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By : vanessaclarke
  • From ursweetheartless on May 22, 2007
    hahaha, oh sasuke, you deserved to be taken down that couple of pegs there, im surprised itachi-kun didn't do it sooner really. all the more power to naruto for never kicking him in the nuts, even though he royally deserved it (not that im sure we all wouldn't have enjoyed THAT *is innocent*)

    ^.^ good show. there's more, i hope?
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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 21, 2007
    I'm feeling a bit off, and tired, and just plain out of it so this won't be a very long or good review. So sorry

    I'm glad that Sasuke finally knows. And his reaction was good, shows that he isn't completely unsalvageable. The fact that he was relatively mature about it, that he didn't have a tantrum upon finding that Naruto was Kyuubi and that he basically had no chance shows that there's hope for him yet.

    I can't wait to see Naruto and Itachi making up. And I can't wait to see Naruto and Sasuke's first meeting after Sasuke found the truth. And also everyone else's reaction to Naruto and also I wonder if he'll wear his hood anymore. Though I guess school is over?

    Anyways I can't wait for the making up and for your update tomorrow. And of course to see more of Haku, because I love him:)
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on May 21, 2007
    *dreamy smile* That's so sweet... Awwww man, they're so cute together.

    I love the way Sasuke acted in this chapter! Especially with the whole desperatino to see 'Naruto's face XP.

    I sent you an email about the pics! YOU'RE SO AWESOME! I hope one of them has Naruto with his nine-tails tattoo XD. I'd love to see some of the tattoo designs...

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Tsubahime on May 21, 2007
    Thanks very much for the story. It's a great character study, particularly of Sasuke.

    However, I'd particularly like to thank you for updating it so frequently. You have no idea how annoying it is when fanfic writers abandon their stories, or take six months to update them. Or perhaps you do know how annoying it is...
    Anyway. It's just fabulous to have a responsible, dedicated person who doesn't leave readers in the lurch. Although I have to say that I would have accepted a weekly update, the daily update was a scrumptious treat!

    THANK YOU!
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  • From ANON - b on May 21, 2007
    this story is SO COOL! i've never squealed that much :D
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  • From ANON - lalalaOUT on May 21, 2007
    I love you. xDDDD OMG, I'm obsessed with this story!!! Poor Sasuke, I hope everything in the end will turn out great... For everyone... I love your writing stylee, it keeps the reader into the story without getting bored one bit! And it's easy to understand. ^_^ May I draw for you?? You have scenes here that caught my attention, and now it won't leave my head. >_> Hey, send me some pics! :DD [http://lalalaout.deviantart.com]
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  • From Vague on May 21, 2007
    Hello Author,
    I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

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  • From anapana83 on May 21, 2007
    Yay! Way to go Itachi! This chap made my day. I'm glad Naru and Itachi made up. And Sasuke...well, like i said before, he had it coming. He certainly needs to suck it up now. That last paragraph or two btw was very well done and thought out. Sasuke fucked up bigtime. Great chap.
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  • From perfect_blue_rogue on May 21, 2007
    haha!! it's bout time sasuke realizes his mistake. and now he knows he has no chance in hell with naruto! good for u itachi!
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  • From trystkinkou on May 21, 2007
    AWWWW... so sweet! Not the confrontation I was looking for with Itachi and Sasuke, but as he said better to let him stew a bit. ^_^ Very good.
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  • From DismalAbstract on May 21, 2007
    I love it! Sasuke finally knows what a bitch he is! YAY! And Itachi got the stick out of his ass too! Double yay!

    Can't wait to read more! Luv you!
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  • From on May 21, 2007
    Yay. they're back together. and Sasuke realized he's an ass. lol. great update.
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  • From anapana83 on May 20, 2007
    WOW, this is the best chap yet!!!!!! I was freakin out! Naruto is in for some emotional roller-coaster ride. And i really hope that Sasuke won't hurt Naruto anymore. And shit, Itachi is in the mix too! I wonder what he thinks of the pics Ino took of him. Can't wait till tomorrow!
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  • From ANON - Feion Phylar on May 20, 2007
    I never thought this would happen but I'm really starting not to like Naruto. He's coming off very Ooc in a girly way. I mean the real Naruto would not have given a shit and would have probably blown it right in the open right after that stunt Sasuke just pulled in the alley. Okay, I know for story purposes he kept his mouth shut and it was entertaining in the begginging. Now it's just getting plain frustrating.

    Not to say that Itachi had any right to say what he did of course but Naruto's own actions doesn't quite fit for me. Not only that but all that stuff about ruining Sasuke's family is junk. Itachi never said he was going to beat Sasuke to a bloody pulp. He just wants Naruto to tell the truth so all this drama can stop. It's Naruto who's making this out to be some big family issue and if he hasnt already noticed, it's getting worse with time.

    But yea...good chapter since I got me soo grrr. But I'd like to see Naruto more...Naruto. I feel like some of his FIRE is missing from these past few chapters. Lets see how this goes...
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  • From Vex on May 20, 2007
    I *love* this fic!
    You're doing an awesome job, please keep updating.
    =3
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