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From animekid on May 20, 2008
I still want more to this story

favorite threesome
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From animekid on February 06, 2008
this needs to be more!

like shippuden sakura in akasuki still getting boned by sasori/deidara! oh man....

my brain is so twisted >
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From Goddessofmurder on August 14, 2007
Good story so far, hope you put more up. I'm really liking this indeed.
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From poornmiserable on May 09, 2007
whoa...they are taking advantage of poor cute little sakura....i've always wanted to read a fic where they use deidra's hands for some fun ....keep up the great work update soon.
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From Gigicerisier on May 05, 2007
>I HAAAATTTEEE KARIN! HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE! "Ohhh Karin's so sexy! Glasses are sexy!" NO THEY ARE FUCKING NOT. FAT ASS SASUKE STEALING BITCH.

Sasuke can't afford to have little WHORES surrounding him. He's trying to practice begging Sakura's forgiveness! HFUIOSFDSFCDS..

Although that water dude is kinda sexy ;3 You know.. Suigetsu. If I find out more about him I might just write a story.. A RAPE STORY

*taken back by her outburst*
Um.. right.. I just don't like the idea she appeared to just grolify Sasuke..*rolls eyes*

>It was hard getting used to Sasori and Deidara's teaching methods. It seemed like her training from the academy had been increased ten fold. However, she was slowly getting used to it. They seemed to be patient enough with her, anyways. Every day after her regular lessons were over, she would meet them in a hidden location just outside Konoha. And much to her surprise, they had told her today would be a special lesson.

I see.. so they decided to train her enough to get the trust from Sakura... Clever move, indeed, Deidara. *smirks*
Oho, I'm pretty sure that Sasori and Deidara WILL EXTREMELY Enjoy teaching her this special lesson.

>Sakura arrived in the usual fashion, barely being able to hold herself on top of the water as she walked through the large river to a bolder with a seal on it. She scrunched up her nose and closed her eyes, focusing on breaking the seal. Despite her complaints, Deidara told her it would become easier as time went by. As soon as the boulder slid up, she quickly walked inside the large cave. "Deidara no danna! Sasori no danna! I'm here!" She called. She didn't see them when she first walked in, which was unusual.

Is it Akatsuki hideout, already? I wonder where other members are..

>Even so, it was nice to have solid ground benieth her feet again. Most kunoichi didn't learn how to channel their chakra into their feet until they were at least genin. But that only went to prove that their methods of teaching were paying off. She was so lucky they wanted to help her!

"You're late, yeah."

Sakura turned around, only to bump into Deidara's chest. She took a step backwards and smiled nervously up at him. "U- un.. sorry. I had to stay a little later for a test." Deidara looked over at Sasori, who was now behind Sakura. "That's too bad, yeah. We were just talking about giving you a reward for all the effort you put into learning." Sakura's mouth dropped open slightly. "Really?! You mean it?!"

Hm... Sasori seems love sneaking behind Sakura all the time..

>"Ofcourse, your hard work will not go unrewarded." Sasori added casually. Sakura was overjoyed! Here she thought she would be scolded for not arriving on time. Deidara's hands clamped down on her shoulders, and made her jump slightly in surprise. She was a little unsure of this.. "We'll start you on our new training.. only good girls get to train this way." Sasori murmured, twisting the hem of her little red dress between his fingers.

OMG.. Sasori is so smexed up...

>"A- are you sure I'm ready, Sasori no danna? It sounds hard.." She'd never thought of herself as an over achiever. "We'll just have to see, won't we? Hm." Deidara murmured against the shell of her ear, making her shivver slightly. She felt funny.. her stomach was doing wierd flips and turns.

Oho, so is Deidara...

>Deidara sat back on the ground, pulling Sakura between his legs. The two were quickly followed by Sasori, who kneeled in front of Sakura and slipped a hand under her knee to lift her leg up slightly. Sakura's breath caught in her throat. Her mother had never fully explained sex to her, only the basics. 'Rob A goes into slot B, that's how babies are made.' Maybe foreplay was invented after her time.

