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By : vanessaclarke
  • From Gingitsune32 on May 11, 2007
    I hate Sasuke. Did I mention that? He's such a superficial bastard in this fic. Argh! He's going to find out Naruto is Kyubbi and do a turn around cause he's hot. People like that make me sick. I do hope that Naru ends up with Itachi in this fic. Sasuke would probably be too afraid of the parents' and peer's disapproval to be gay. Argh!
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  • From DismalAbstract on May 10, 2007
    Another hot chapter... But I feel like it eventually needs smex... I agree that it could wait to the end, but still... Smex would be nice! O_O;;
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  • From Mar on May 10, 2007
    these last chapters have been buiding up quite nicly
    i really like the style you write n and the way you present stuff, though i think i must've told you this like a million times before, i cant help but feel it's just getting better and better each time you type something!
    and i agree with you taking it slow, to do stuff fast now would ruin everything you've got untill now.
    The way you describe things (the art the kiss)is realistic and strong.
    you've done a suberb job!

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  • From anapana83 on May 10, 2007
    This chap was wonderful! This reminds me of my first kiss actually. Reading it, i could feel Naruto's excitement. And i agree about the smex part. The relationship between those two should make a gradual progression. I don't see Naruto going at it with Itachi after one date, especially considering how shy Naruto is, and how willing Itachi seems to be to court him. Very well done. Now i wonder how Sasuke will feel about this.....
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  • From on May 10, 2007
    Omg. That was awesome. They are so cute together. I love it. Great update.
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  • From Envi on May 09, 2007
    ....Wait. 'Ntill. Tommorrow?!... I'll be counting down the hours then! And to be honest, i didn't notice the different spellings in pyjamas/pajamas... XD Love Sasuke's reaction to Itachi going on a 'date' with Naru-chan and i have to say, i really, REALLY, enjoy Itachi's less homicidal and insane personality for this story. Keep up the good work and i look forward to reviewing ya later :3 good luck!
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  • From anapana83 on May 09, 2007
    Aww this chap was cute! And props for Itachi for not taking any crap from Sasuke. I can't wait to see what'll happen on thier date. Nice job.
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  • From llyoung on May 09, 2007
    Just wanted to thank you for the very frequent updates. I really enjoy this story.
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  • From on May 09, 2007
    They're just on the first date & Itachi is getting possessive already. I think thats really hot. I can't wait to find out how Sasuke is going to retaliate finding out about them. Thank you for the update.
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  • From on May 09, 2007
    Oh I can't wait to read about the date.This story is awsome!I love every bit of it.Well except that Sasuke is a bastard.But anyway,keep writing with the same spirit and I'll love you forever!
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  • From emp78 on May 09, 2007
    I loved Sasuke's reaction. lol. That customer seemed to be a bit upset to lose out, too. Can't wait to see what happens on their date.
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  • From DismalAbstract on May 09, 2007
    I love you for updating so often! Update... more... I LOVE THIS STORY!!

    PS: Is there going to be smex? O_O
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  • From anapana83 on May 08, 2007
    So Kiba and Hinata huh, how cute! I'm also excited that Naruto has something to be excited about. I hope Itachi will call him...and i hope Sasuke will stop being such an ass. He's totally repressed lol.

    There's one small grammatical error i noticed , where i says, "You don't think that's a stretch?" Naruto asked sceptically. It's skeptically. Other than that it was all great. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From llyoung on May 08, 2007
    Just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying your story. Thanks for writing.
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  • From Gingitsune32 on May 08, 2007
    ItaxNaru! ItaxNaru! ItaxNaru!!! Love the interaction between the two though there wasn't any of that in this chapter. Can't wait till the end of the year exhibition so that they can see how hot Naru is actually!!!
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