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By : vanessaclarke
  • From anapana83 on May 13, 2007
    Hahaha! I loved that chap! Actually i went through s similar situation where the guy wouldn't give up. And the more i was sarcastic and shot him down, the more he kept trying. It has it's amusing moments, that's for sure. As long as Itachi keeps his on the situation then it should be all good...right? Great update.
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  • From llyoung on May 13, 2007
    I'm still really enjoying reading this story. I love the character interactions. Thanks for writing.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 13, 2007
    Ha, I'm sure most people wouldn't agree with your cute image:D My high school years actually weren't too bad, it was middle school that sucked. My high school was actually pretty awesome. It was a special school, hard to get into and pretty much everyone who went there was a dork or a weirdo or a nerd, just basically the kind of kid who'd get their asses kicked in a normal school, so I fit right in:D It was actually middle school specifically that made me pick my high school despite it being like an hour plus away from my house. I pass the school everyday on my way to work and it still makes me cringe 8 years later. But anyways on to your story.

    I liked the new chapter. Sasuke is more persistent then I think most would give him credit for. And not that he'd keep coming back but that he wouldn't decide to turn into a bit of an asshole because Kyuubi wouldn't give into him. And I'm glad that Naruto told Itachi, can't wait to see Itachi "handle him accordingly". And I can not wait until the big reveal and to see Sasuke's reaction to Naruto, and of course his reaction to the fact that he already lost to his brother. Hee

    And I would love to see more than Raidou figure it out. Though if they did do anything that might give Naruto away because why else would they want to kick his ass so bad. Hmm... can't wait for your next update.
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  • From on May 13, 2007
    Lmao. I love how Kyu's so sarcastic and Sasuke just keeps coming back for more. lol.
    And Itachi's is so sweet to Naru-kun. They're so good together.
    Great update.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 12, 2007
    You know I wasn't going to read this story at first. I've been having a lot of trouble lately finding a story that can hold my attention from the beginning of the chapter to the end, and I just figured this would be yet another story of that type. But every time I saw the summary I just felt so curious and I finally decided to read it and I'm so glad I did. I actually signed in to review your story, which is only something I will do with stories that I love. On that note, when I do do that I usually add a little note that you can enable anonymous reviews if you don't mind accepting them. I think you go to 'Edit profile' in your control panel and there's something there that will let you do that.

    I love it and I loved it all the way through. I didn't find my attention straying or myself getting bored. I read from ch. 1-11 without feeling like shooting myself. I love Itachi and I love Naruto and I even love how much an asshole Sasuke is because it's going to be so good to see him get his. I dealt with people like that in middle school. I was the dorky girl with the nappy braided hair and the glasses, who was quiet and always had a book with her. People used to just get on me, and not just the students but the adults too. Blah, bad memories go away. Anyways I just can't wait for Sasuke to get his, I will love it.

    And I can't wait for him to realise that this person he's been tormenting and teasing is the same person that he's now got a bit of a crush on. And I find I wonder if Naruto's going to tell Itachi about Sasuke jumping at school with orders to stay away from him. Naruto doesn't strike me as the type to give in to threats, but I wonder if he'd be worried enough to mention it. And what Itachi's reaction would be. I would love to see Itachi kick Sasuke's ass.

    I do have one question though before I end this review. There was no initial reaction, but did the guys at the tattoo shop recognize Sasuke. I figure since they recognized Itachi's name they should recognize Sasuke's. And also since they look alike. I can't wait for the next chapter to see reactions, if they will be there.
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  • From anapana83 on May 12, 2007
    I loved this chap! Score one for Naruto...or actually, score 2, he does have Itachi after all. Either way, way to go blondie!!! I like the way this story is going. It makes it so much fun. Good job. *thumbs up*
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  • From Gingitsune32 on May 12, 2007
    Well......I try my very best to treat everyone equally. Sometime it's really hard. We need to all remember that everyone is an individual human being. Some are just smarter than others. Some are prettier/handsomer (is that a word?). Some have more money. Beneath it all we all have the same needs, wants and desires.

    This is why Sasuke's behaviour makes me so mad. I really hope to see Itachi end up with Naruto. :D
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  • From on May 12, 2007
    Sasuke gets snubbed by Kyuubi. That is so coll. Then Sasuke was thinking about flaunting him to Itachi when he gets him. That would make it so much sweeter when Sasuke finds out that Kyuubi is Naruto & that he is already dating his brother. Double shocker. I absolutely love it.
    This is one of those reason that really make a lot (but not all) sasunaru so boring. Love triangle is just so much more exciting when it's between brothers.

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  • From DismalAbstract on May 12, 2007
    Another super chapter. I can't wait to see more Ita/Naru!

    Keep up the great work! XD
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  • From on May 12, 2007
    Lmao. Naruto totally blew him off. lol. I can't wait to see Sasuke trying to get Kyu, and finds out he's Naruto. Make him look like a total ass. lol. Great upddate. I loved it.
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  • From Iori on May 11, 2007
    I really, really lie this fic. I'm a sucker for well written ItaNaru and intersting ideas. I like how you're shaping this up and I will be watching it.
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  • From DarkRainFiend on May 11, 2007
    Oh boy. I can't wait to see what happens when Sasuke-teme shows up at Shuriken. Maybe Raidou can break his arms instead? It'd be funny as hell to see him tossed out on his ear as soon as he stepped foot in the building.
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  • From anapana83 on May 11, 2007
    Oh man! The next chap is gonna be crazy aint it? Sasuke is gonna be red in the face when he puts two and two together. He's the dobe. Anyway, great chap. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From emp78 on May 11, 2007
    Everyone (including Sasuke) is drooling over Naruto. WIll they find out that Kyuubi and Naruto are one and the same when Sakura goes for her tattoo? Keep up the good work! This is a cool fic!
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  • From on May 11, 2007
    I can't believe Sasuke told Naru-chan to stay away from Itachi. The little prick. lol. I can't wait to see what happens when he shows up at Naruto's work. Great update. Loved it.
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