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Reviews for The World Was All Before Him

By : SuishouTenshi
  • From ANON - animelover on January 29, 2008
    i'm sorry i can't remember if i've reviewed this before. sigh ... but i really like this fic. i dont' think i've ever read a minato/kakashi pairing before. the dynamics between them are rather interesting, and i love the fact that sasu is such a crybaby. hahahaha, can't wait to see what happens when they're older. no wonder itachi's so disgusted with him.
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  • From LadyLaran on January 29, 2008
    *shakes Minato* KISS HIM YA IDIOT!!! Oh dear gods, I couldn't stop laughing at the scene about the boobies and whatnot. Naruto does need to learn not to laugh at Sasuke though. Silly boy! I'm glad to see an update on this!
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  • From ANON - dana on January 29, 2008
    as always i am stoked when i see an update of this story and today was no exception. i loved so many little funny thungs in this chapter that i am hard pressed to pick one but if i have to i would have to say making naruto have kakashi say that he liked minato was atthe top. i cannot wait to see how neiji and naruto's first meeting goes cause i know he just has to go to hinata's birthday party. plus the since naruto is going then i know that sasuke will also be there. hopefully the fur won't fly. i can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - lost_love_xXx on November 22, 2007
    update soon, yes? good. lol

    can't wait ot read more!

    xo
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  • From ANON - Luna_Meow on November 13, 2007
    Whoops, my guess is wrong! XD But great chapter! :D

    For the new chapter, I like either Iruka or Gai's.
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  • From ANON - Kuraishine on November 09, 2007
    Oh, and by the way, my vote is for Gai. Especially if Yondaime has, until that point, not been witness to Gai and Kakashi being in the same room. Embarrassed!Kakashi is for the win.
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  • From ANON - Kuraishine on November 08, 2007
    Being a lover of 'what if' fics, especially those in which the Yondaime survives, I was very (read extremely) to find 'The World Was All Before Him'. So far I am greatly enjoying it, and I hope that you update soon. I also hope that Kakashi will catch a clue, or that Minato will make a move! I love the decriptions of baby-Naruto; Kakashi's descriptions are so deadpan-hilarious and long-suffering at turns, and that Yondaime named Naruto when he was, in essence, delirious and then freaked out at the name when he woke up made me laugh out loud.
    Your newest avid reader.
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  • From WalkingAway on October 28, 2007
    i really love this story. i read it and then went back and read it again.

    you are a great writer. the story and each character have their own life that shows through your writing, the momentum of the piece is excellently paced, and baby naruto and sasuke are just plain cute! i don't know if you realise just how often babies in stories now no real character, so i'm delighted to read baby naruto and sasuke! SO CUTE

    i love the interactions between kakashi and yondaime. i've never really read a story with them as a couple, and while they are not there yet and i don't even know if it will develop to that stage..... i really hope that they will. the development, and attraction, and just plain tension between the 2 is amasing! when yondaime said in A3SC2 --------------- “Don’t,” Yondaime imparted his order softly, “don’t ever show your face to someone else.” --------------- i had such a yaoi girl moment, and i'm honestly not prone to those at all! i simply love that line, and i am really anticipating more of that in the future from these 2

    in closing, really really liked it. and i hope that this story is continued with similar, if not better, moments in the future.

    god! might have to read it one more time ;)


    I also read:
    Wind Rider - i really liked this one 2, and had to track you account down on fanfiction.net because i simply could not read anything else till i had read all the parts that were submitted.
    A Mark of You and Me - which was so very sad! i loved the story, but the ending was quite sad. I'm definitely glad that i read "The World Was All Before Him" after it. make me so much happier
    Cage - loved it. it's not often we get to see a darker, mischievous side of harry thats still true to his original character. he's either dark and a bit evil or just OOC, so amazing job with that one
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  • From LindyStar on October 18, 2007
    First of all, kudos for this, it is great! When Naru-chan called Kakashi 'mama' I just about lost it; for some reason that just had me bawling! As for who to hear about in the next chapter....I'm going to have to go with Iruka. I just love him to pieces!
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  • From Plaguerose on October 13, 2007
    Update! Please!!! Besides my fav. part is "mama-kashi"
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  • From ANON - animelover on October 12, 2007
    Hey, this is kinda cool and unique! What life would be like in the 4th H had lived. Neat! I'm only on about 2nd chapt, so I don't have much to say yet, but I like his personality. You've captured it well.

    Later! ;-)
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  • From ANON - lauren on October 10, 2007
    I am a TERRIBLE reviewer, but I thought I would because I LOVE THIS SO SO MUCH. This is right in my toolbar of favourites (the firefox, del.icio.us thingo) and I check EVERY DAY hoping you have updated. And then I make very loud noises of JOYJOYJOY. :-)

    In conclusion: I love your writing, your characterisations...okay, EVERYTHING, and look forward to seeing more (hopefully soon:-))
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  • From aiesha on October 10, 2007
    I think Iruka would be an interesting take. Because in the anime there were hints about Kakashi and Iruka being, in old european terms "intimate friends" or something or other. I dunno, maybe it's just an appealing topic for me... introduction of Iruka that is. After that i think Gai would be hillarious... so if your going to stick to comedy, Gai. for something along the serious note: Iruka.

    Love your fic btw. almost cried out of joy and surprise because of Naru-chan's first word. WWKD? What will Kakashi Do? lol...sorry. Keep up the good work, looking forward to your next chapter. until next time- midnight. Ja matta.
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  • From ANON - Hannah on October 10, 2007
    Oh and I'd like to see Neji.
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on October 10, 2007
    Well I would like to read about Neji or Iruka in the next chapter :)
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