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Reviews for The World Was All Before Him

By : SuishouTenshi
  • From Mikra on October 09, 2007
    I'm speechless. This was amazing.
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  • From ANON - meliana on September 30, 2007
    Instead of a first word can it be a first sentence. I hope you don't make Naruto stupid. Please make him smart, hot, funny, and confident. Kindda like the Yondaime, but a shorter version. I hope he doesn't turn out like how he is on the show. I think that's the reason I stopped watching the show is that he is just so stupid. Most of the things that comes out of his mouth are just so stupid and obvious. You don't have to make him strong right away. That can be one of the things that he's struggling on. Just please please please i beg you don't make him stupid.
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  • From ANON - 2321 on September 30, 2007
    I thought they were going to finally kiss. Stupid Jiraiya for ruining the moment. I'm excited about the next chapter. I really want to know what the plot is.
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  • From ANON - nsg on September 30, 2007
    I bet it has to do w/ the Sannin, like pervert-toad or something. Or something cute like "kashi".
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  • From ChiomaAnago on September 22, 2007
    the last part was funny. can't wait for the next part. update soon pls

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  • From MidnightsKeeper on September 22, 2007
    this story is kick-ass! i can't wait for the next chapter and the promised ass-kicking. i'd say naruto's first word would very likely be "ramen" but maybe this will be your explaination for "dattebayo," yes? at any rate please give us an update soon!
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  • From Lucia on September 22, 2007
    I only have one word for this.... AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
    The fight in the beggining was SUPERB!! and the image of little Sasuke hanging from Jiraya's back while giggling just... oh gods so ubberly CUTE!!!!!!!!! ^___________________________^
    And of course that little YonKaka scene was fantastic! ;D Yondaime's possesive words to Kakashi's pretty face made me smirk so much my chicks are hurting :D and the Sannin' teasing cracked me up xD
    Poor Sasu-chan crying next to Naru-chan's cribb, made me tear up T.T Just like Minato's disspair...
    Gods, this great fic keeps giving me all kind of emotions ^__^
    Can't wait to see next chapie... with Naru's first word... may it be Sasuke? or Kakashi? or Daddy? Ero-sennin may be? xD The last one would be awesome... and the first one just sweet ;D Can't wait to know it!!!!!
    Hope see you soon
    Ja nE!
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  • From ANON - Beachan18 on September 19, 2007
    and haha Naruto's first word? Well, it could be ramen, but that would be predictable. I would love it if it's Sasuke. or Uke. haha

    or anything perverted xD that would be awesome
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  • From ANON - Beachan18 on September 19, 2007
    ...This is the first time I read this fic...

    OMG I can't believe I haven't found it before today. OMG this last chapter, where where Yondaime was telling Kakashi to never show his face to anyone. EVER. I was like omg omg omg and Kakashi was soooo oblivious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Sasuke is sooo cute. NaruSasu rocks my world, and in this fic, YonKaka is da win~!

    I can't wait for the next chapter~! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 19, 2007
    I'm in love with your fiction!
    Update soon, ne?!:D
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  • From LadyRonin on September 19, 2007

    i loved what yondaime said to kakashi about his mask like a sheik or something that's the shit to me. since i am a serious sasuke x naruto fan i would hope that naruto's first word would be sasuke. but naruto being naruto i think his first word is going to be ramen. i know that's stupid but it's morning he's hungry what else would he say. thanks for the great chapter and i can't wait to see the next one.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on September 19, 2007
    AH IM LOVING THIS. Please update a.s.a.p.
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  • From lexjamandme on September 18, 2007
    Woo hoo... I am so glad that I found your story. It's been awhile since a story caught and kept my interest so well. I love your character portrayals. Baby Naru and Sasuke are adorable and cute as hell. Minato and Kakashi are pretty damn cute as well. I LOVE your Jiriya. Can't wait for the next.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 18, 2007
    either dattebayo or ramen ... or Sasuke
    Finally! An update! Nice chapter!

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  • From ANON - Jadejj on September 18, 2007
    I think Naruto's first word would either be Sasuke or Ramen...Good chapter :D
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