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Reviews for Conquest

By : Adi

From Gwyllion on December 15, 2007
LMAO! What a hilarious chappie! I can SO see Naruto scrambling his way around trying to multi-task. It's HARD! And poor Kiba....Castration is prob the best way to die than to face a Hyuuga... ;) You did a great job in this chap. Hilarious and cute in one package! And the ending!!! O__O Waah! You are cruel. :D Can't wait to read more!
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From purplelev on December 15, 2007
Tons of sympathy for you and Yay for the new chapter. I was hoping that they would move in together and I can't wait to see what happens next. Great work as always.
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From ANON - hina88 on December 15, 2007
Well allow me to review ^_^

Since this update was for me� *molests*

Thank you honey!!! *wraps herself around adi* I love you too and you�re always hot � ksss.

Anyway � okay review this chapter. Let me just say that despite requests for you to have them getting it on, I like the pace. There�s development in this and well that almost kiss was drool worthy! It�s making me all tense and making me want to see them FUCK! But the best thing about it is � that Sasuke leaned in. Yes that�s right. Sasuke Mr I don�t want you blah blah jerk � LEANED IN PEOPLE!!! That�s right and why didn�t Naruto take advantage because damn it he has pride to!!! And also because lol if I were him how would I know that wasn�t just some joke before I got rejected again. SASUKE TEME! There�s only so much rejection a man can take so now you have to seduce Naruto into YOUR bed hehehehe *rubs hands* can�t wait.

Oooh but adi >.< Gai�s balls� ^_^;;; was that really necessary to etch that into our minds :s but I loved how Kakashi was just being a pain! And neji XD heheh I�d love to have seen him scrubbing that toilet� with an apron and nothing else, bent over basically asking for someone to shove something up that hole�.

Err� ^_^�� got carried away

Anyway thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!! >.< *glomps*

hina xXxx

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From charmpit on December 15, 2007
tch. I'll hump you.

As soon as Naruto gets to humping Sasuke.

How many more chapters must we all wait?
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From ANON - Kami Kaze on December 05, 2007
YAY! I'd totally missed the last update, so I'm stoked now that I found it XD I love this story so far! Please update soon? *puppy eyes*
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From Ashrey on December 05, 2007
♥ Uwah! Sasu whore! the adorable little bastard showed up again! ♥

Ah this certainly unexpected turn XD I can’t imagine if both of them will be flatmate! It will be disastrous (in a very perverted way XD).

And the scene with Chiyo-baa is really funny, especially when she faked her death and saying that Naruto had an admirer and then run away with the ramen cup XD (and it proofed that Sasuke is more important than ramen in Naruto’s mind X3)

I really love this chapter, it’s really good and nice, their relationship developing in a very nice way~

Keep up with the good work and good luck in Uni!

Ash ♥
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From Glorial on December 03, 2007
lol, Naruto is so dense sometimes. Yes, Naruto, Sasuke-teme wants to live with you and jump your brains out. XD

The Dagger and Sasuke-whore are a very nice humorous touch. They should "talk" together since they seem to have a mind all of their own. I'm sure they'll get along more than fine.

When you had Sasuke reject Naruto, I wanted to kick him for making the blond lose his pretty smile. >_< *not gonna make me hate him, Adi!*

If someone deserves a good bitch slapping though, that's Itachi. I so wish I could strangle him! You had me whoop when Sasuke stood up to his father and Itachi was certainly not happy about it.

Sorry for the lame review, but I'm not really good at them :(

Can't wait to read more! soon *coughs*
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From ANON - lila on December 02, 2007
I love you�re Gaara loved
I imagine him telling Naruto "kill him"
I was a little disappointed do I wanted Gaara
to kiss his chick or forehead or lips jejeje
I know is a sasunaru but Gaara was so cute
acting all happy and glompin Naruto CUTEEE!!

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From ANON - Rasengan22 on December 02, 2007
weeeee what the heck was that one person talking about with gaara or something? wasn't that what someone said? aaah confused. i liked this chapter. this is probably one of my favorite chapters of the story, adi. it was really funny and well written and i was equally amused by sasuke and naruto's povs. and naruto angsted so little, and he was just normal. and i was super proud of sasuke standing up to his father and then (haha) having to move in with kakashi. i enjoyed naruto's reflection on his and sasuke's relationship. i really respect that naruto listened to what sasuke said about giving him space. he gave sasuke space and also how hd dealt with the rejection was really realistic. he still had feelings for sasuke but at the same time, it hurt a little to hear that sasuke wasn't interested.

