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Reviews for Art and Artifice

By : vanessaclarke
  • From ANON - sadistickiss on May 24, 2007
    Holy falafels O_O you wrote a chapter a day!? I didn't know! I thought you had written the entire thing out and decided to post one a day to keep your readers happy. OMFG! My respect for you just shot off the charts O_O... I was in complete, utter awe before - and now... now I'm just gonna POKE you for being so god damn TALENTED! HOLY CRAP! ONE CHAPTER A DAY!!! You are amazing. And they were amazing chapters too. Oh god. Beyond amazing. You... *speechless* ZOMG MARRY ME!!!

    This fic was really awesome. My head's kind of messed up from the awesomeness and I can't come up with the correct adjectives so you'll have to forgive me (but still OMFG! YOU'RE SO AMAZING!!! ZAAA!!!). I know I've mentioned before that I absolutely adore how you portrayed Naruto's character, and I REALLY mean it. In the manga, when he's in one of his 'moments' I look at him and I think, "Dude... I wish I could be like him" and that's how I feel reading your story. He was just so... noble and forgiving. Stubborn, yeah, but you made him so... so cool.

    And Sasuke. Okay, well, I'll admit, he's a pretty sucky guy in the manga, running off to Orochimaru and almost killing his best friend, but he's Sasuke and I don't think anyone can really HATE him. But this had me getting pretty close. It had me fisting my hands next to the keyboard thinking, "GET THE HELL AWAY FROM NARUTO!!!". So, it's not really that big of a surprise that your scene with Naruto being so nice to Sasuke about his poetry was absolute breathtaking. It made me feel giddy XD. I really liked that scene! One of my favourites!

    Itachi was definitely too cool XD! Though, I admit (I'M SORRY!) I thought he was especially cool in the beginning, when they had just met -*snicker* probably because he was more mysterious.

    And you awesome, awesome, WONDERFUL author, you drew us art for the fic. Just... Just *LOVES* AHH!! You should rule the world, you should, mm hmm *nods*.

    Oh gods. I've written too much. And it's all post-fic high mush. I LOVE YOU! AND YOU SHOULD NEVER EVER STOP WRITING! BECAUSE YOU TOTALLY ROCK AND AHH YOU'RE MY FAVOURITE PERSON! Congratulations on such an great job! Thank you SO MUCH for sharing it with us. *SNUFFLES* ZAILOVEYOU!!!
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  • From ANON - jess on May 24, 2007
    hooooooooooooooooooooooooooot!!!!! *jumps up and down with joy* wonderful smex scene... *sigh* itachi and naruto are so yummy together! and the prom scene was sweet... but wow. thank you so much for that amazing fic! i love love love love love it! truely awesome! *BIG HUUUUG* thank you a million times over *kisses8 i love you!
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  • From ANON - Mars on May 24, 2007
    Oh My God!!!! That was so good...I just read all 22 chaps today they were so Fing good lol You did such a great job...and I bow to you for doing it all in 22 days, YOUR AWESOME!! You wrote it so well (at lest to me) its was like watching it to me lol!

    Thank You For Writing This Story ^^
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  • From emp78 on May 24, 2007
    *stifles nosebleed* The wait was long, but so worth it! Way to end the story!
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  • From perfect_blue_rogue on May 23, 2007
    -laughing- god that was so romantic! and naruto sure did show his school to look underneath the underneath! -pumps a fist in the air enthusiasticly- go itachi/naru! long live it forever! lol. sorry couldn't help myself. the ending was very funny too.
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  • From anapana83 on May 23, 2007
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. Sniffles.


    That was soooo touching. I feel complete! Hehe. You know, that was one of the few stories were hardly any smut was involved and yet it was quite good and reading it was all worth while for that one scene at the end. Very nice story, very good job. :)
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  • From ANON - masako on May 23, 2007
    that was beyond cute and i loved it. thank you for writing the story and being so fast with the updates.
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  • From cutsycat on May 23, 2007
    Hey, I really liked this story and would love to see more. Is there any chance of a sequel? You know like e of Itachi and Naruto in college and all his new friends and enemies?
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  • From on May 23, 2007
    YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!
    *clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap!!!!*
    Very Impressive!!!
    And a little smuttiness to finnish it off!
    BRAVO!
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  • From on May 23, 2007
    Aww. That was so awesome. I can't believe it's over. *wipes away tears*
    The lemon was hot. And the ending was so sweet.
    Thanks for the fic! It was really great. I enjoyed reading it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2007
    Awesome story. I loved it,you really don't see enough Itachi/Naruto fics. I and probably the rest of your fans would love it if you did a sequel, especially one with some scenes between Haku and Zabuza, but it's just a suggestion. You did great and I agree with your thoughts on people taking forever to update, but you didn't so good on you.
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  • From DismalAbstract on May 23, 2007
    SMEX!!! HOT JUICY SMEX! Great ending and lovely way to round out their relationship! Are you considering maybe a little sequel or something or just a follow up one-shot?? Either far in the future or them in college together. Like Sasuke at the end, 'bout time the teme shaped up.

    Can't wait for your next story! Love this one to bits!
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  • From ANON - defangel on May 23, 2007
    Hey! Thank you for sharing this fabulous story, I absolutely loved every minute of it and I'm really sad to see it end, but you know what they say, all good things must come to an end. anyway thanks again for sharing and I'll definitely be looking out for your works in the future.
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  • From llyoung on May 23, 2007
    That was a beautiful end to a wonderful story. Thank you for writing.
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  • From ANON - jess on May 22, 2007
    holy shit you are amazing! aaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!! so good! really, i am grinning like an idiot! i am so happy and giddy and this... you... ahh! truely fantastic, your writing never wavers... thank you so much for writing such an ingaging, intense, fun, romantic, hot, sad but mostly wonderful story. itachi was so cool and i like that even he could make mistakes... but it was totally awesome when he threw sasuke off of naruto! he and naruto are completely adorable together! and sasuke's realization at the end was very well written as well, i could feel his sinking guilt and fear and depression. wheee! thank you again, i really love it! I hope that this is not the end and that there are more chapters to come because I would love to read more of this happy happy joyful story! *BIG HUG* i love you!!! ^_^
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