Sasori really hates waiting doesn't he...?
I really love to see their interactions with my eyes. Gahhh!!
So, Sakura knows.. what they will do to her now? *gasps*

>Sakura didn't want to question them, but she did want to know what was going on. "S- Sasori no danna..? Wh- what are you going to do..?" She asked quietly, her face already slightly flushed from him staring at her cute little pink panties. Sasori almost smirked. Her panties had a little bow right in the front. "You'll find out." He answered simply, before leaning over her body and quickly pressing their lips together.

Sasori... You creep me out in good way!!
Damn this is so hot!!

>Sakura squeaked, her eyes wide with shock as she felt Sasori's oddly smooth, warm lips against her own. Shinobi usually didn't take that good of care of their features that weren't used for fighting. She could feel his lips parting, slowly but surely. His tongue could be felt against her lower lip, slowly coaxing her mouth open. So many times, Sakura had fantasized about what her first kiss would be like. It was nothing like this.. first of all, it would be with Sasuke, and just a peck.. Kisses with tongues? Gross!

Woohoo!! Sasori has got Sakura's first kiss now hopefully her cherry also!!
but it's so evil that he didn't give her a chaste kiss before ravaging her like that!!
So, Sasori is fully a human being in your fic then.. Wicked!! Now I do love to see more smexy SasoSakuDei actions!!

>As soon as she was starting to get used to Sasori, she felt another pair of hands slide around her waist and between her legs. She yelped and squirmed uncomfortably between the two. That is, untill Deidara's mouthes {The ones on his hands} dug into the skin on her arms. She whimpered quietly, her body completely tense. "I thought you wanted to learn, Sakura-chan, hmm?" Deidara seemingly taunted. "Be quiet, and let us teach you." Sasori added in monotone.

This.. can't be happening..!

Heh, Deidara is pretty smexed up as well...
Be quiet? Sasori should learn how to coax Sakura better.. *sheepish grin*

Kat!! Your fic is most wicked fic everrr!! I'm looking forward to reading new chapter so keep up writing!!

*goes off to doodle SasolittleSaku smex*
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From Gigicerisier on May 05, 2007
Man.. this chapter is full of entertainment, Kat!

>"S-Sasuke-kun.. I, um, I was wondering if.. maybe, we could-"

"I don't have time. I have to go home and train more."

"Oh.. o-okay, well maybe tomorrow-"

"Training."

"The next day?.."

Sasuke turned to look at Sakura, a look of slight annoyance in his childish face. "I'm too busy for stupid girls."

Sakura stood silent in shock, staring at Sasuke with watery tea green eyes. Sasuke was a little taken back by how hard she took it, opening his mouth to try to explain, and reaching out his hand. But before he could get more than "Sakura.." out of his mouth, Sakura had already dashed in the other direction. 'Sasuke-kun hates me! He thinks I'm anoying! He'll never love me..!' She thought sadly, tears trickling down her soft, pale cheeks and flying behind her as she continued to run through the streets of Konoha. She ignored all the strange looks she got from the people around her, shutting her eyes and brushing past a few by-standers, untill she got to a less crouded part of the area.

Awwww.. this angst is too much for a sweet little girl like Sakura..

>Ever since the day she saw Sasuke, she'd been nothing but obsessed with getting him to notice her. She started trying harder, becoming smarter and as strong as she could. Were all those efforts put to waste simply because he just didn't like her? The thought just brought more tears to her eyes.

Finally, she stopped at the big red bridge, leaning over slightly to catch her breath. She'd managed to stop crying, so she wiped her tears away from her face. She found herself looking over the railing and into the clear water. She had to stand up on one of the wooden edges of the bridge to see over it, though. After a while of looking at her reflection, continuesly rubbing her eyes to try and get rid of their redness.

