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By : vanessaclarke
  • From on May 05, 2007
    Hehe great update.
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  • From emp78 on May 05, 2007
    Well written; loved the image of Naruto and Kenji nose to nose. So cute. Looking forward to next update.
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  • From Genderless on May 05, 2007
    Mostly in scenes like this, it tends to degrade into thinly veiled porn or the like, so it was refreshing that it stayed professional and concerned with aesthetic value, not sexual.
    Kenji is sweet, and I really liked the comparison you brought up, especially that you made Naruto brighter than Kenji – I know there are other blondes in the show but Naruto’s hair is practically yellow, so I think he’s in a league of his own. It’s always fun to have Naruto interact with Chibis.
    But, what are the consequences of this?
    Just 24 hours (or so) to go!
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  • From Mar on May 04, 2007
    hehe, you wrote itachi amazingly well, good enough to make sasuke view him as the bad guy while really sasuke's just being a brat

    thnx for the lovely fast update and the part where kiba actually helped naru up. oh and i cant wait to read about those pics ino's gonna take!
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  • From Genderless on May 04, 2007
    I like your Itachi; I don't know if it's what you were aiming for, but the hostility with Sasuke seems mostly one-sided - as in Sasuke's angry/mad at Itachi so Itachi's condescending back.
    I'm really glad you wrote a nice Kiba - I don't like it much when authors write some characters one-dimensionally-mean to fill the 'posse' void. But I suppose as you already said, they all have the chance to be redeemed and that I adore! It's one of the things I've always loved about the series, how Naruto gets to people and changes them.
    It's a really cool juxtaposition, the way Naruto’s all quiet and secluded in school, but outside he's open and friendly, and the ripples of his effect on people bounces back to his time in school.
    Man, do you update well! Usually I'm waiting ages for updates on the better fics - even regular ones - so it's nice that you can be so timely with your chapters.
    Anyway, please keep writing…I actually suck at cooking, but thanks for the complement and pics would be awesome.
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  • From DismalAbstract on May 04, 2007
    This is a great story and so original! I love Ita/Naru!!! MORE PLEASE! XD
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  • From DarkRainFiend on May 04, 2007
    I absolutely love this fic! I liked Itachi's intro...it made him seem like less of a bastard which I always like, especially in an AU story. Hmmm...I'm sure you plan to have Kiba realize Naruto is Kyuubi ne? Plenty of ways for that to happen, especially the way you ended this chapter. It'd be funny if Kiba had overheard Ino calling blondie Kyuubi. I can't wait for the photo session. Has Ino seen Naruto's tattoo? If not, that's gonna be a helluva big surprise.
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  • From Mar on May 04, 2007
    i love love love it, naru is such a good guy and you've put him perfectly in this context, as for sasuke... welll, hehe, he;s always been kind of a prick, so you wrote him well! I cant wait till itachi makes an appearance, you got me soo wraped about that

    please update soon!
    i really love what you've got going on here
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  • From emp78 on May 04, 2007
    Like this fic. Is Ino's photo shoot going to center on the kyuubi tattoo, once she sees it? Man, that would be so cool! Anyway, update soon, 'kay?
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  • From Genderless on May 03, 2007
    Ahh, there are so many possibilities in this story! I really do enjoy reading how everything pans out, and even though some might not like the innocuous things that happen in the chapters, I really enjoy finding out that bit much more about the characters; of course, it could all be relevant and just not apparent yet. But either way, I’m really looking forward to more.
    Please keep writing.
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  • From anapana83 on May 03, 2007
    Yea true lol. The Sasuke thing was funny....but still, poor Naruto. Anyway good to know he and Kiba get along. Anyway, can't wait to read more!
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  • From on May 03, 2007
    Aww Kiba's a nice guy.
    I wonder if he will find out Kyuubi is Naruto?
    Great update. Please continue.
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  • From on May 03, 2007
    This chapter was good.Sasuke is a big meanie here(kinda hate him) I hope that you will update soon again.
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  • From Envi on May 02, 2007
    Kyyaaaahhh
    I lurve this story, hell, it already seems like it has a really good plot flowing and i can't wait to find out what happens next, you know! Keep up the great work and i look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From Neonsrequiem on May 02, 2007
    I love your idea! Even though character bashing is bad, I am a bit tired of reading fics where Sasuke is horrible to Naruto and ends up with him in the end. I really look forward to your next chapter ^__^
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