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Reviews for Peaceful Waters

By : Jayderaven
  • From poornmiserable on May 10, 2007
    awesome awesome awesome......It’s like a little jack-off kit....that was funny...update soon...keep up the great work
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  • From Arcangel3012 on May 04, 2007
    I would like to say that I have enjoyed your stroy thus far and I hope that you update soon. As for your request for a beta, I would be more than happy to do it for you. I am a featured writer on this site. Feel free to check out my works and profile. I am currently in the process of moving to Japan with my husband in the next few weeks so I have a lot of free time. I should be able to help with corrections at any time you need. After our move I am going to be really free, at least for the summer anyway. Let me know if I can be of any help to you; contact me by e-mail if you do.

    Arcangel3012
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  • From moonymuch on May 03, 2007
    I love this story. Genma is probably one of my favorite characters. I can't wait for more!

    Oh, and I loved this line: "“That must be a requirement for a girl to go into ANBU, be able to resist jumping your teammates in the middle of a mission,” Sakura mused playing with the faucet with her toe." I cannot agree more. I KNOW that I would jump a man in an ANBU uniform any day of the week. Good thing I don't live in the Naruto universe...no one would be safe!
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  • From undercoverfreak on May 02, 2007
    sos o great, love the new chapter. Of course the charcters are OOC but if naruto would ever go in this direction, lol, I am sure you would be right on!
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  • From MoiyaHatake on May 02, 2007
    LOL I feel the same way. Writing about sex is different en easier some how. But most people masturbate so why does it still feel dirty? LMAO! If I was left alone in a place with a naked Genma attacking my senses I wouldnt be in the bathtub!!! Screw the rude Sasuke and emotionless Sai! Let them watch and maybe they wouldnt open their big fat mouths anymore!!! OMG!!! What about Kakashi you ask....make it a threesome...cant leave out Kakashi no matter how sexy Genma is with his 'Big Daddy'! OMG! my mind is so in the gutter with this one. Loved the chappy, especially the nightmare. I understand Sakura's lack of confidence in herself. I have the same problem. But my problem is I do look as bad as I think....*sigh*
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  • From roxnroll on May 02, 2007
    I want some Big Daddy too

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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2007
    YAAAA I really like this!!!! the begining is a little confuzing but it seemed like she was going through a mental breakdown.
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  • From undercoverfreak on May 02, 2007
    So far I absolutley love this fic, and if you need a beta let me know. Even though I have never written a story or beta'd before I am and English major. So if you need any help I can do it!
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  • From Kaysan on May 02, 2007
    Heck, I'll be your beta! I also beta for someone over on fanfiction.net and I have written a few stories over there. It's been a while since an update, but with my new Naruto obsession who knows what could happen. Anyway, let me know! Love the story so far! Hugs & Kisses!
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  • From Starspear on April 30, 2007
    Hey, lol, great stuffs so far. Congrats on breaking the oneshot funk though, keep up with this it's really good.
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  • From roxnroll on April 29, 2007
    i really am liking this story. I think its awesome that they are all really "seeing" her for the first time. Genma is hot.

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  • From sihayadib on April 29, 2007
    Awesome update! I absolutely loved it. Nice tattoo...

    Thanks!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on April 29, 2007
    Thank God it's not a one-shot. This is going to be so much FUN!!!!

    Don't let Sasuke end up with Sakura, he doesn't deserve her.
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  • From MoiyaHatake on April 29, 2007
    BIG DADDY!!! Love it. I so love Genma. He's so sexy. And kudo's to Sakura for maintaining....well just maintaining anything including dignity under the stress of being naked and then being with a naked Genma with a wood the size of a Giant Sequoia. LMAO!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 29, 2007
    GOD that was funny!
    I want him to wake up to her checking him and her saying to him good morning big daddy with everyone there!
    Now That Would Be Funny!!
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