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By : Adi

From ANON - Miranda on October 01, 2007
woah, after reading other people's comments I feel like mine was so pathetically short *tries to hide it* Omg, I've been reading your fic all day though, I'm totally hooked! I'm SO glad I found your fic, it's completely amazing.

PLE~~~ASE!!~ I WILL GLADLY SERVE AS YOUR LIFE-LONG PERSONAL RAMEN CHEF IF YOU WOULD JUST PLEASE UPDATE SOON~~~!!!
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From ANON - Miranda on October 01, 2007
*sobs* Nooo~ it ended!!!~

Thank-you for writing! I LOVE this fic, please update as soon as possible!

haha, and I love how Sasuke has the Sasuke-whore and the Sasuke-ice prince in his head (especially the Sasuke-whore), OMG, hilarious.
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From ANON - Dicey on September 24, 2007
Am very very sorry would've totally done the review every chapter thing except the stupid website says I can only review once a day (the heck?) and I honestly couldn't stop reading! So I'll do my best to make this as long as possible. Ya know to show my gratitude and the like.

OMFG. ROTFLMAO! Goddam this is so bloody hilarious! I totally love your writing style and I'm seriously thanking whatever deities are out there that this isn't that oneshot PWP you originally planned. Cuz this is totally way way way better then that. Although if you still feel the need to write that by all means please do!! XDXDXD

I love Naruto!! He's so gorgeous! And I mean that in a cute adorable bubbly fucking hilarious personality he has. Cough. Dagger indeed. Every time he mentions it I totally crack up. This fic is seriously in the whole piss yourself laughing category. But it's not only funny it's fairly believeable for an AU and college fic at that.

Kakashi haha what a lazy arse! Sasuke is uptight but oh so sweet and seriously he needs to get laid. I LOVE whore sasuke and student sasuke fighting it out. Whore sasuke oughta takeover more!

Kiba and Hinata! Those two are so so cute together! I really love the friendship bt/w Kiba and Naruto and Akamaru is just crack up. I love how he and Naruto console each other. The howling thing was great too.

Sand siblings little as though they appear are great! Gaara as emo. Yep. Mos def. Haha but I do like how he's homocidal but still normal enough to get along with.

Poor Naruto's attempts at dating! OMG that peniuses meal had me totally cracking up. Jesus. Although if it was a chinese restaurant no ramen would be strange. Ramen is originally a chinese invention. Sasuke and the whole 'must eat. eat now' but actual quasi date... hehe CUTE!

This latest bombshell though... Man I'm gonna miss Kiba Naruto together! haha Kiba butt!!! But well if it's progress towards the greater good. And by that I mean Sasunaru smexing then all for it I suppose!!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I OFFER MY FIRSTBORN!! THIS FIC FUCKING ROCKS!
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From ANON - Dicey on September 24, 2007
That was a fantastic start! Haha Naruto articulate as always! Witty from the start this is gonna be a fabulous fic so OF COURSE you should keep writing!!! More while you're at it! Do hope there are hot lemons in there somewhere but otherwise and overall fun hard to get fic is just as good! More!
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From heardtheowl on September 24, 2007
NOOOooOOoOoOo!! Please say it isn't really the end! Please!!!! *crying on her knees* I'm sorry I suck so bad at reviewing! I love this story! Really! Please! *Uwahhhhhh!*
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From lexjamandme on September 24, 2007
Ahhhh... what?? The end? Like the END end or I'm done for the night but not forever end? Awesome story. Yeah, still confused by that word in... feel kinda fuzzy, confused... wait, I already said that.
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From ANON - Anaheyla on September 23, 2007
HA!

I've said it before and I'll say it again. This is some good shit.

Heheh, Naruto and Kiba prone to dramatics.

Even better, Gaara dopped up on crazy meds. :)

I DEMAND MORE!

Please?

Pretty please?
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From Mewa on September 23, 2007
AH! I reached the end of the last chapter! lol poor gaara! XD oh and i love the whole gaara wanting to go after akamaru that was funny along with doped up gaara. cant wait til the next update!! :D
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From ANON - Lila on September 22, 2007
I'm here for the cookies....Good stuff i'd almost given up hope on this story but it's back and it's still good...mmmmm......XD
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From ANON - Nami on September 22, 2007
..........*rooollling on the floor dying* It was... that was.... geez! Everything. Everything in this chapter made me die of joy. Lee.... LEEEE.... and Gaara.... GAARA. And poor figging Kiba XD. This fic makes me incoherent X).

...Sasuke's inner slut and The Dagger should be pen pals. They have many things in common. If they were running the show, sex would be here by now D:. But I can wait! It's interesting to see they're going the friend route. Can't wait to see how that shapes up.
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From Aidiya on September 22, 2007
I was laughing so hard my eyes started watering at the image of Gaara in Naruto's lap petting him. very nicely done, great chapter i love this story keep up the good work. :)
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From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2007

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From Allys on September 21, 2007
Hey sweetie that was cute!! LOL, I loved, LOVED the bit with Gaara XD *happy dances away with little hearts swirling about her head* Mmmmmnnn Gaaaaaraaaaa!!! I also really liked how Sasuke was all cute and shy at the end, LOL. So they're gonna be friends XD, I call that a step in the right direction ;), LOL. Poor Sasuke though, he's all starry eyed over teacher Naruto, *snickers* it figures responsibility would turn the bastard on XD. I also love the little bits w/ Kiba, Sakura and Lee, was laughing my ass off!!! You should update MORE!!! LOL *huggles you* I almost forgot how much I love this story *Adi pwns!!* LOL, just thought I'd leave you a real review XD.
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From ANON - Iroji on September 21, 2007
Oh my God, Gaara doped up on happy pills is HYSTERICAL. It kind of reminds me of that Simpsons episode where Apu's wife is taking fertility drugs and the entire town gives her extra doses, so she ends up giving birth to like 12 kids. Like I said, hysterical.
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From Chria on September 21, 2007
So far so good. Keep going. I love watching Sasuke's breakdown and his slutish voices. Yes, go for Naruto's smexiness. lol
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