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Reviews for Art and Artifice

By : vanessaclarke
  • From on May 20, 2007
    OMG FINALLY! GOSH SASUKE IS SUCH A MORON!
    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
    I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!
    *breath*
    Oh man this is the only thing that keeps me going through my exams!!!!
    CHEAAAAAAH!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 20, 2007
    You probably wouldn't believe this... but I check this place daily just to read ur fics.
    I TOTALLY ENJOY IT. Thanks. I will check again tomorrow.

    Btw, I kinda feel sorry for Sasuke. I don't think he's all that bad.
    Maybe a little spoilt.

    Anyway, thank again for letting me read your fic.



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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 20, 2007
    OMG YOU SUCK!!!! How could you end it there? I swear cliffies are the 2nd bane of my existence, authors always seem to discover them at the worst points in the story. Just when we get to the big reveal, damn it. You suck :'( And we didn't even get to see Itachi and Naruto make up

    You'd better update bright and early tomorrow, or better yet at midnight or something. I wanna see what happens now damnit, now.

    But on slighter brighter note, YAY Sasuke finally knows. And we finally get to the big reveal. And we get a little more insight into why Sasuke picked on Naruto so much. I guess it is a lot easier to be cruel when you don't feel like the one your being cruel to is a honest to go human being who has feelings and emotions and people who love them. It's like a lot of people say if someone kidnaps you, one thing you can try is to start talking them about your life and your loved ones and introducing them to you as a person that they have to see as a person. Maybe Naruto shouldn't have kept silent so long.
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  • From ANON - selenia on May 19, 2007
    Hey! Although I've started reading this story since chapter 3, only now am I getting off my lazy ass to review it..
    SORRY! I enjoyed the first chapters, but as it went on, I got so hooked up! Fluid writing couple with an interesting plot and well-fleshed characters make me weak in the knees, and you added surprising twists to known characters such as Sasuke, like the cherry on top of the cake. ^_^ Amazing how you managed to juggle his bully attitude without falling into downright bashing, specially on the last chapters, where his personality starts to come together more (and this last one... *squee*
    All in all... Thank you for giving me such pleasure in reading Art and Artifice.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 19, 2007
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Damn it, how could you? I don't want Naruto and Itachi to fight. Naruto's supposed to say 'okay Itachi' and Itachi supposed to gloat and then kick Sasuke's ass :'( But now they're fighting, and Itachi'll probably kick Sasuke's ass anyways just because he's pissed that what he did to Naruto caused them to have their first fight (and I wouldn't be surprised if he let it slip who Naruto really is). I just hope the making up's good. It had better be *glares*

    But more seriously, although he is pissing me off I still feel vaguely sorry for Sasuke. He really seems to like Naruto, at least in a slightly less than superficial way. And he is a screwed up dude, obviously. Hopefully he'll turn himself around somehow and things will turn out well for all three of those involved. And Naruto and Itachi will have a lot of nice making up :D
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  • From Qiana on May 19, 2007
    Their first fight
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  • From llyoung on May 19, 2007
    Still really enjoying your story. Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - dar on May 19, 2007
    I love it!!!! but now i needa next chapter!!!! I wanna read the next chapter!!! I guess that means I hafta wait, but definitely it would be a treat if you did a two chapter update!!! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Arrielle on May 19, 2007
    Woot! I love this! ^_^
    ((I wanted to review before but I'm way to lazy to actually get an account))
    For some unknown reason I had this fettish with Naruto/Itachi one day and thankfully I found this! It's great! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Mikra on May 19, 2007
    Finally! I've been wating since the first chapter to review. And now that you allow anonymous reviewers I've forgot most of the stuff I wanted to say, typical. *sigh*

    Well, I really like this. The way you portray the characters is wonderful. I feel for Naruto, having been picked upon until I got accepted to Upper Secondary School of Visual Arts xD The only difference between me and your Naruto is that I decided to fight back (not literally, but with words) and eventually they got tired of it (or grew up I don't know).

    So yeah, I love the fic. The chapter where they went to Kisame's gallery inspired me to paint and I don't usually paint more than one painting every three years (too time-consuming and I'm just lazy). Haku is so cute and I want to smother Itachi. Sasuke is such a blind bastard that I'm amazed how you manage to make him so human despite everything. Great really.

    Just so you know, you have one hell of a fan here waiting for your next update :)
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  • From anapana83 on May 19, 2007
    Stupid, stupid, stupid, and did i mention STUPID! What in the world was Sasuke thinking!!!! Bad Uchiha. Served him damn right though. And Itachi...as much as i'd like to rant on him, i don't blame him. I wouldn't like anyone kissing my boyfriend either. Still, he could've had a little more tact. Obviously Naruto was already distressed. Poor guy. He just has too big a heart really. I hope both Uchihas can see that. Great chap.
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  • From cutsycat on May 19, 2007
    Ok. You totally can't leave it like that. You need to get writing and finish this story. Hopefully, Itachi will come to his senses and apologize to Naruto and Sasuke seriously needs some help. Maybe he'll at least decide to apply to a school for writing and leave Naruto alone.
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  • From on May 19, 2007
    Poor Naruto :(
    I hope there not angry for to long :(
    *sob*
    x
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  • From emp78 on May 18, 2007
    Why is Sasuke so persistant in harassing Naruto? Is it because he hides his face and doesn't speak in public? Besides the fact that Itachi is now dating Naruto, is Sasuke just frustrated that he can't get a rise out of the blond?

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  • From anapana83 on May 18, 2007
    WOW. What a crazy chapter!

    And seriously, poor Sasuke AND Naruto. But still, SASUKE needs to feel like two kinds of shit when he realizes who he's done this to. I can't imagine Itachi happy about Sasuke having done what he did this time around to him either. Not kool. Anyway, update soon!
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