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Reviews for Slaves and Their Masters

By : Shedbloodytears
  • From on April 23, 2007
    Well it's very good for a first story and it looks like it definately will be interesting.I can't wait to read more and find out what will happen.By the way about the occ-ness thingie,don't worry if the characters are occ(as long as they are not too occ)Also about the beta I could help you if you haven't found one yet.Just contact me.Here's my email vivpiv@yahoo.co.uk Oh and if it won't be too troublesome,will you read my story,please?
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  • From ANON - Eva_- on April 23, 2007
    update soon please xD
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on April 23, 2007
    Really good start so far!!..^^... very cute!

    I can be contacted using that email on msn or yahoo if you need someone to bounce ideas off or anything.. you're doing really good though. I am curious on how Naruto will step up to the seme position, if it's something he has done before? How will Itachi react? Especially if it's obvious his little brother is "taking it" from a slave... XD

    It would also be something to see how Oro handles having Naruto snatched out from under him... are you doing him as a former Akatsuki member like in the manga? Will he actually try to retaliate?
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  • From ANON - hanyou-elf on April 23, 2007
    wow. this is definitely an interesting start to what promises to be an interesting story. i'm looking forward to more from you for this. i'm curious to see how the whole ita/iru will play out and can't believe it's going to be naru/sasu. *naru-seme for life!* an interesting story with an interesting plot going as well. please, update soon and keep the great work up!

    ja!
    ~hanyou-elf
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  • From ANON - HumanInfiltrator on April 23, 2007
    Well done! I'm hooked. Now, can you keep it up? Hope so! Post soon.
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  • From ANON - mee on April 23, 2007
    i looks good....keep going...i really want to read more :)
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