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By : Amarukoira
  • From ANON - Kamrin on May 09, 2007
    was actually waited for some sexual tension between the two...good stuff ...gotta stop with the cliff hangers ya killing me,but ill deal.kudos and cant wait for 7

    kam
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  • From ANON - Kamrin on May 09, 2007
    As always unik kudos on another good chapter.i didnt see any major flaws this week which is good but i have a problem with gaara.hes taking it too far.he went from i love him to i wanna make him suffer but hey maybe thats love. i wanna know who the photographer is? it can only be a handful of people...but i got my money on one person in particular. why was lee's nose bleeding?kudos on the paragraph about neji and hakus little make out session. descriptive writing at its best lol. well keep putting those fingers to the keys and writing.

    kam
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  • From on May 08, 2007
    Oh my gosh! ebil cliffie! hey i really like the story and how all the characters interact. just wondering, are letting people know when new chapters are coming out via e-mail? if you do please add me! reach me at DarkNinaRuler@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Rudy on May 06, 2007
    kudos..fish suggested this to me i like it:) do u got more stuff i can read? anything with just naruto and sasuke?much love keep writing

    rudy the poet
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  • From ANON - Andrew on May 06, 2007
    good job girl fish told me to read this that you were a good writeer and your doing ya thing...a little emo fro my taste but then again i dont knwo shit about writing...takes care girl and keep doing ya thang


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  • From Reyn on May 02, 2007
    Y'know, as morbid as Neji's dream is, I can't help but find it as romantic as hell. I literally coo'ed when Gaara told Neji that he couldn't have his own heart anymore, so Neji might as well take it. That's like my new favorite line.
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  • From ANON - kamrin aka john on May 02, 2007
    ok where to begin..well first off kudos on another job well doen screw everyone who gets upset about the cliffhamger. that just good storytelling :)throwing sasuke into the mix was a little cliche but i can only wonder what kind of mischeif youll get him and gaara into. i have to say i enjoy nejis conversation with the shrink..or what im assuming is a shrink.haku is a little bitch but as far as characters go hes your darth vader. allow me to explain everyone hates darth vader but at the same time alot of people when asked who there favorite character is they say darth vader. ha ku has that sort of potential you should capitialize on it. i love the balance in this story where at times you feel sorry for gaara and his patheticness and then you see him "unleash the beast" as it were and despise his evilness.i didnt like the principals office scene it felt rushed...other wise unik good job keep writing and keep sharing

    Your poetic buddy,
    Fish j0n3s
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  • From Rokugatsu on May 01, 2007
    I love it. I loved how Neji was sticking up for Gaara a little. Keep up the good work. I can't wait until next cahpter.
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  • From ANON - Corvin on May 01, 2007
    Har, Corvin from FF.net

    NejHaku, Sasugaa and Kankiba oh my! o.o

    Quite a good plot though I must say and very well written reguarding Gaara. -Sniff- I found myself crying at the third chapter, zomg! (Zebras Out Miniature Golfing)

    I hope you update soon, blast aff for not having an alert dealy, oh well I added it to my regular favorite's list, I can't wait for the next chapter! ^o^
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  • From ANON - ariya on May 01, 2007
    UGH I need the next chapter in order to stay alive!!!! I must say i waspretty much deadset against AU stories but your story has made me turn a new leaf! I shall use the rest of my youthful life scouting out more good AU fics!!! @_@ wow i scare myself sometimes anyway please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - cirquegirl999 on May 01, 2007
    OMG! Sasuke as Gaara's boyfriend??? I mean I knew what was coming but that threw me for a loop! You've given my friends the pleasure of seeing me do a double take and be in convulsions, which they will endlessly tease me about for the rest of my life no doubt.lol Man, I thought it would have been Orochimaru but then you use Sasuke, Sasuke?? Sorry, I should be over this but I just can't wrap my mind around it! Naruto's going to freak-that's the understatement of the century, he's going to beat the shit out of Gaara (well that's what I'd do). Okay I need to move away from this and focus on something else, give myself a few hours to process this fact. Loved the update, it gives a little more insight to the angry Neji that he is in the story, and btw, I'm going to find a way into this imaginary world of yours and beat the shit out of him for saying he could treat Gaara like he was nothing, okay? Of course I want to beat both Haku and Itachi (more so Haku b/c it looks like Itachi's facing an emotional dilema w/ Oro). I loved that you made Gaara turn that face comment around, it would be the perfect revenge to flaunt Neji off in front of the little shit's face when his relationship falls to pieces. You do get the point that this fic has me crying for a proper payback right? (I get way too involved in these fics, but these are my favorite characters, so I care a lot about them!) I never actually looked at the whole camera phone picture other than a way to get at Gaara but the whole, tarnish Neji's wrap it actually quite genius, if that's what the intentions are, Haku being a slut is apparent w/out the pics!!!lol Are the pics Gaara has of Haku and Neji in the act, is that why Gaara was so pissed off? Gah, don't tell me I don't want to know, the suspense is enough to kill me but I'll hold out. Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating, my mood's risen by a thousand today b/c of that and thank you so much for the dedication! It was so sweet! (Although I do have a beef with other readers now, 443 hits and you're telling me there's only 6 reviews so far, I'd start making an ultimatum if I were you!!! This fic is too good to go without boatloads of praise!)
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  • From ANON - cirquegirl999 on April 27, 2007
    I really do love this story. You make each of the characters entertaining and worthwhile at the same time, they're very real in the way they interact with one another and how they feel. I just had to tell you that because a lot of the time authors tend to miss the emotional part of the story or rush through it, which can take away from a fic that could have been wonderful. The dream sequence with Neji and Gaara was fantastic and I like the way you left some things to interpretation, I look forward to seeing how it all pans out as this story continues. Thanks again for posting this, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Fish on April 26, 2007
    your a surprisingly good writer unik and kudos and the story i dont know alot about the naruto universe but as a story it was fantastic you gave the reader insight into gaara struggles to let go of neji(god i hope i spelled that right).but keep writing and sending links to your stories

    this story has been approved by john-micheal kamrin Garrett
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  • From ANON - cirquegirl999 on April 26, 2007
    OMG! I freaking love this fic!!!! Normally you just have fics where Neji and Gaara get together and that's the end of it but in this one they've already been an item and are now dealing with the consequences of breaking up, absolutely genius!lol I really love the fact that you didn't make Gaara just a pathetic character with issues (not that he doesn't have them) but you gave him some backbone, nicely done. The hint of Naruto and Sasuke in there adds just the right amount of humor at the appropriate time and makes this all that more interesting. Thank you so much for posting this, I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - chibi on April 25, 2007
    WOW! I love it! Especially since it's rare that people write Neji/Gaara and I can't help loving this one because it was written really really well. I want to wring Neji's neck in this chapter but it'll get better right? Poor Gaara, man I hope he gets Neji back just a little bit and then bam..SMUT! Love it. Can't wait until you update!
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