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Reviews for Arabian Nights

By : MarsInsane
  • From Stacy on May 04, 2007
    I can honesty say that when I first came across this story, I did not think I would like it! I was so wrong!! This fic is so awesome!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 04, 2007
    This story is getting really good. Please continue!!
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  • From hisoka on May 03, 2007
    thats cute, too cute for words.hope you get the time to update.
    i give you props for your progress
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  • From hisoka on April 26, 2007
    hope you continue this is interesting
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2007
    Intersting first chapter. Please continue!!!
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  • From TrixXx on April 23, 2007
    GREAT! Sasunaru fluff is the best. ^-^
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  • From bluegenjutsu on April 23, 2007
    Hot!!! I love the story so far! Sasuke is very determined, huh? :D
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  • From KitsuneFun on April 23, 2007
    this story has alot of potential and is really cute ^_^ please continue
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  • From flameofthenight on April 22, 2007
    Please don't make him too une-ish and submissive. A defiant Naruto is a good thing. (ie:when they're having sex or when sasuke is attempting to seduce him him doesn't just give in. Have it take a while. Also, maybe have Sasuke feel kindof out of control during sex instead of naruto at times, so naruto can have fun teasing him)
    Important things to remember when writing yaoi

    ~three fingers are not the requirement. Guys even prefer more sometimes.
    ~Lube is not always necessary. The first few times yeah, but after that saliva or semen is just is good. And it doesn't require that much. A lot of the time, they just do it without lube.
    ~Guys switch being top and bottom. There isn't usually a set role. Sometimes one will prefer to be one but they still switch.
    ~The prostate requires some stimulation before allowing pleasure. It isn't 'hit it right off and and white hot heat'Not normally anyway.
    Hope this helps.
    ~The Flame Reviews~
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