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By : antilogicgirl

From ANON - Wenesday on June 29, 2015
OMG I can't describe how I really feel about this story. The plot is so interesting that I couldn't stop reading. Each chapter was amazing. I love how you incorporate character that fit perfectly to their role like Haku. Perfect using of the feudal era. Writer usually don't do research enough or don't take it seriously to respect the tradition of this era. And YOU just use the perfect vocabulary to describe this.

I don't like narusasu but in your story it feels right and didn't bother me. Sakura don't act like a mary sue. Now I'm highly intrigued with what Kakashi is here to do.

I desperatly want to read more. What will bring the "storm". about what Tokotachi-dono told Sakura to stay the night with Sasuke and Naruto when her birthday comes. But then when I finished the last chapter I realized that it hadn't been since 2008. Maybe you'll see this review and finish this gem.

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From ANON - poornmiserable on January 22, 2009
it has been a while since i have been able to read and catch up on this fic....but the plot thickens muha ha ha....please continue to update this story is so awesome i just love how you incorporate mythology into the narutoverse.... i wonder whether haku's affections were love or lust and is sakura's betrothed gaara ....i love it please update soon pretty please
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From Allys on March 12, 2008
Wow... hisashiburi ja ne? Thank you so much for the update. I really love all the intricacies involved in this story and hope that ou get to keep working on it. I can't help but feel Iruka made a HUGE mistake. And I feel really sorry for Haku. So Sakura's a goddess huh? Hmmmnn.... cool. What does that make Naruto?? I can help but wonder. LOL, he's by far my favourite XD. I'm also very curious about the man on the hill *nods*. I hope you get to write again soon and that works gives you an ease. Thanks again ♥
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From ANON - Anon on March 11, 2008
amazing, amazing! please update soon! i'll check often!
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From poornmiserable on August 10, 2007
an update yes yes thank goodness....even though it was just a kiss that scene between haku and sakura was completely and totally hot..will it continue later on (hint hint wink wink)...even more was the saku sasuke scene....why can't it be a threesome....is naruto gonna get left out later too the poor baby......hahaha itachi an uke i think thats a first...lol.....great job on this update soon please please
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From Allys on August 10, 2007
Hey sweetie, LOL. I spent a lot of time re-reading all the good stuff, which turned out to be most of the story, LOL XD. I can see what you mean about Itachi being a deceptive bastard, he would be able to fool people. This new chapter was perplexing. Tokotachi is a hottie XD, and what is up with Haku. He makes me nervous. That was a close call with Sakura and the boys. I'm not one of those people who wants a threesome by the way, so I'm happy that you feel the same way. I like the boys to be monogamous. You said only a couple more chapters O.O I'd love to see what's gonna happen, cause that means it'll just be major stuff from here on out so XD. Thank you so much for the update.
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From ANON - poornmiserable on June 05, 2007
*raises hand*...hehehe that was so good to have itachi begging....now will he fall for it? i love the flash back scene i hope you do one for sakura too i wanna see how she came about...i also wanna know what exactly will happen if sakura becomes impure.....you have no idea about how much i want this to be a threesome fic...well maybe you do now....well keep up the awesome work please i hope you get inspired to whip out another chapter love this fic XD
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From Allys on June 02, 2007
LOL, this chapter seemed to revolve around cleanliness XD. I loved the little bit with Naruto in the beginning. It was adorable, to see them as sweet children, and Sasuke teaching him to bathe XD, got my little shota loving heart to beat fast. That was exactly what I wanted, it was perfect - Thank you. (I love shota when they're both little, a little fella with a big man just seems painful to me though, stupid Itachi. Is it still shota if they're both little??). Those two together and happy, really are the sweetest thing, I especially loved he felt brand new XD, so kawaii. Sasuke's dad seemed to know his name, I love that there's so much more to this fic than meets the eye.

And then Sakura and her diritiness XD. But for a second there you had me worried, I was like 'be careful little girl' the end of the world for a fuck? Not a good trade, LOL. Even if it is with Itachi who is utterly smexy, although I don't really find him that attractive in this fic. I'm not big on smarmy, XD. And then his company, I was wowed by the fact that those guys are all so decent. What the hell were they doing hanging out with Itachi? I guess I was expecting Akatsuki members. Although those guys made it a lot better for Sakura, at least she only had to deal with one cretin. What exactly will happen though if she does find someone she desires? It looks like she's liking Neji, and well Lee was there. Did the god ever say? What'll happen when she finds out that Naruto and Sasuke are 'together' in that way that she can't share with them? That's gonna suck. Poor girl.

