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By : Amarukoira
  • From ANON - jenny on May 24, 2007
    omg......... poor sasuke!
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  • From llyoung on May 24, 2007
    Gee. I feel so sorry for everyone (Gaara, Neji, Haku, Sasuke and Naruto). I just hope that there is a happy ending.
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  • From Reyn on May 24, 2007
    Well, I'm pretty sure I'm not one of those reviewers special enough to get the link, which sucks. I'm horrible when it comes to leaving reviews...cuz half the time I don't know what to say!

    Poor Sasuke. He really screwed up his chance when he agreed to Gaara's plan. I'm not too happy with Neji right now. He doesn't seem /nearly/ remorseful enough about cheating on Gaara and Gaara finding out. Although I still hope Neji and Gaara do get together in the end!!!
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  • From ANON - Dancing Fox on May 24, 2007
    YAY omg you are so good at writing! i think ninji and gaara should stay together, there so cute together
    you are doing a very wounderful job writing this, i love reading it
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  • From TheSirens on May 23, 2007
    it's getting dramatic...i'm so excited to see what is next, but i was so sad during the flashbacks i mean seriously what kind of a father would treat thier own flesh and blood that way...poor Garra and Temari
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  • From sweetciel on May 23, 2007
    Excellent story! I think i'm officially the stupidest person in creation. I'm sorta confused *tilts head to side and scratches nose* Sasuke and gaara kissed in the lunchroom???? Did is accidently skip that chapter? The pics we are referring to are the ones that were attached to the note on gaara's locker right? When did we start suspecting lee of being the one who took them? What are the pics of? I get that they're of a sexual nature, but when is the timeframe of them. It sorta seems like they were taking quite sometime ago...like when gaara and neji were still dating not after they broken up. hmmmmm.....*beats self over head*...I like how gaara is portrayed. It seems like the way he would really act if there was a series just about him. Also the lemon was interesting *nods* Is this review long enough to earn me brownies?
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  • From ANON - Kamrin on May 23, 2007
    i read your stuff for moments like the end..very good poetry unik. i dont think lee is the camersman..i really dont have any complaints abotu the chapetr good job all around. the gaara neji confrontation was a bit much in terms of drama but still very cool.thanks for putting BG in there he thanks you. haku and neji realationship holds a speacial place in my heart now. i relate with haku on being in love with someone and them not loving you back or not loving you in the sameway. your writing is real and shares thoughts and characters i can relate to. keep writing and putting out gold like this

    peace,
    Kam
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  • From ANON - Dancing Fox on May 21, 2007
    omg i love it!!! your doing a very great freakin' job at writing this....but i must admit the poetry thing was
    weird, but who the hell cares?! your doing a sweet ass job at writing and yeah..... keep it up!
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  • From ANON - cirquegirl999 on May 19, 2007
    I'm trying to say this in the most original way possible......oh hell who are we kidding? I FUCKING LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! You totally made me become torn as to who Neji should end up with, Gaara or Haku? Ah fuck it, I'm still a Gaara/Neji fan at heart but it was certainly a nice attempt.lol God one of my favorite lines was from Haku this time, “You need some exercise and I want some skittles. You’re doing us both a favor by getting up and walking around. You look like crap by the way.”-lol. Gah that's what I'm like with my friends all the time, which ends up in me getting smacked but I still get the skittles! Boo yah! lol Sorry, had way too much sugar in my cereal this morning and I'm driving everyone who's around me nuts, which is a blast btw. So glad you updated (I missed you Nik!) and I thought this chapter was a masterpiece. I loved the fact that this time you had Gaara call Sasuke out on what he was doing and explained Gaara's head a little, definitely a fucked up place to be. Of course I died when you had Neji and Gaara kiss but came back again when Gaara called him a jackass! You go Gaara! No one gets to rain on your parade!lol Sorry, again. God I was so frustrated with Neji this chapter, he's blaming everyone else, I feel like shaking him and telling him to be a man and own up to it. That's the kicker with story characters, you want to hurt them but the only way you could is if you were certafiably insane. I liked the insight into Haku, made my disliking of him lesson.....slightly. ^_^ I loved the poetic sense of the yaoi part, well done, I did however through a fit b/c it was w/ Haku and not Gaara, shame on you! I felt Naru's pain too at the PDA's, no more chica no more, at least not w/out a little NaruSas to tide me over. Gah! This review's really long but there's so much to cover. I'll leave the photographer at piece b/c no doubt it'll blow me out of the water. All right here's the wrap up, I'll no doubt say more in an email but for now this is it, so please update soon so I can find out what the hell Neji says to those photos!lol
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  • From ANON - Kit on May 19, 2007
    Wow this fic is awesome, its one i check every day to see if it has been updated, and i love it! please update soon
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on May 14, 2007
    This is getting very involved and confusing, a wonderful thing in a story. Keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Dancing Fox on May 09, 2007
    very good storie!!!
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  • From ANON - jenny on May 09, 2007
    Well I for one love the side stories. In
    fact I love this whole fic. I look forward to yor next update.
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  • From ANON - cirquegirl999 on May 09, 2007
    Awww, I can't help but feel so bad for Naruto. I know I said this in my previous review but it's just so sad! I liked the way he handled the 'who made varsity' thing, it's what I would have done. Actually I would have most likely looked for my name then tore the thing to pieces just for the hell of it!lol Let them piece it back together. I liked the way you made Naruto more than a side character in this story and showed his emotions in this plot as well. They should have kissed damn it!!!lol No, it probably would have made things akward between the two of them and Sasu and Gaara but damn, so close yet so far!lol Great side story, I actually like that you add them like that so that they don't take away from the story or distract the reader but just add more to it that makes the reader understand everyone else's actions in it. Oh well that's all I have for now, I'll be sure to mention more in the email! ^_^
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  • From ANON - cirquegirl999 on May 09, 2007
    Hey there! This is only for chapter five b/c it was too good to cram two reviews into one so I'm doing each of them separately. HOLY SHIT! That was brilliant! ^_^ I love how you have Gaara playing the criminal mastermind and Oro & Zabu are playing the lackeys who get what they want in the end. Though I'm still in doubt about Oro, I mean is he going to help or hinder Gaara now based off the convo he had with Neji. Speaking of Neji, can we say bastard in this chappie? I mean he wants Gaara obliterated and he cheated!!! (Which caused me to cuss out my computer for even displaying the damn words!!) Grrr, I want to beat him to a bloody pulp! Okay, I have to calm down, lol. You had me in tears with Naruto's reaction, I feel so bad for him, he has to be hurting while watching Sasuke and Gaara use PDAs. I nearly wet myself though when you had him saying Sakura and he were going out, I mean, how the hell did he convince her to go along with it?lol I'm feeling conflicted with Haku right now, I mean sure he's being used by Neji to forget about Gaara but at the same time he was the other woman (so to speak), currently the anger is winning out, the slut!lol Is the stalker Lee? I haven't read 6 yet, but that's my best guess. Anyway, thank you so much for updating and two chappies!!!YAY!
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