaara is high on meds and has missed Naruto so much is absolutely great!

The part in chapter 4 when Naruto and Kakashi is having their little meeting. Kakashi's logic for taking up his book is so great. Hehehe. Green's a camouflage colour, all right? Hahaha.
"Although this was all very interesting, Kakashi saw the opportunity to continue reading, after all it would do Sasuke some good to have some social interaction."
I can really see him think like that. *sweatdrop* *laugh* I also find it incredibly funny every time he refers to Sasuke as "his cute little student" or "cute litte TA". *smile*

I having a lot of fun about the way you put in Akamaru, like when Naruto is pacing in the beginning of chapter 5.
"He had tried to explain to Akamaru that this pacing thing needed to be done alone, but apparently Akamaru had problems of his own, so Naruto let it slide."
My dog has actually given up on trailing after me when I am pacing. Hehe.
It's also very amusing every time the dog "change sides".

You know what? I think the 'day 5' in chapter 11 is my totally favourite part of this story. That whole day is just so incredibly funny, and somehow it feels like that day is a turn-point for the boys relationship. (and it can't go wrong when you let Naruto, Sasuke and Gaara all go bowling together *snicker*).

I liked your epilogue. It wasn't that "sweet" little ending. It was normal and realistic. They had problems. Of course they had! It's Sasuke and Naruto, they will always have some problems with each other. But I liked how you worked it out. The meeting between Naruto and Sasuke's family was all great.
And of course the ending was absolutely great.

Thankyou so much for a great story. I really enjoyed it, every part of it.
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From VRon8899 on May 05, 2008
ZOMG...that ENDING XDDDDDDDDDDD....good job konohamaru...lolz...I loved every bit of this btw...*amaaaaaazing* -sing song voice- The dynamics between Sasuke and Naruto were very amusing to read and you did an awesome job kudos!
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From zimcrazed on May 04, 2008
Ha ha ha your story was hilarious!!!! And sad... but mostly hilarious!
I use to absolutely ABHOR narusasu(it pains me just to type it) but lately i've been seeing the appeal in it. I'm having a sort of internal battle about it (yes, i realize how sad it is at how seriously I take my fanfiction). I partially blame this on the majority of sasunaru stories protray Naruto as some doe eyed damsil longing to be held and sheltered away from the world while the ever angsty Sasuke tries to whisk him off his petite little feet. I do admit I love the idea of Naruto needing someone, but he's a man for cripes sake! He's not some blushing little girl who's gonna piss himself at every loud noise!
..........ok, i got a little sidetracked...........uh, great story!
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From spoon10488 on May 04, 2008
awesome story!
=)
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From ANON - gwyllion on May 04, 2008
LMAO!!! The ending killed me! Very witty Adi. Very witty! XD I really enjoyed the time span you gave us on their relationship. They really are a strange pair aren't they. Now.....I must get into your pretty little head to see what you'll be up to next!!! >8) Once again, hurrahe and congrats on your ending!!! A year is a pretty long time! Such dedication deserve great rewards! *flings chocolate covered penises at you* XD
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From Aidiya on May 04, 2008
I totally love the way you did Gaara in this whole story, him watching Akamaru made me snerk. And I was worried for Naruto when he was going to meet Sasuke's parents, well I was more worried for him meeting Sasuke's father. I figured Mikoto would love him, but then they (Naruto and Fuugaku) got along after that awkward start I was so happy. Then only pun I could see would be 'the mission' where Naruto is bummed he can't sneak in like a ninja :) haha I suck. But you did a great job on the whole story. Take Care.
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From riddlestar on May 04, 2008
aww, a perfect ending..

and cricket? lol. i love you for that.
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From MichiTheThird on May 03, 2008
*star-struck* I'm dazed. I never even saw what hit me! Oh wait...wait...it was the much-anticipated Epilogue to Conquest! *swoons* You have no idea how much I absolutely ADORE you right now! And you've made me the happiest I have been all week long (I was horribly sick and later I found out that it was a virus that has been going around T-T ). I loved this story from beginning to end...the epilogue really did add to it wonderfully and I loved it so much, I'm reading it all over again! XD *scrolls down the epilogue* God, there were so many parts in here that I laughed for sooo long...I don't think I've ever laughed so much in months! I can't even pick out which parts were my favorite this time! I loved it ALL! Thank you SO much for making the epilogue! *tears of joy* And during the middle of exams, too! Much MUCH luff sent your way. And, for that matter, I hope you did ok on your exams! ^^" Enough rambling! Thank you again! It was a most wondrous, addicting, and humorous read all over!
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From sweetciel on May 03, 2008
Great ending! I felt closure ^_^ I'm looking forward to whatever you write next
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From ANON - xpyne on May 03, 2008
LOL ohhhhhh, i love this story!!! it's very funny and sweet and cute and still managed to have a plot and everything~♥ thank you for writing the epilogue! it really wrapped things up and made it that much more satisfying. :D :D and the ending!!! too funny! XDDD
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From charmpit on May 03, 2008
LOL I need to try that line on a guy to see if it works.

Thank you for the epilogue...I love you Adi.

Please write more fics!
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From serenagold on May 03, 2008
Hahahahaha!! The cycle almost begins anew!! (Of course, once Uzumaki returns, young Konohamaru will be way out of league in terms of competition! But still, funny ending!! ^^
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From ANON - tea on April 28, 2008
Yay!! They finally had sex!!

Sasuke should sooo be the bottom...though they can take turns later. ^_~

I want to read an epilogue!!!! A happy one with Sasuke as a rich, famous person who doesn't need to give the time of day to his family and having lots of sex with Naruto!!! (please *puppy eyes*)

Thanks for your story!!!
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