Do you know what? I feel like comforting her by myself.. *pats little Sakura's head*

>"That will just make it worse, yeah."

Sakura quickly whirrled around. How could there be anyone els here? When she arrived, she hadn't seen anyone remotely close to the bridge, certainly no one that looked like these two. "A- ah.. I.. I know.." She said, jumping off from the railing and leaning back against it.

"Then why were you doing it?"

Sakura didn't seem to have a straight answer for this.. "I just was.." She answered quietly, averting her eyes from the two. She'd never seen them before, who were they? Maybe from another village? The blonde had a headband on.. but it had been slashed through.

Deidara... He is one heck of womanizer regardless ages of women..

>Deidara chuckled, and stepped closer to her. "What's a pretty girl like you have to cry about, anyways, mm?" He asked, knealing down infront of her and stroaking her cheek softly. Sakura blushed lightly, and lowered her head in embarrassment. "Well I.. theres.. this boy I like.. a- and-" Sakura suddenly gasped and jerked her head back. What just touched her..? Deidara slowly withdrew his hand with a small grin, the tongue slightly extended from the mouth on his palm. "Sorry about that. I couldn't seem to help myself.."

Sakura stared in amazement as the mouth closed up again, and he stood back up. What on earth was that? She wanted one! "Wow! That's really cool!" She exclaimed, a smile appearing on her soft pink lips. It felt good to smile again, to forget about Sasuke for a little while.

This is wicked! I totally love the way Deidara used his mouth on his hand and Sakura reacted..

>Sasori stepped up beside Deidara, and looked down at the girl. "You have to come with us now." He stated bluntly. Deidara coughed, and stepped infront of his partner. "What he means is.." He paused, to turn around and give him a look that asked 'What the fuck are you doing?' ".. That we could make you stronger, IF you come with us. That boy you like would notice you more, hmm."

Oho, Sasori is jealous?
Geeze.. Sasori.. When dealing with people, I have to say, Deidara is much better than Sasori..
Hm.. so are they gonna take Sakura to Akatsuki already?

>Sakura looked up at the two of them with big green eyes, thinking about what they had just said. They would make her stronger? "If I stay here I can get strong, too.." She murmured. "But, we can make you stronger, faster." Sasori quickly added. Sakura looked down for a moment. This was a delicate situation.. she knew nothing about these men. But, if they could make her stronger, when she got back life would be alot easier on her.

Heh! Sasori is so keen on getting Sakura even more than Deidara! It has amuzed Deidara for sure. *chuckles*

>Her eyes slowly wandered down Sasori's body, taking in his clothes and over all appearence. Red hair, red eyes, a completely stotic expression adorned his facial features. The blonde seemed to be a lot more happy and nice..

Heh heh good move, Sasori.. Sakura seems liking Deidara more. *smirks*

>"Well.. I guess I could go with you.." She murmured. Deidara turned to grin at Sasori, who remained emotionless. "But.." She started to add, Both of them turned to listen to her. "Could you maybe.. teach me how to paint my nails like that?"

Awwww.. this Sakura is killing me with her uber sweetness...
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From Gigicerisier on May 05, 2007
Hey, Kat! I'm gonna send you a review to each chapters like I said before.*wide grin*

>"We have to get moving. The others will get ahead of us." Sasuke suggested, eyeing the two chuunin suspiciously. However, Deidara and Sasori remained calm. What was an Itachi wanna-be going to do? Run and tell the parents he doesn't have? "Oh, ye- yeah.." Sakura looked down for a moment. "Good luck with the paperwork!" She smiled up at them cheerfully before running off to catch up with Sasuke. "Coming, Sasuke-kun!"

Heh heh I totally love the way they describe about Sasuke... Itachi wanna-be? That's hilarious.. *chuckles*
Awwww.. Sakura is uber adorable..

