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Reviews for Lord of Tokyo

By : DismalAbstract
  • From DaemonSadi on May 20, 2007
    Oh god oh god. What I wouldnt give to be that lucky little Naruto. Pleas contiue with the story as quikly as posiible especialy with the two cocks ups his ass stuff (my own little fetish for almost any character).

    Ps: I think this has made me the wettest ive been in ages lol.
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  • From ursweetheartless on May 19, 2007
    mmm that was gorgeous, i felt like you went slower this time, and didn't rush things as much. i loved this chapter to bits, but then again i am TEH ita/sasu/naru whoor so it was probably destined in the stars to come out like that anyways, there really isn't enough of THAT unholy trinity in the world, and anyone who adds to the precious ita/sasu/naru stockpiles of the world deserves a shiny metal of valor and accomplishment. and maybe cookies ^.^ *total fic love*
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  • From Kurotsuki on May 19, 2007
    *checks nose* I almost got a nosebleed there.

    That was SO HOT!!! *droolz*

    I can't wait for the next installments. XD
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  • From on May 19, 2007
    I don't much care for Ita/Sasu but damn. That was hott. I can't wait till Kimi shows up. I really want to see how that goes. hehe. Great update. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From on May 16, 2007
    I love it. That was hot. I love your taste in pairings.
    There are so not enough of Ita/Naru and Kimi/Naru.
    I can't wait to read more. Update soon please.
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  • From yaoilover07 on May 06, 2007
    THIS IS AN INTERESTING STORY. I CAN"T WAIT TO SEE WHAT ALL THE GAMES ITACHI HAS IN MIND ARE.
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  • From Nekoastrid on May 06, 2007
    >,< damn! that all thats floating through my head right now.....your my new fav itachi/naruto aurthor! I love your bondage fics! to very smexy and graphic! much love! can't wait to read more!.

    Ja ne!
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  • From Finnel on May 06, 2007
    =^-^= that was soooooooooooo very hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I can't wait for the next up-date!!!
    luck!

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  • From ursweetheartless on May 06, 2007
    omg, that was awesome, and hot, very hot. i may have a certain bias though, because i have a soft spot in my heart for the ita/sasu/naru triangle, and any combination of the three gets me rather excited in the first place. then there was use of nushi, probably one of my favorite words in the japanese language at the moment, i like the idea of owner, master, lover, and god being aspects of the same, theres something poetic about it. add in D/s and metions of an ita/sasu/naru in the future and im hooked totally. there were some spelling mistakes, or rather words confusions in it, but thats not important in the end, because those are things that can be totally fixed at a later date. the story has a great premise and direction, and it flowed well, which are the important parts, and your voice is rather enrapturing. things were a little bit fast in some parts, but that was mostly in the sexual encounters which can be hard to write really, so that is also not something to be hung up on. also, i believe the ritual of sharing sake is a little more literal, at least in this close of a situation, and the disciple would drink from the oyabun's cup directly, cementing their bond as family. i know this can be a squicky concept for some people, but i always found the near incestuous quality of that relationship to be a a naughty sort of good.

    anyways, im going on much too long, so i will shut myself up now, may your muses be kind, and may you find the time to update soon, because im stuck on this, and i really want to see what diabolical plans itachi has for his poor little naru-chan ^.^ *fic love*
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