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Reviews for Slave no Jutsu

By : Animefanatic31
  • From NightRage on May 05, 2007
    Cool! This is amazing. Finally, there will be a Kage Bunshin gangbang! And one more thing, please, do not put Kakashi/Sakura here. It scares me. Even though it looks hot, it still scares me.

    Anyway, please continue!
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  • From ANON - Boo Boo on May 05, 2007
    Kyaaa... Kage bushin action!!! lol, I like sakura best
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  • From ANON - mel on May 04, 2007
    Really good story! I like the fact that Naruto finally gets to be happy with Sakura. (I never could stand her obsession with Sasuke) I also think that you could write a Kakashi/Sakura fic using the justsu ( I just love Kakashi/Sakura) Naruto/Sakura is my second favorite pairing. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - T.O.B on May 03, 2007
    i think that hana should be one of his girls,or his bitch,and he rides her doggy stlye,and maybe anko as his whore,and mayb he should make his woman lesbians to

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  • From ANON - Ri100014 on May 03, 2007
    Yo.

    Very hot story youve got running here. The thought of being able to sleep with all the women of your fantasy without any consequences is appealing... yet the utopian dilussion should hit a wall sometime. By what you've said most of the reviews want a *excuse my bluntness* corny fluff ending. I guess I'm the only one who wants angst. Build up the passion, the lust, but Naruto should eventually have to pay for his pleasure. He raped them after all. Its as simple as that. Some small part of them might have enjoyed it or even wanted to fuck him, but he still took the decision out of their hands. He needs to face the shit. Hope he does. But I figure you'll go with the crowd. I'll still read, if only until the conclusion starts appearing.

    Till next time... adios.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on May 02, 2007
    I seriously love your story. Please keep up the great work. I hope your next work with have a certain pearl eyed Hyuuga heir. If any one beside Naruto deserves love it's Hinata and heaven knows what closet perverted ideas pop into her head (she turns red as a tomato just looking at Naruto.) I hope the next one has Naruto, Sakura and a Slave No Jutsu confidence boosted Hinata in it (you can even put some spanking in it.) And I love the idea of a happy ending for our favorite fox boy but maybe with all the girls having fun out of it too. Well like before please in the name of Naruto keep up the great work.
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  • From RacerX78 on May 02, 2007
    Heh I'm a fan of spanking also, well if I'm doing the spanking XD.

    Anyways nice turn out of the threesome, but I still hope it ends up being a harem. But if you're going to choose I say threesome of SakuNaruIno being together in the end. Ino needs some happiness and she seems to be getting it from Naruto so that's fine.

    I hope no Hinata. but your story.

    Well update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ladynaye on May 02, 2007
    Hinata should get a piece of this action!! She has loved Naruto for years. And Naruto wouldn't even NEED to use the Slave No Jutsu on her!
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  • From ANON - Tleilaxu on May 02, 2007
    Hmmm How about the girls get free of the jutsu but they finally find out that Kyuubi was the one that forced Naruto to do it... or something like that. Yes I think Naruto needs his "cherry blossom".
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  • From Jin on May 02, 2007
    Holy crap this is hot! I can't wait to see what else is in store for us. Spanking, eh? *giggles perversly*

    Still hoping for a fliffy ending. So far I don't see the girls needing revenge. He's doing a good job...taking care of them. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - alex on May 02, 2007
    loved it keep it up
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  • From ShimekirixnoxSeken on May 02, 2007
    Once again, I say happy ending, where Sakura remembers but likes that it was Naruto in some strange way! NaruSaku! And Ino in Shippuuden doesn't act like that, cause she's nicer in Shippuden, but it's your story! And thank god it doesn't work on men, that would just turn me off!
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  • From ANON - Raver 7 on May 02, 2007
    Well as I said before things are really getting insteresting.

    When I was reading this it reminded me of some other stories that go by the name of Master PC on a site that goes by the name http://www.mcstories.com/, and one story on mediaminer.org that goes by the name Master PC Ranma 1/2 quite insteresting you might want to read them some time they might be able to give you some ideas when ever you need them.

    After saying that it makes me wounder what would happen if Naruto got his hands on a Master PC, and what will he do with it?

    O by the way not bad work, and you don't need to keep saying your sorry all the time, because as you said before this is an AU FAN-FACTION AFTER ALL AND YOU ALREADY SAID THAT YOUR SORRY.

    Well till next time latter.
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  • From ANON - DarkLordOfKichiku on May 01, 2007
    Quite a good fic, keep up the good work! :D~~~~~.
    As for the direction of the story, well... I'm personally for something of a mix of the "angsty and fluffy bunny" thing. I like a happy ending in general, after all XD. But that's not to say that the path to such an should be easily attined, quite the opposite. After all, this IS against the will of the girls, whichever of them that has come or are yet to come, after all, even if it is under the Kyuubi's influence. Which means that there should be some consequences of the whole thing for Naruto - but also forgiveness as well, to a certain extent. So... For now I would say that you should keep Naruto going around having his "fun" under the influence of Kyuubi. But at some point, there should be a confontation between Naruto and the Kyuubi - unless you intend to have Naruto controlled by the Kyuubi thorugh the whole story or have them completely merged into one by the end of the story. Point is though that if Naruto regains complette control later in the story (through whatever means; either him defeating the Kyuubi in an inner battle and regain control, makes some del with him, or is simply "stopped" by another character who uses some sort of jutsu to force the Kyuubi to release his influence), then that's when there should be consequneces for him, because of the fact that once he's back to normal/himself, then the girls should be released from the jutsu (if nothing else so because that it's hard to see why a completely in-character Naruto would want to control the girls - he's far too nice for that, as we know). The consequences could vary; some of the girls might find out that they're pregnant (a natural outcome of sexual intercoruse, at least :p), some of them might hate Naruto for it all, others just be confused and the like... And Tsunade might have to impose some punishment on Naruto, if for nothing else, so because of the fact that he learnt a strictly forbidden jutsu. And so on. Shouldn't be all angsty though; most of the girls should eventually forgive Naruto - especially so for Sakura and things straighten out in the end - or that's how I'd like it to be :p :D.

    As for pairings, well; don't have much of an opinion here, so do as you wish here. Whether you want to make it into a Naruto/Harem fic or not is all your decision. Through if not, it'd still be nice if at least one or more girls besides the one he'd end up with at the end stayed with Naruto or became soemthing of a constant bed-companion or the like - for example, if Sakura were to be the one he'd end up with, it'd be sorta funny - ironic, even - to see Ino getting into it too and start to comptete with her for Naruto's attention, having gained a new perspective on him after the events about to come. Or something :).

    Anyway, do your best! As others have been saying, it has great potential and I'll be watching it's future progress with great interest! :D

    On a sidenote, I was a bit surpised about Ino's reaction in this chapter - quite OOC for her if you ask me - but then, again, she might just've had a bad morning and was thus in a bad mood, or it's THAT time of the month for her making her act like that against most people XD.
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  • From ANON - sliver on May 01, 2007
    SLAVE 'EM ALL!! At least the girls who aren't attached. Now if the slave jutsu could work on anyone, imagine the chaos he could cause. Does the Fox have control over plants or something it could use to get the whole situation really twisted? This has got some awesome potential to be a really naughty fic. I can't wait to see more.
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