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Reviews for Art and Artifice

By : vanessaclarke
  • From on May 18, 2007
    Sasuke sure doesn't take rejection well does he? lol. I feel kinda bad for him. But he's still a prick.
    The story's almost over? wah. I don't want it to end. It's too good.
    Will you be writing another? cuz if you do I will definately be reading it.
    hehe. Great update.
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  • From sorryprpkitty on May 18, 2007
    No! Nooooooo! There has to be mooooooore! I usually hate to rush authors becuase you can't rush genius but I HAVE to read more!!!!! I love the fact that you stay so true to the story (even though you keep holding me in suspense but I guess I'm kind of a masochist too!) And your right I hate it when the story has a good plot with a really good potential but then they screw it up by completely changing the feeling from intense to mushy! I hate mushy unless it's in small doses. Like the cute moment that Naruto has THAT I love! It's so funny and just like me and my friends. I really love your story and I can honestly say this is THE first Naru/Itachi story I've read that's not a smut and is REALLY good! Ahhhhh I'll try to patiently wait for the next chapter......big emphasis on TRY!^^
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  • From on May 18, 2007
    Oh my gosh.
    I actually only joined just so I could tell you how much I FUCKING LOVE this story!!!
    You should be very proud because I don't nomally do this :D!
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  • From EternalAutumn77 on May 18, 2007
    In all honesty...words simply cant describe how much I love this story !
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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 18, 2007
    Awwwwwwww, I actually do kinda feel a bit sorry for Sasuke. I know it sucks when you build yourself up for something and hope that it turns out well and then things just kind of crash and burn. And Sasuke really does seem to be putting a lot of effort into it. I think it's one of those attracted to someone who's real even if in their realness the insult the hell out of you kind of deals. I guess it stands out to someone who basically has the equivalent of a bunch of Yes-men in their lives. Personally I can't see how having Yes-men would be attractive to start with.

    And poor Naruto. You just start to feel sorry for Sasuke then he goes and does something like that. That was just cruel. I can imagine Itachi won't be too happy with him for that, if Naruto tells him. Or Haku. I can imagine Haku won't be too happy, and now that he's decided to he won't stand back anymore I would love to see something happen with him and Sasuke. Could be interesting :) Reminiscent of the series where Haku wipes the floor with Sasuke
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  • From Gingitsune32 on May 18, 2007
    P.S. I'm actually trembling with anger now. Great writing to invoke emotions in your readers :)
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  • From Gingitsune32 on May 18, 2007
    Sasuke is sick. I really can't wait till he realises that the guy he is bullying like s*** is actually the guy he likes.
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  • From Gingitsune32 on May 17, 2007
    So now Kiba knows. LOL can't wait to see Sasuke's reaction when he finds out! I wonder is that happening at the school art fair??? I wonder......love to read your daily updates!!!! :D Hehe I was worried when I didn't see the chapter earlier.
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  • From anapana83 on May 17, 2007
    Alright! So Kiba knows now huh. Wait....so Itachi's family is gonna go to that art thing and Itachi's going with Naruto...so does that mean Sasuke's gonna be there? Whats going on? Great chap.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 17, 2007
    I loved Kiba's reaction:D I'm glad he could see the ironic humor in the situation, it's quite full of it. And I can't wait to see how Sakura will react. I can see her being a little bitchy about it at first, then being more friendly after she got past the surprise.

    I also can't wait to find out what Naruto's painting is of. I'm imagining something to do with Itachi. I can't wait for a lot of things in this story, I'm glad you update so often or else I'd have to cry.

    I must say I wish I could see the pictures that Ino took. I know they're just in the story, but as an amateur photographer I find myself really wondering how they'd turn out. I imagine they'd be awesome, especially in black and white.
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  • From emp78 on May 17, 2007
    Is Sasuke going to find out Naruto is Kyuubi at the art show? Can't wait for your next chapter!
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  • From on May 17, 2007
    Lol. Naruto finally got caught. I love Kiba. hehe. I cant wait till Sasuke finds out. Great update.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 16, 2007
    Well this chapter definitely did have a sense of foreboding about it. Itachi goading Sasuke might not have been a good idea. Now I find myself worried by what Sasuke's planning. I hope it isn't going to be something that might screw up Itachi and Naruto's relationship.

    Though it could be leading to the big reveal. Is it leading to the big reveal? That would be cool. I really can't wait for that. But I must say I can understand why Naruto doesn't want to. It does feel safer that way, especially when dealing with people who make you uncomfortable.

    I'm like that at work, and really around most people in general. Though for me instead of a physical disguise, I have a more personality oriented one. It feels safer hiding yourself, but it's probably better to be honest and true to yourself.

    But back on topic, I really can't wait for Sasuke's reaction. And not only his reaction but Kiba's and Sakura's and others that don't know that he's both. It will be interesting to see.
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  • From emp78 on May 16, 2007
    I liked it; it builds up the story. Fleshes it out. Don't worry if there's not a lot of angst, action, smut or whatever. Write it the way you want it. Uodate soon, ne?

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  • From anapana83 on May 16, 2007
    Ahhh..insight into Sasuke's mind. Contrary to what you said, i enjoyed this chap alot! Now i find myself kinda sympathizing with the bastard. Also i'm highly interested in what he did...do we have a little budding writer here who remains unaware of the possibility? That makes me a little happy or excited simply because i'm an aspiring writer myself. At any rate, i hope Sasuke doesn't do something utterly foolish. However if it's something so shockingly good it'd make things ohh so tantalizingly complicated and awesome then that'd be great! Even though im totally rooting for Ita/Naru of course, there's a part of me that wishes Sasuke would show his true self instead of being such a jerk all the time in front of others. What i wonder is if he'll still feel the same way about him once he realizes who it's been all this time. I'm also curious to know why Naruto really doesn't want to say who he is...even for Itachi's sake. Anyway, that was a long enuff rant. Good job.
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