I'm all into this story, it's so cool. I keep having strange flahes of Sakura murdering Itachi and the three of them having to run. That's the only place he's gonna go with this, I wonder when he'll realise that. I can't wait to see if he falls for her little set up. Is he gonna be one of those guys that doesn't want what he's "already had" or does that not work if they don't remember? LOL. Anway you take it I'm thoroughly hooked. Thank you so much for the speedy update, you rock XD.
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From ANON - poornmiserable on June 01, 2007
oh my goodness that was so very....um.....HOT. poor sakura getting left out....i can not wait for another chapter keep up the AWESOME WORK i really do hope you get more reviews you are so talented please please update soon i love this story.
does itachi not molest sasuke anymore cause sasuke does not let him?...i'm assuming since the time he got naruto and sakura...sasuke realized it was wrong.
i really liked how itachi was squirming under sakuras attention...that was funny. well like i said before i love your work and i hope you update soon
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From ANON - anon on May 29, 2007
Sorry I can't give my name or real email here. Just three more months until I'm 18. I just wanted to say that this story is really well done. It's got an interesting and original plot to it, with very few grammar and/or spelling errors. I love that you took the time to research all the Japanese terminology and culture. I don't usually like yaoi very much, at least not NaruSasu, but for some reason it's ok if it's with Sakura also (they ARE going to get Sakura in on the action, I'm assuming, since they're "three parts of the same whole"). It just seems more plausible if the three of them are joined like that, because they are such a close team. I definitely don't like ItaSasu incest, but since Itachi is clearly the bad guy here, I can handle it. I just hope that whenever he tries to do something to Sakura, Sasuke and Naruto will be there to save the day. I really look foward to more of this story. It's so well done and so well written and has smut AND plot! It would be a real shame if you didn't finish this. I can see there is some serious plot development in the future.

Much love.
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From ANON - Midnight on May 29, 2007
Hey! This is an awesome fic. Ur method of writing, and descriptions just take my breath away. There is just one insignificant issue i have with it and that is I cant see Itachi doing those things to sasuke, I mean i like uchihacest and all but he just seems too 'indecent' that I think him capable of..... but thats ok, a fic is a fic lol

Wow so Naruto and Sasuke finally got together lol. They are so cute and perfect for one another. I really like how you brough about their relationship and developed it. Your portrayal of Sakura is just perfect. I like spitfire Sakura, who is strong in almost every sense. The only think I am wishing for at this point is Itasaku lol, maybe he can turn around a new leaf.... maybe?? lol

But in nay case, this fic is nothing short of amazing. You are a wonderful authoress and I hope u continue the excellent work!! cant wait to read more ^_^
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From Allys on May 29, 2007
Oh Wow... XD. I'm all in love with this story. It's marvelous. Blessed and warned by the gods and trying to love and protect each other, that's just beautiful. I feel a little bad for Sakura though, the whole no man can touch her, and Itachi is a bloody bastard in so many ways. A four year old, really?? I could kill him. Naruto seems to have been crushing on Sasuke for a while now. It's nice, but if I could make a small request, I'd really like to know what was going on in his head. We've gotten everyone's in-depth point of view but his. And does this mean Sakura can never have love? Cause that would be too sad, or is Ino lurking about somewhere, after all she is 'no man' XD (got all LOTR on you for a second there). But anyway, I really love that this seems like a fantasy novel, as though the three are meant for great things. Are they going on a quest? I'm really excited about this. Not to mention my boys seem to be deeply in love, I was so scared that while they figuring that out Sakura would be raped and everything would go to shit. I'm so glad she's not a helpless little annoyance in this. It always irks me when they make the girls helpless. I understand that Itachi is strong and scary as all hell, but I'm so happy that didn't stop her from trying. Do your best Sakura - kick his ass!! Sorry XD. Please update, i won't say anything about soon, I'd like it to be but the best things are never rushed XD. Ja.
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From HumanInfiltrator on May 14, 2007
Interesting.
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From ANON - poornmiserable on May 10, 2007
oh my god this story kicks ass i love the way u write it is very beautiful...what will happen to sakura you have to update please please please
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