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Reviews for The World Was All Before Him

By : SuishouTenshi
  • From ANON - Anon on June 05, 2015
    Nonono why didn't this amazing storey continue! So good, I LOVE yonkaka. The bit where he told Kakashi not to take off his mask mademy heart flutter... and I love the new development with Hizashi- what will Minato do when je finds out he has seen Kakashi's face?!
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  • From wolfkin59 on October 26, 2012
    Just stumbled on this fic (was looking for good Yondaime/Kakashi fics) and read it through, and I have to say, you've done brilliantly with it, though the last chapter or so look like you maybe need to change the format so the editing marks don't interfere with the story. But you probably know that.
    Had me in stiches for about half the story, laughing so hard I couldn't breathe. VERY well done. And I like the slowly developing relationships, the way Naruto befriends everyone, Minato's obliviousness and jealousy...the whole nine yards.
    Hizashi flirting with Kakashi had me somewhat astounded, somewhat amused, and very much looking forward to the eventual fall out Minato's going to have with his own emotions because of this. (Evil of me, but there you have it.)
    I am definitely eager to read more, though for such quality chapters as you have I'm willing to wait if you need me to.
    May the words just flow,
    Cuzosu
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  • From MarCapuNava on July 01, 2012
    I absolutely luv ur fic... I just wish there was more!
    Luv the way u characterize the Yondaime and Kakashi... even tho now we know the story to be completely different than u wrote, i can still imagine this happening if the Yondaime hadnt died and there was such a possibility for Kakashi and the Yondaime to be together. Hope u update soon!
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  • From MirzeSnape on October 04, 2011
    Amazing story. you should really update!
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  • From ANON - Daisy on June 11, 2011
    loving this story! can wait to see what happens next, please update soon =)
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  • From lntora on December 05, 2010
    I had this bookmarked on ff.net, and was literally depressed when I went to read it again some days ago and it was gone. Just on a vague whim today I did a search and found it on aff.net, so I am deliriously happy again. I don't know if you have any plans to continue since it's been so long, but I still enjoy coming back to read this. I adore the interactions with Kakashi and Yondaime, plus the familial scenes with them and Naruto. Even if you've left it off I hope it stays up just to have a nice read to go back to.
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  • From Analilly on November 17, 2010
    One of the best fics I've read... Yond/Kaka are really cute and denial it's definitly not just a river in egypt. Please up date again! I miss this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2010
    Hahahaha ah PML! Love it love it! Updates pahlease!
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  • From ANON - Mitsuko on March 20, 2010
    Hahaha Love it! Absolutely love this story, its the first one i check for updates for =p! Anticipation for something has well and truly set in haha... Cant wait for the next one =D
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  • From GudenMulle on February 10, 2010
    I'm floored :) (yes, I know, I can't spell..). This is such an interesting take on the characters, and as a Minato-fan, I'm thrilled to see him shine! I love the MinatoKakashi pairing, but there surely cannot be any question as to who is on top? Now, I usually love Naruto, and I also love this one you've created, but he also does have the flaws of a child, which I like that you put in, (the joy at making Sasuke cry etc.). I LOVE Kakashi, he is fantastic to experience at his 18 years of age :D. I'm sitting at the edge of my chair, waiting for Minato to JUMP Kakashi, it's gonna be GREAT!
    I'm amazed and jumping around in joy because of how you use the quotes to describe the chapters and everything. It's fantasticly done, and I'm really looking forward to reading more! :)
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  • From ANON - Xeny on October 30, 2009
    This is freaking made of pure awesomeness! I can't wait to read more ^_^
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  • From Bluesake on August 30, 2009
    I am throughly enjoying this story. XD I hope minato can understand his feelings soon xD and so cute how the kids are! love sasuke and naruto's relationship
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on August 19, 2009
    I really really enjoy reading this story. Your vocabulary and diction are always so crisp and eloquent. The character's personalities are so diverse, yet still canon to the manga/anime.

    The plot is also definitely picking up. I love it, absolutely love it.

    Please update soon! ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2009
    so happy to see another update so soon! i don't care that the latest chapter was shorter then your norm. it's not like the update was short by any degree, and i was not dissappointed either.

    a "little slow to understand his feelings" is decidedly an understatement!! i know he'll catch on eventually, and i know the push to make him do something is going to be huge! i'm still dying to read their first .... anything really. it's like a long drawn out note on a violin. each note puts you further onto the edge of your seat, and makes the end of the note all the more sweeter and intense ..... shutting up now
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  • From ANON - aprilANXIETY on August 19, 2009
    NaruSasu all the way. I don't even care about the other pairing, it has to be narusasu! Please!!! it's my favorite and no one displays it. It's always sasunaru and i just don't like sasuke as a seme. SemeNaruto all the way and sasUKE!!! Plz!

    sincerely,
    -aprilANXIETY
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