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Reviews for Conquest

By : Adi
  • From llyoung on September 21, 2007
    I love this story. Thanks for the update.
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  • From marquesgue1 on September 21, 2007
    XD hehe - first of all, I loved the bathroom scenes lool - first lee and then Sakura and then he got razors thrown at him that she'd been using to shave her armpits with - aww Naruto bless... but then he walked in on them loooooooool he just has no luck. KNOCK naruto KNOCK!!! Heh and Sasuke, feeling a little guilt were we? Well TOUGH LUCK you were mean!!! *sigh* but then it's Sasuke and he's always a jerk so what cna you do? He was trying though, lol can't believe he smiled, trying to use charm to get away with things I suppose cause Naruto was pissed. I loved how Naruto was just ignoring him and that he was doing really well in the supervision too! As Kakashi said, Sasuke underestimates him. GAI-SENSEI! XD in the spandex inside the lab lool, didn't say this on msn but i was drinking tea and almost choked on it (hope your proud of yourself) and then Naruto was all enthusiastic over it too until he got to the back XD heh, Sasuke's reaction to it was brilliant!!!

    It figures though, that it'd be Naruto taking the first step - again. Sasuke-teme *glares* he's so emotionally retarded. He should just listen to inner Sasuke cause he's the one who ahs the RIGHT idea heh

    Thank you for the update, as great as the previous chapters and more than enough to make sure we wait for more ^_6

    Hina xXxx
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  • From UzumakiLover on September 21, 2007
    HAPPY GAARA KICKS ASS!!!!!! omg i never laughed so hard and this line 'Naruto was now trying desperately to crawl away, if he was being attacked by some freaky alien human hybrid he needed to warn the others.' Wow I shouldn't have read this at work I snorted and nearly fell from my chair! At first I thought Naruto walking in on Lee was priceless but being glomped by a overdoesd happy gaara topped it! hehe 'he likes sunlight now...take him to the park'...its just what i need! great job love wonderfully funny!
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  • From ANON - animehead on September 21, 2007
    Day 3 was hilarious!!!!! actually they all were. Lee *snickers* please tell me you're going to make sasuke suffer! i don't think he's has enough yet. jealous sasuke is fun. gah! you're such a tease! i need more!!!!! *clings to mistress adi* i luffs you! and i miss you! you don't talk to me enough. *pouts* hahaha i kiba's great. all paranoid and stuff and not being able to tell neji from hinata's dad. *happy sigh* i love it.
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  • From ANON - lll on September 21, 2007
    Please, please, please make blood rush to other parts of Sasuke's body too >w<
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  • From FairyNiamh on September 21, 2007
    *curls up into a tiny ball* Lee... Sakura... naked... together... flexable... *sniffs* Haha where is you? Haha I is scared. Haha I has bad pikturs in ma hed... *Slap* Huh oh yeah, reviewing! I loved doped up Gaara! OMG you had me in stitches over that, he's was so... so... Kawaii! *hides doped up Gaara from everyone so I can glomp him later* I feel kinda bad for poor Naruto (and Kiba) *sighs* Maybe a non doped Gaara will keep him company. (The doped version is locked in my closet now.) Loved the update... well most of it hehehehe. Great job I look forward to the next. Ja Ne.
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  • From Dragon7 on September 21, 2007
    Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
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  • From Reyn on September 21, 2007
    Woooow! You update fast! You should give into all my demands this quickly XD

    Naruto's abandonment issues with Kiba had me cracking up, as well as the dopey Gaara. You should have included a bit where Naruto leads him around with a trail of cookies XD

    And awwww! Naruto makes such an awesome teacher!
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  • From Zrina on September 21, 2007
    I love this chapter!! Poor Naruto was scarred in so many ways... Nakie Lee, smexing Lee, Butt hugging green spandex Gai.. poor Naru-chan!!! Not to mention poor Kiba, lol. Talk about a neurotic Naruto!! You take his innate issues and have a field day with them in a way that is funny and entertaining! One almost thinks he is the more issue-laden one that Sasuke sometimes, lol. I like that the attraction between them is still burning whether they want it to or not. Now that they are forced to spend more time together, it is only a matter of time before everything combusts into some explosively hot smex!!!! /cheers for hot smex!! And I don't think The Dagger is going to let Naruto forget that there is a hot piece of ass just subliminally begging for it!!!

    Love the story and *luffles* on you!!!
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  • From Reyn on September 21, 2007
    (glares) How dare you make me read your story only to have it END on a cliffhanger! I demand you update RIGHT NOW. NOW! As in NOW now! (huffs)

    Poor Naruto! His life is slowly falling to shit.

    My favorite thing about the whole story is The Dog XD The way you have Akamaru incorporated into the story gives the feeling that his character carries weight with Naruto and the others. Just like Kiba would want it! He's not there as some prop to be included because he comes with Kiba. He's there as a character.

    Oo! Do you know what would be the most romantic thing ever?? Okay, so, Naruto doesn't realize he's in love with Sasuke yet, right? And you mentioned him thinking that if he loved someone, he'd share his ramen? (leaves the rest to Adi's devious brain)
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  • From ANON - pheobePINK on September 20, 2007
    nice!
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  • From Aidiya on September 18, 2007
    hey i just noticed something sasuke hasnt given naruto his shirt back yet. or has he and i missed it somewhere? aww wouldnt it be cute if he still smelt it every now and then :) im so happy for kiba too, but sad at the same time poor naruto's world is crashing down on him. ooo i was wondering if you were gonna have it so that gaara moved in with naruto as part of his therapy aahahaha poor gaara and poor naruto too going from kiba to gaara would be hard to get used too. hah! could you imagine the glare-downs gaara and sasuke would have if he ever tried to return the shirt and gaara met him at the door! haha anyway good job on the fic looking forward to reading more!
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  • From Kerrisa on September 14, 2007
    Yay for updates!! *dances* I missed this fic! =O But i'm glad you're getting pumped about writing it again =D I 'luuuurve' it lots! Sasuke's confused emotions/reactions and just all of Naruto keeps me wantin to read morez ^___^ But now Kiba is leaving =( Poor Naruto.. that "oh..." didn't sound enthusiastic in the least so imma concerned for him Update soon, yeah? I must know what will happen next!! D= !! Lol
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  • From Ashrey on September 13, 2007
    *Is in shock after reading the last part*

    How... How could you Kiba?! You're evil!

    But that's ok Naruto, you can either:
    1. Moved out from there to and move in into my house (I'll gladly welcome you dear!)
    2. You can stay there and I will move in with you

    And I can happily watch when you and Sasuke were having sex our simply make out in the house X3


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  • From OutOfLiine on September 10, 2007
    Um, make sasuke and naruto have sex fast or something with sasuke otherwise this fanfic is going down. you know im right. You'll loooose readers.
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