and oh how sasuke comes crawling back. but... he's not being an ass about it like ooh i'm sasuke, i'm above apologizing so i'm gonna act like an ass and expect you to know what's really going on inside my head and that i like you. no, sasuke wants to talk to naruto. the scene in the grocery (omg do you call a grocery cart a trolley over there? as i think of san fran trolleys and all that) store was hilarious. with chiyo. no one ever uses chiyo but that was a great way to ease tension and it was just so naruto and so amusing mahahaha and chiyo faking her death (again) haha... except she is dead... boohoo.

that was hilarious though and i'm glad sasuke got to see it and how chiyo was like "you have an admirer" haha and sped away with the noodles and naruto didn't even notice. there were just so many things to like about this chapter. and their conversation was so nice and normal and I loved how Sasuke just... wanted to talk to Naruto but I can see why. Naruto's just so warm and easy going but he has a serious side.

Ahaha and Sasuke had the balls to say he needed a place to live? OMG that's so awesome and poor naruto is probably like huzzahwhat? I'm not so sure he'd think it's a good idea... but he does conveniently have this room available...

sasuke whore was funny too... humping naruto's image at intervals. ahaha. you have a funny sense of humor that also frightens me a wee bit. i'm glad they're getting along but i do like that realistically they sort of stayed away for a while. i hope they don't move too fast as i like the realistic pace but yeah i'm not opposed to fast-paced either. but don't let anyone rush you into bootysmex.

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From ANON - zhem1x5 on November 25, 2007
Adi!!!!

It was so good! I must have more! I should have giggleraped you over on y! but I thought I should give you some love here too. *loves*
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From ANON - bloody_rose500 on November 22, 2007
OMG I just finished reading your story and it was so cute and funny. ^_^
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From Reyn on November 21, 2007
Now it was whisker marks stretched across tanned cheeks. The idiot was still taking up residence in Sasuke�s mind. Sasuke-whore seemed to be squeezing the image of the blond, humping it at random intervals and then looking pathetically back at the true owner of Sasuke�s mind. �Gimme� was written all over the little whore�s face. The youngest Uchiha resisted the urge to sigh dramatically as he pinched the bridge of his nose.

That bit really appealed to me. I�m loving the mental image XD

There was silence on the other end of the phone.

�What?� Naruto grew a little worried as Kiba made no response.

�How gay are you exactly?�

LMAO!! That was great!

�Nothing nothing, so was it nice?� Naruto placated as he crawled back into bed. Well if he wasn�t getting any at least Kiba wasn�t either.

�I�m not telling you!�

Adi, for the sake of all that is holy in yaoiland, I am BEGGING you to watch Gravitation. Buy it, download it, find it on youtube, borrow it from somebody for all I care, just WATCH it! You will LOVE it, I promise! You may not understand why I�m singling out this line and ranting about Gravitation, but if you WATCH IT, you will finally realize how badly this line takes me back and the barrage of Gravi one-liners now flying through my head.

�But�� Naruto�s eyes went wide as Mrs Chiyo�s form stilled and her eyes went glassy. �Mrs� Mrs Chiyo�?� Sasuke watched as Naruto�s eyes turned a deep stunning blue.

Naruto waved his hand in front of her face and no response. He knelt down quickly, almost afraid to touch her, his face millimetres away from hers.

�Boo!�

Naruto�s face turned bright red and Sasuke�s smirk widened. �Mrs Chiyo! That�s not funny!�

I totally agree with Naruto! I think I�d DIE if some old person did that to me!!

A/N: Show me a little love?

(humps the Adi)

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From kataru on November 21, 2007
Is asking for the next chapter means showing of love?
no?
Then consider it. @_@v
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From MichiTheThird on November 16, 2007
'You know the birds and the bees? Well sometimes two bees get together instead'

LMFAO! Oh gosh...I don't know why, but I found that line insanely amusing and couldn't read past it for a good 10 minutes of laughing.

'Yes! Lets move in with him, when he�s sleeping we can sneak in and fuck his brains out!'

YES! Good boy! Go ahead and do that!
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From ANON - Kayo on November 13, 2007
This story was simply amazing. The character development is great, the humor had me laughing all night, and it was simply so well written!!! This is the best fic I have read in several months. So much of it was just great! (And funny) Like Kiba and Naruto on opposite sides of the bathroom door, Sasuke navigator, "The Dagger", Sasuke whore's antics, Kakashi, Gaara (OMG, Gaara's thoughts!!!), and just so much more. But there's a good balance too, between the serious and the not: Itachi and Sasuke and the general Uchiha family relationship, Sasuke staying true to his personality, the whole thing between Naru and Sasu (and how they don't just give in immediately to each other, etc. Overall, it's just so fleshed out, the story is awe-inspiring and striking. Bloody Fantastic! Keep up the excellent work!
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