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Reviews for Art and Artifice

By : vanessaclarke
  • From ursweetheartless on May 07, 2007
    mmm, first of all, i have to say i am a totall ita/naru whoor, especially when Sasuke wants in but can't quite get there. i love sasuke, don't get me wrong, i can't seem to write naruto fic without putting him in, but he's a right bastard, so i also like to see him get a good bit of cummuppance now and then (okay, so i enjoy seeing sasuke unhappy and in pain, but you only hurt the ones you love, right? ^.^) and he really IS being quite the jerk right now, even if it comes off, to me at least, as being a whole lot like pulling little girl's pigtails on the playground, a horribly shy way of acting on his feelings, even if he hasn't come to terms with them yet.

    and itachi, well itachi is being a smooth, "uchiha-perfect", smug, cunning bastard, even if he isn't heartless and crazy, which i would say is pretty IC for him, because he is THE hardest naruto character (beside maybe SHika) to keep IC, at least for me anyways.

    in short, i loved it all
    i hope your muses are kind and we hear more from you soon
    ^.^
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  • From on May 07, 2007
    That was so cute! You do Itachi really well. Im glad he talks more too. Great update.
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  • From Envi on May 07, 2007
    mmmyeah, i liked them apples. But seriously, i love the plot for this story and i'm just itching to read more DX< I think you managed pretty well on Itachi's less insane and more humane personality, i LURVED it. I really hope you continue to work just as well as you have the previous chapters. Good luck! I shall review your arse another chapter!!!
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  • From anapana83 on May 07, 2007
    Ahhh *sigh* Finally they meet! This chap was fantastic. It's so easy to picture Naruto blushing at someone as intense as Itachi is. You're right, Itachi isn't easy to write for, but you are a doing great job. This is fantastic. I can't wait for the next chap. Good job!
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  • From Mar on May 07, 2007
    omg, loved it again, this thing just keeps getting better and better..
    well, i suppose we could say that itachi will be coming home next weekend as well, and that sasuke will be completely pissed off!
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  • From on May 07, 2007
    I really didn't get into it until he met Itachi & that part was awesome. There's something about Itachi that I really like in this fic. He's still the same confident Itachi that I like but more vocal. He also doesn't come of as arrogant like Sasuke.
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  • From Mar on May 07, 2007
    ok, seriously, when I started reading the chapter I thought it was good and doubted it could get any better. But is stayed awesome till the very end. I love the way you make Haku and Naruto interact. And the way you keep Itachi strangely in character.
    So congratulations!

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  • From DismalAbstract on May 07, 2007
    Love you. More chapters please! Great story and hope for some Ita/Naru soon! Love this pairing! XD
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  • From on May 06, 2007
    Haha that was totally awesome. They finally met. yay. I love Itachi. Naru-chan is so cute when he's blushing. hehe. Great update.
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  • From DarkRainFiend on May 06, 2007
    Oh I like it a lot! I love Ita/Naru pairings and there aren't a whole lot of uber good ones out there. This one promises to be excellent. Loved the chapter.
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  • From DirewolfLilith on May 06, 2007
    -bounces excitedly- this is such a great read! every time i see this pop up as updated, i jump on it faster than a dog on a bone... or is that a fox on a fan??? hmmm... oh well... im so excited to see what happens next!!!
    -direwolflilith
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 06, 2007
    I've just read this story and I love it! I really like your Haku. I'm glad you're writing ItaNaru, since there aren't a lot out there. Xoxo.
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  • From Sancta on May 06, 2007
    Yes I love those apples, and how it is all coming along. Can't wait to see where you go with this!
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  • From Gingitsune32 on May 06, 2007
    OMG!!! I love this chapter!!! Thanks for getting this chapter out so fast. I love the way that Itachi is showing his interest in Naruto. ItaxNaru forever!!! :D

    Sasuke is such a spoiled brat and even more so in this fic. I love the fact that Kiba is being 'redeemed' as he is trying to be his own person.

    Love to see more. Great job!!!
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  • From anapana83 on May 05, 2007
    Great chap! Is our blond gonna get some attention here with the photos taken of him since Ino might enter them? And will Itachi see them? Maybe i'm just going on a rant but i'm excited to see how this is gonna go! Everyone needs to see how great Naruto is, don't cha think? Especially the bastard Sasuke. He needs a psychologist. Great chap.
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