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Reviews for The World Was All Before Him

By : SuishouTenshi
  • From lokivsanubis on August 25, 2008
    Great chapter XD its been so long but it was worth the wait. XD I thnk Yon/Kaka should rotate but Yon should be on top most of hte time. Cuz Sasuke is so cute and because he cries a lot he should be uke in his and Naruto's relationship XD. Oh and are we going to see Iruka at all in this fanfic?
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  • From WalkingAway on August 24, 2008
    Yon/Kaka and Sasu/Naru relationships? (If you don’t understand “seme” and “uke”, then bless you, get out of the yaoi fandom, and run for your lives before you’re tainted forever like I am. Run, dammit, run!)

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA. it's tru! once it's in your blood, you're screwed. don't have a chance.

    loved the update. i'm so glad you are still posting, because there are so many great stories that just get left incomplete. and i would LOVE to read your Yondaime and Kakashi relationship, and sasuke, naruto grown up and getting together.

    i'd like Yon/Kaka for sure. i can totally see in my head Yondaime realising just what he has with Kakashi, and all of the revelations and events following it. and i'd love to read it!

    but i'm not sure about which Sasu/Naru relationship would be better (just because i haven't seen them as teens). i like both, maybe switchable? like having your cake and eating it too =D lol. but if we have to choose, i'd say Sasu/Naru. wait, Naru/sasu. nope Sasu/Naru, definitely Sasu/Naru. *nods*

    hehe anyway, great work! thanks for posting
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  • From Mikra on August 24, 2008
    YonKaka and NaruSasu, exactly in that order :)
    You made me utterly happy with this update. Now I actually have enough energy to go to work. Thank you!
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  • From Sagenwarrior on August 24, 2008
    i really love this fic. Naruto so cute and kakashi affection for him is super sweet. Can't wait to see more!
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  • From rerickson1983 on August 23, 2008
    I'd like to see Minato be Kakashi's seme. And I'd like to see Naruto be Sasuke's seme. Sasuke being Naruto's seme is so overused it's not even funny. Also, I'd like to see Naruto and Kiba form a friendship since they're so alike, I think it'd be cute.
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  • From ANON - hollowed_self on August 23, 2008
    I’m afraid to admit that I was a little hesitant to actually read this story when I saw the pairing you put on the summary. I had no qualms about reading a Seme!Yondy/Uke!Kaka fic, but the NarutoSasuke gave me a pause. I mean, what seme in their natural born life has ever used the puppy dog face/pout as adorably as Naruto pulled in your latest chapter? It may just be my own biased opinion, but I just can’t see Naru-chan as a seme, your portrayal of him is just too cute. Plus I love it when Yondy-daddy is put into overprotective father mode when faced with possible male and dominant suitors for his innocent and virginal Naru-chan (And I’m also a fan of possessive Uchiha’s). Even though there are a lot to be found in terms of the SasuNaru fic in general, there are few and far in between where the couple has to contend with overprotective parents in the form of a Minato/Kakashi combo.

    Anyways, I just want you to know what a lovely piece of writing this is. The plot itself is not so very original but you put twist into it that makes it all the more refreshing and stimulating as you do with your other stories (*cough*IWantEternalTime*cough*). And while Kakashi is a smidge OOC, you portrayed his character well considering the different circumstances he is put in that are different from canon, especially with Minato alive and well and Naruto being put under his care rather than the orphanage or on his own.

    I was a bit surprised, though, about how Naruto was received by Neji. Neji was definitely not canon towards the end, but then again his father isn’t dead (And will not be sacrified from Kakashi’s rescue of Hinata) and you’re probably right in his portrayal as from that part from the manga that showed the initial meeting between Neji and Hinata and Neji commenting to his father how cute Hinata was, I get the sense that Neji wasn’t such a complete prick back in the days (no kid is, but still there’s Kakashi and Itachi as prime example of dastardly mean babies :P). I do question about Hinata’s character though, when she was being kidnapped. For a child who was lauded as lacking in skills and ineffective, she sure put that Cloud ninja into a bind. I always thought that Hinata was shy, self-conscious, and not confident since she was a child. But I see that you’re going a different way. Either way, I am now a fan of this story and will be awaiting the next installment as soon as you can get it out (Hopefully the next one won’t be as hard to put out as giving birth to a baby ^^).

    Hollowed_self

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  • From DHH on June 21, 2008
    What a cute chapter..I like it so far and hope to see more of it soon...

    Cheers,
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  • From midnightphoenix on February 25, 2008
    I love your take on the Naruto canon! It's so sweet to see Kakashi when he was younger helping Yondaime to raise Naruto! I can't wait to see how the relationships develop. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - beachan on February 06, 2008
    Weee~! YOU UPDATED OMFG!!

    NARU-CHAN IS SO CUTE AND OMG SASUKEEEE!! :D so cute hahahaha

    U must update soon, I wanna see more YonKaka :D
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on February 03, 2008
    I'm glad that you updated and I cannot wait till the next chapter. I really liked how Naruto forced the words out of Kakashi's mouth. Also when Naruto started to critisize(sp?) the 'mommy' candidates I just about busted a gut.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Luna_Meow on February 02, 2008
    Ahhh... new chapter. You have no idea how long did I wait for this. :D

    LOL @ Naruto learning new words from Icha Icha novel. XD And LOL @ Kakashi's "confession" (It made me scream out "Kitaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~~!!" silently XD).

    Keep up the good work! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2008
    i absolutely adored the update! i couldn't believe you had updated when i first saw it *giant cheesy grin*

    hehe i love kakashi and minato in this! since the first chap i've been able to see the chemistry, and it's just getting better and better :D i love it, and the next chapter will be a great chapter for these 2, i can just feel it

    see you next time
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  • From snnj11220 on January 31, 2008
    God I like your Naru-chan and Minato. Even crybaby Sasuke is a delight. And I absolutely adore your Kakashi, its been a while since anyone that I have seen has written him... dare I say it so beautifully. I love his characterization here, especially when he goes into "mama Kakashi mode." I hope you don't have plans to kill off Minato, that would be a shame because they really do make a wonderful pairing. Anyway great story I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Reyn on January 31, 2008
    *flails*
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  • From ANON - Outlaw Angel on January 29, 2008
    Sooo cuute, but will Yondaime actually listen to Naru-chan, and not marry
    any of those "perfect women" and go after what his heart desire, the copy-ninja Kakashi?
    I can see it now, Naruto calling Kakashi "Mama-kashi" aaah, cute!!
    And what about the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke? hope we get something lemony!! Make Sasuke the uke, cuz in these chappies
    he was sooo totaly a born uke, bwabwabwa (evil laugh) And please, please make a cool ending!! With Yondaime marrying Kakashi of course!!

    Love where ur heading with story, make it a like ur one ur super best!!
    Update as soon as you can!
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