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Reviews for The World Was All Before Him

By : SuishouTenshi
  • From ANON - kallipso on October 10, 2007
    This is a fabulous story I hope that I will get to read more of it.
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on October 10, 2007
    You should introduce Gai and Iruka in the same chapter but i get the feeling that if you did Gai the chapter would be funny. SO yeah introduce Gai. That would be interesting. LOL.
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  • From aiesha on October 10, 2007
    OMG!!! F'ing hillarious!! i only made it to chapter four before i had to go to class, but i love your sotry!!! i also love the slight AU of Kakashi. (kakashi in chibi form a.k.a. a kid, is just f'ing hillarious!) you know what your doing, i love it! sorry, can't stop saying it............... I LOVE YOUR FIC!!

    now, i have to go to the hospital so they can put stitches into my sides from laughing so hard... haahaha, love it....

    keep up the good work! ja matta.
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  • From jbjewel on October 10, 2007
    It's hard to pick one! Gai, Iruka and Neji are all very logical choices. Any would work though.
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  • From ANON - Hannah on October 10, 2007
    I love that Kakashi is Naruto's mama.
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  • From gaara89 on October 10, 2007
    I love this!!! Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - clowangel on October 10, 2007
    I vote for Iruka! ^^ There aren't enough fics about the man out there. Basically, I just like reading about Iruka. ^^

    Okay, so yeah, my guesses as to what Naruto's first word might be were a bit weird. I would've never guessed you would choose something so normal though.. At least it was in a weird situation. ^^;;; *giggles*
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  • From LadyRonin on October 10, 2007
    calling kakashi mama was so funny and appropriate. i knew when i saw the story editing yesterday that it msut mean another great chapter was soon to be up and i was not mistaken (thanks). i like how you are slowly building the relationship between the fourth and kakashi it's sweet. as for the poll i choose gai because imaging him trying to handle a energetic naruto and then tiring him out is hilarious. since you didn't kill off the fourth is neiji's father still going to be alive or are you still going to kill him off. wouldn't this effect whether neiji is a hardass or not. if gaara meet naruto when he was younger before his uncle tried to kill him wouldn't he still have a little bit of different attitude since his uncle is still alive and he has someone whom he trusts. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ayan on October 10, 2007
    ... I DEMAND MOAR!!!!!

    Christ, this is like the only good still-alive yondaime fic I've ever read (sorry to all of the other people that wrote yondaime fics). And it's long! Yay!!!!
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  • From hpn827 on October 10, 2007
    Great chapter. It's funny how somethings I feel like Kakashi is older than the Yondaime.
    Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - Haru on October 09, 2007
    Wow, um... what an a-hole Yondaime is o_o. I just got to the 'don't tell him about his mother' line and... that's just cruel and really selfish. I hope her ghost comes to haunt him, because that's like saying 'whoops, sorry for dying... he won't ever know you though. And I'll make sure he won't care either, you're just here to have my baby and go away :)'. I mean... seriously. Really, I think that was the only part of this fic so far that didn't sit well with me.


    Er... Naruto is cute though XD. And Kakashi gets points for being like 'What o_o??'. So... yeah XD.
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  • From ANON - kyu77ryu on October 09, 2007
    What can I say?

    This is the most unique and one of the best (if not the best) fic that I've ever read.

    Cheers to your great work!

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - clowangel on October 09, 2007
    I'm guessing his first word to be either 'Sasuke', 'pervert/hentai', or 'ramen'. o.O; And by the way, I'm not serious. ^^; lol

    Anyway, great fanfic. I'm really loving it. A lot. =) Beautiful story. I also didn't expect Sasuke to be in it but he is! And it's a cute and sweet Sasuke too! Yippee!
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  • From ANON - Luna_Meow on October 09, 2007
    This is the best I've ever read!! :D I can't help thinking that Naruto and Sasuke are so adorable (although this story is mostly on Minato :P ) It's funny, sometimes cute, sometimes moving and touching (a bit), but overall it's amazing.

    I don't know why I think of Naruto's first word to be "-dattebayo", hehe.

    Keep it up! :)
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  • From Spindy on October 09, 2007
    AAAAhhh I can't wait to be updated!!XD Anyway I'd like Naruto not to just say a word... well ok start with one word such as Sasuke (or any other name) or ramen even... but after been saved, wouldn't be a shock if he started to talk full sentences and talks like an adult or even better in front of the Uchihas! And his reason of not talking earlier would be hilarious such as "It was Troublesome"?
    Take that from the Number One surprising Ninja! Wooo love SasuNaru!

    P.S:Will kyuubi be present in your fic... for e.g the mist nins threaten Narutos life and Kyuubi came killing them/ coming to his consiousness?
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