>Deidara stifled a chuckle, that came out as more of a snort. "Coming, Sasuke-kun!" He mocked, only to be met with a jab in the ribs from Sasori. "Stop screwing around. What exactly did you need to do in here?" There was a very long pause, followed by a shrug of Deidara's shoulders. "I didn't have anything specific in mind, hm. Maybe we could stirr up a bit of trouble.. yeah?" Sasori shook his head. "We should use this situation to out advantage, and observe what Sasuke is capable of." Deidara thought about it for a moment, before hanging his head and sighing. "I guess you're right, yeah."

Heh, typical Sasori, I say.. He is more thoughtful than Deidara.

>Fu fu fu..

"They're so boring.. hm."

Sasori and Deidara had been sitting in the same tree for over an hour now. Sasuke hadn't even look in their general direction. "He's obviously a waste of time, Sasori no danna." For once, Sasori agreed with his partner. "That girl.. with pink hair, and green eyes. Her name is Haruno Sakura.." He murmered to himself. Deidara looked up at him. "What's your point?"

"Our sources tell us she will have a close connection with the Fifth Hokage."

"Un, Tsunade-baa-san just adopted her as her second apprentice."

"She could have the potential to surpass even Sasuke-san."

Deidara chuckled quietly. "But she's a girl.. yeah."

It's such a good idea that you made Sakura already a Hokage's apprentice. *glomps*

>Sasori glanced over at his partner with a weary expression. Even he wasn't that sexist. "It's important we do nothing to intrude on her future. She will be a valuable ally of the Akatsuki if we play our cards right." Deidara turned to Sasori, a devious smirk on his face. "But.. what if we do something to bring her closer to the Akatsuki, yeah?" Sasori wasn't an idiot, he knew exactly what he meant. "Come on, when was the last time you had a good lay? It must have been a year. You're always so busy and uptight. " Sasori gave him a glare. But, he had a point.

Now.. that's Deidara.. He is the one who always love manipulating and making chaos and yeah there's no morals what so ever.. Kat you're such a talented writer!

So.. Sasori hasn't got any objection either when talking about this sweet little Sakura... Well but I can't blame on him at all cos her petal-coloured hair and stunning emerald eyes will be like treasures to Sasori who search a eternal beauty.

>"For the future of Akatsuki."

"Right, right."

Heh heh it seems Sasori tried to reason their plan desparately.. That perv... but I love Sasori ever more for the reason also! *smirks*
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From Animefanatic31 on April 26, 2007
Interesting so far...how did they know she'd be Tsuande's apprentice?
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From poornmiserable on April 26, 2007
interesting please continue i wanna see where this is going...update soon
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From Gigicerisier on April 24, 2007
Hey Kat!! Gigi is here. *waves* I haven't known you had adultfanfiction.net account!! That means I can send you review more openly. That would totally wicked!

By the way, I've got a question.. What are these thing Fu fu fu fu between paragraphes? *blinks*

>Deidara and Sasori had just reached the village's gates. They had made sure they were disguised long before reaching the border. Sasori had taken the form of one of the chuunin seen around the village regularly, Kamizuki Izumo. While Deidara, ironically, had chosen his comrade, Hagane Kotetsu.

Heh heh I love Izumo and Kotetsu. It's such a shame that their presenses seem being forgotten by people.. *sighs*

Awwwww Sakura in your fic is uber cute! *huggles little Sakura to death and earns a cold glare from Sasori*

Anyway, are you gonna update soon? I hope so. By the way, I've been doodling um some little Sakura with Sasori and planning to doodle a pic based on this fic.. I've just joined Adultfanfiction.Fanartists group so I'm gonna submit pics there once I did these pics.

Man... I can't wait DeiSakuSaso actions!! *whines* but then I've realized that Sasori with little Sakura won't look so weird cos Sasori looks merely 15 years old anyway... but Deidara is another story... Oho! I can't wait to read next chapter, Kat.. *tackles*

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