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Reviews for Conquest

By : Adi
  • From losthimagain on November 13, 2007
    Amazing! Please update soon! I love this story!
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  • From Hellagoddess on November 12, 2007
    Oh HOLY CRAP Please update this soon! There's so many little things right with this fiction. I don't normally go in for the whole we're-at-school-and-not-really-ninja-at-all-but-I'll-still-do-you-Sasuke-cause-you're-freakin'-hot kind of stories but this one is really really well done! Honestly I'm trying not to laugh when i write this but the first time i saw 'The Dagger' I couldn't stop laughing. Like I actually had to sit back from the computer for a good 7-8 minutes and just wipe the tears of mirth away. Tremendously funny!

    I know it's hard to keep up with things like this when you're at uni and so forth (As I've also done the same), and especially if a story doesn't seem to be writing itself as well, but I would immensely appreciate an update! It doesn't have to be ridiculously soon or anything, but please keep going with this, you have an amusing style. I also like the relationship between Kiba and Naruto, really quite neat. The scene after Naruto locked Kiba in the bathroom and Hinata coming to break them up was really amusing. And Gaara is very well done also, most people have some kind of difficulty transferring him into an AU setting but you've done it well. I loved the chapter with him and Akamaru! Hilarious! Please update soon!

    Can't wait for Sasuke to move in either! *pumps fist in the air for Naruto* Go get his prissy ass, BOY!
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  • From Dragon7 on November 12, 2007
    This is a great story please continue writing it and post againg soon.

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  • From ANON - Timer on November 12, 2007
    I luv this story please update soon!
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  • From riddlestar on November 12, 2007
    yyaaayy! an update.. i really liked how you described itachi..hehe. hilarious. anyway, im looking fwd to the next chappie!!! cant wait~
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  • From ANON - Lila on November 12, 2007
    Alright i'm here to show some love...... Thank you for the wonderful update and i hope the next one is just as good.....XD i love this story it's so cool.....Anyway back to studying for me :)
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  • From NaoAngel on November 11, 2007
    OMG I loved the new chappie!!! I've been waiting for so long waaah, and I totally fangirled all over it. I loved it, I really did. the convo between naru and kiba on the phone cracked me up, but it was nowhere as awesome as seeing sasuke asking kakashi to stay at his place. LOL. poor poor sasuke, i was surely not expecting this and his father is a jerk. and I HATE Itachi, I hope you kill him, I hope he gets a hit by a car or something. rofl. OMG. you mentioned the Dagger which really made me happy haha. WHY IS SO DIFFICULT TO ADMIT THAT THEY WANT EACH OTHER???? LOL. the ending was awesome, even though it was an evil cliffie i still liked it. OMG SASUKE IS GOING TO NARUTO'S PLACE THAT MEANS LOTZ OF LOVE AND COOKIES FOR ME!!!!! meh. anyway, thanks for the update sweetie, it was great and worth the wait.
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  • From Kalico on November 11, 2007
    yes, yes...how many times have i read this fic and not reviewed? yo no se. But i think that it is high time, ne? Would you kindly update this fic soon? I am still reading it if no one else is...but i understand the college timing issue. i'm in the same boat and these fics allow me ample time to procrastinate. you will be supporting the cause if you do update. But right now, thanks to there being no more stories to read, i will have to actually do my homework. Anyway, until we meet again madam/sir...
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  • From spoon10488 on November 10, 2007
    very cool
    =)
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  • From ArwenES on November 10, 2007
    so it's going ok. good writing and everything and really humorous but i won't be reading anymore. is not my kind of thing when fics start of with naru/sasu and because the authors want to draw out tension the romance becomes much too slow and unrealistic. and then there's the little bits of naru/other people, because if u not going to have naru/sasu then u have to put him with somebody right? what i'm saying is these kinds of long romances only work when it's a sideline to an adventure when it's not the main focus. it only becomes tedious and irritating.
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  • From ANON - Anaheyla on November 10, 2007
    A POX ON THE MAN WHO INVENTED CLIFFHANGERS!

    Love the story Adi, please keep goin'.
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  • From ANON - delziax3 on November 10, 2007
    loved the chapter :D it was simply fantastic, and amusing too.
    can't wait for the next bit ^-^
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  • From ANON - chishio_rikka on November 10, 2007
    Yay an update! And it was so beautifully done. The explanations on how Sasuke was feeling. The humor, and Sasuke pervert. It always makes my day to read about Naruto and Kiba's relationship. They are definately a funny duo. I love your story. I hope you keep updating.
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  • From despairs on November 10, 2007
    lol this is my favorite line in the whole story...

    Sasuke-whore seemed to be squeezing the image of the blond, humping it at random intervals and then looking pathetically back at the true owner of Sasuke’s mind. ‘Gimme’ was written all over the little whore’s face.

    Altho the cute supermarket scene was hilarious. But that 'Gimme' comment gave me the best visual ever...loved it lol.
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  • From LadyWolf on November 10, 2007
    I will show you loads and loads of love **about to throw cookies*** IF you post the next chappie!!!


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