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Reviews for Slave no Jutsu

By : Animefanatic31
  • From ANON - ninfan on May 01, 2007
    the story is good so far but how aobut the more girls he used the justu on the more they start to think as one person u no like the start to get a cloletive mind i mean the still are sepreat people but the first slave becomes like the head mind that thinks for the others when it comes to there master
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  • From Blizzardfang on April 30, 2007
    yo keep it comming
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on April 30, 2007
    Why not make this into a Naruto harem... Then he could be happy while the fox is just a lust filled demon and a bad demon in general... keep up the writings
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  • From ANON - jayman (too lazy to sign in) on April 30, 2007
    Loving the story. As for your decision I have to say a bit more on the angsty side. Does Naruto deserve some loving after his troubled life? Of course, but let's not forget this is still against a woman's will. The kyuubi is obviously looking to take comlpete control of Naruto. So I suggest a comfrontation between Naruto and the kyuubi. Then if you wish to go fluff you can have Naruto win or compromise with the fox, or go darker and have kyuubi win or be defeated only to leave Naruto to leave Naruto to the fate of the girls and the townspeople. Whatever you do I'm sure it'll be good.
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  • From ANON - John Doe on April 30, 2007
    Pair all the girls off and have them serve Naruto forever. You should add some older chicks and some girls that are already dating some other guys to show his corruption.
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  • From ANON - Darksaber's Naco on April 30, 2007
    great job.... want more! fluffy ending please with naruto hooked up with as many woman as possable! he desrives to be happy!!!
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  • From holyknight on April 29, 2007
    No fluffy or angsty...more like a grey ending.....Naruto becoming more jaded
    and criminal like...while "silencing" those what tried to rattle him....and
    dominating some women....it would be "soo sad" if Shikamaru and Shikato had an
    'accident'....and Naruto had to 'console' the widowed Yoshino Nara...what would be
    so 'glad', of support him when the election of Rokudaime comes in the future...
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  • From Fenrir on April 29, 2007
    This is good. So the next girl is Ino, what about Anko?, everyone knows is a freak. How Tsunade, Shizune? Put up your next Chapter.
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  • From Jin on April 29, 2007
    Please, no angsty ending. Although the means don't necessary justify the ends, there's no doubt in my mind that Naruto deserves this after all the hardships he's suffered. I prefer that Naruto get a fluffy ending in this story. Oh, and great work on the lemon. Very erotic. Update soon!

    P.S. Is Temari going to be a part of this? Or maybe Ayame? God I hope so!
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  • From ShimekirixnoxSeken on April 29, 2007
    I love your story, just wished you could do a little more detail into the lemons! And I say you pair them off, Naruto ending up with Sakura, and the rest someone else, cause Sakura deserves Naruto alone, with nobody else! Sorry, NaruSaku freak!
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  • From RacerX78 on April 29, 2007
    I say fluffy-bunny ending or whatever as long as Naruto as his harem, it would be cool Kyuubi would be a chick and get her in the jutsu.

    Get ANko, Kurenai, Shizune, hell even Tsunade. Temari definitely
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  • From ANON - BKepel on April 29, 2007
    I'm enjoying this story! I'd personally like to see a fluffy ending, where things work out for everyone. It doesn't seem reasonable that Naruto's morals would allow him to keep up a jutsu-enforced slave harem forever...

    But of course if you weren't going for any sort of realism and just wanted to make it a smut-fest I have no problems with Naruto enslaving all the females in the village and then some... (I would just bemoan the waste of a good story opportunity) :P

    Keep up the good work. It's always nice to see some well-writing het stuff on AFF.
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  • From ANON - Tleilaxu on April 29, 2007
    SWESOME! Have him do the slave jutsu on Sasuke later on, and if I may request that Hinata be spared... Oh another twisted idea, have him do it on Kyuubi LOL

    Tleilaxu
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  • From TwinEnigma on April 29, 2007
    Shameless smut addict and lurker that I am, I profess that your story has compelled me to dispense with lurk and review.

    Very sexy story here and I like the fact that Naruto still has some moral hangup to what he's doing (if mostly ruthlessly squelched by his hormones and the meddlesome fox).

    As to how it should end - I say go for the angst AND a final fluffy resolution. BTW, did Naruto ever memorize the way to RELEASE the (sex) slave jutsu?
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  • From ANON - Raver 7 on April 28, 2007
    Not bad this is becoming a vary insteresting story, and as for your little thing on if the end should be an angsty one, or one thats some what fluffy I say you might want to go with it being some what fluffy because if you look at it Naruto has had enough crap in his life and he needs some thing really good to happen to him when you look at it.
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