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Reviews for When the Caged Bird Screams

By : Sarryn
  • From ANON - marika on April 23, 2007
    this was SO amazing. i was truly in awe when i was reading it (it's rare that i come across gems like this on ff.net), and i feel like a total dork saying this, but i drew your debauched naruto during a boring lecture today.
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  • From ANON - Ghastly citrus on April 23, 2007
    Oh wow. I normally can't stand stories like this, but boy does your writing suck me in.
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  • From shingothepest on April 22, 2007
    Sasuke's smoking is very fitting. He wants to kill himself, but he is putting Naruto in danger too. The image of Naruto wearing blood red lipstick lead me to vividly see his mouth covered in blood later. The unexplained in this fic makes me both happy and fustrated. I love stories with many areas for fans to explain. Yet, fanfics are usually the forums for these areas to be explored, not where new ones are meant to be ripped open.

    If you ever write for a published series, let me know about it. I will obsessively fall into it.

    I see how Angels were created, and then made to fight one another to eliminate the weak. I speculate that Gaara and Naruto are Demons. But who/what will be God? Naruto, who seems both Angel and Demon? A child born between Angel and Demon? (Have you ever delved into mpreg?)

    What, what, what will Sasuke do? You left us with no doubts of his possesive lust. Is there love in there too? The tenderness of his thoughts makes me think so. But Naruto seemed was more caught up in him past, in the questions of his existance. Only instincts made him obsess over another person.

    What will Sasuke do? How will Gaara react? I see Naruto acting on nothing but instincts while in Gaara's presence. Will Gaara kill Sasuke, and the story end? Or perhap Sasuke would to rise to something stronger, and able to defeat Gaara. Could Sasuke become God?
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  • From ANON - moose on April 22, 2007
    nicely done! love the way you put things into words this story sounds really interesting. so uh what's with naru's uh makeup? and the word whore kept popping up...will this story have naruto as such? anyways keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - rainbowgirl on April 22, 2007
    I love this! your writing is always perfect. I have read a lot of your stuff on livejournal and I love them all. especially the harry potter and kingdom hearts stories :)
    Are you going to write anything more to this?
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