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Reviews for Art and Artifice

By : vanessaclarke
  • From llyoung on May 16, 2007
    Thanks for another interesting chapter.
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  • From anapana83 on May 15, 2007
    I enjoyed this chap so much. You know Sasuke is gonna turn 6 shades of red when he realizes what everyone else knows except him. Any way rate, he has it coming. Now he can live th rest of his life knowing that the boy he's been taunting AND trying to hook up with also gave him the tattoo he know has lol. Great update.
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  • From DismalAbstract on May 15, 2007
    No diminished quality that see. Moving a bit slow this chapter but it's great development for Ita-Naru relationship. Hope to read more soon!!! LOVE YOU!
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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 15, 2007
    Awwww yay, I'm so happy things are going good for Naruto and Itachi. Despite Sasuke's attempts to screw it up from two different directions (though he doesn't know that).

    And GO HAKU!!!! I loved that. I know Naruto might have wanted him to stay out of it but there's only so far you can hold yourself back when it comes to someone who you really care about. You know I've now added Haku to the list of people I'd love to see kick Sasuke's ass, or Zabuza, if Sasuke decides to mess with Haku. That would actually probably be hilarious to see. Sasuke badgering Haku and then all of a sudden this huge dude appears out of nowhere. I could see him peeing himself if his arrogance wouldn't hold him back from that.

    I loved the sculpture scene. It was... nice :D Kind of made me think of the scene from ghost where Demi Moore's working the clay and Patrick Swayze comes up behind her. Both very nice scenes :)

    And now I end this because I have to go to work soon and I want to rest a bit first. I can just imagine how much crap I have piled up considering I haven't been to work for about 3 days.
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  • From Letalis on May 15, 2007
    I really, really like this! There aren't enough good Ita/Naru stories out there - at least very, very few that do not focus solely on the angst of it all. I commend you! Keep it up and update soon!!!!!
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  • From on May 15, 2007
    I love the "if that's the only way i get your hands on me" line. It cracked me up. Poor Sasuke's getting desperate. Great update.
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  • From llyoung on May 15, 2007
    Love your story. Look forward to reading more.
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  • From PassionHeart on May 15, 2007
    I hate you and love you ..this has made me so happy...I am a Naur/sasu all the way but i may change my POV its almost painful...I may have to go for both....your so good update soon
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  • From DismalAbstract on May 14, 2007
    *Droooooollls* all over the keyboard... MORE MORE MORE MORE! MORE MORE MORE!! Amazing! I can't wait to see er... read the description of Sasuke's face when he finds that little Naru-chan is Itachi's all the way!!! YAYYYYY!!! Thanks for the daily updates, you rock!
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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 14, 2007
    This is the best birthday I've had in awhile. A bunch of my favorite stories update, I got to see Spiderman with a friend I haven't seen in awhile (and she's getting married). Good day, day.

    And a good chapter to go along with that good day (Chapter 14 updated on the 14th, hee:D) Anyways, please excuse my dorkiness. I loved this chapter. I love Haku and Zabuza together, and I love that image of them on the dance floor with Zabuza just standing there looking cool:D

    And Naruto and Itachi are official!!!! *Squeals* Though I do want to make one correction, something that kinda adds a bit of a... odd twist to a sweet scene:D "Itachi allowed him to control the chaste press of lips for the first moment or two before wrapping both arms around the boy's waste..." It should be 'waist' not 'waste'. Waste gives me a whole 'nother mental image that's a bit disgusting :) But outside of that, awwwwwwwwwwwww... and then along comes Sasuke to ruin the moment.

    I truly can't wait until the big reveal :D And I can't wait until your next update.
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  • From on May 14, 2007
    This story is absolutely awsome!Even if I haven't reviewed every chapter,you should know that I read it.I wait every day patiently to read the new chapter,because I love this story!I wonder when Sasuke is going to find out that Kyuubi and Naruto are the same person.I can imagine his face *giggle*.Keep up the good work.
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  • From anapana83 on May 14, 2007
    I LOVED this chap!!!! This is one of those rare stories where each chap seems to get better and better and BETTER every chap. Very good job. I'd be swooning if i was Naruto myself. It's nice to see Itachi happy as well.
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  • From Gingitsune32 on May 14, 2007
    Naruto and Itachi are together yay!!! Itachi is such a fast one yeah? *winks* Can't wait to see the progression of their relationship. :D I'm so happy for both Naru and Itachi :D

    Haha I can totally see Haku and Zabu together :D

    Be waiting patiently for the next chapter. You're amazing and I love you!!
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  • From on May 14, 2007
    Yay. They're offical. That was so sweet.
    Sasuke's so clueless. lol.
    Great update.
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  • From on May 14, 2007
    I know I'm sadistic in that i want Sasuke to be thoroughly shocked but with the way the story is going i'm starting to feel bad for him. The very sexy Itachi Uchiha is the only one who is going to make me forget about Sasuke. I really want to see more interaction between Itachi & Naruto.
    Thank you for the update. I don't know how you do it.
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