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Reviews for The World Was All Before Him

By : SuishouTenshi
  • From asm613 on December 12, 2008
    (((“Naruto is resting safely in the Hyuuga household.)))___How is this in anyway supposed to be comforting? Hinata was almost kidnapped moments previously from the Hyuuga household. This is a child's birthday party/celebration_and the adults play drinking games/challenges? Naruto was cold-which is why he sought out sleeping with Kakashi_so now Naruto is sleeping alone again and cold. What happens when he wakes up and Kakashi is missing from the bed?


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  • From ANON - Luna_Meow on November 08, 2008
    Eep! It has been a long time since I last read this. Glad I checked today. :D

    So Naruto made 2 more new friends, eh?

    "who would YOU want to see as the seme and uke in the Yon/Kaka and Sasu/Naru relationships?"

    My answer would be... Yondaime x Kakashi and Naruto x Sasuke! :D (seme father and son, aha.)
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  • From ANON - E on September 15, 2008
    I think the story is gr8! I think Kakashi is just 2 funny!Please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2008
    Naturo is so kawaii. I love everyone of your character, especially Kakashi & Minato.

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  • From ANON - RamtopsWitch on August 31, 2008
    A) I love this fic.
    B) I like the order you had them in. Yondamie Seme/Kakashi Uke, Sasuke Seme/Naruto Uke
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  • From ANON - melenur on August 30, 2008
    Hello. I must thank you. It's one the most awesome story in Naruto universe, i've reade, and bealive I've read a lot in several languages. I've found your story two month ago and was very dissapointed when I thought that you didn't update in few month.
    So, it's really a present to me now,when I'm seeing the continuation. Thank you very much.
    P.S. About your question. I will speak only about Yon/Kaka relationships(as one of my favorite),'cose I don't really care for Naru/Sasu.For me it's Yondaime is the seme.

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  • From LadyAquill on August 30, 2008
    it's far far too late for my innocence, ahhhh the corruption of yaoi thanks for concern thou. Great Chapter btw. On the subject seme/uke roles thou, is there any reason why they can't switch roles every so often? frankly I doubt permanently assigning roles works in real life and also the stereotypical seme/uke characterisation annoys the hell out of me. I'll refrain from ranting about here. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
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  • From ANON - midnightskeeper on August 29, 2008
    i vote for kakashi and sasuke as uke and yondaime and naruto as seme. it's hotter that way as far as i'm concerned. and just to let you know, i love this story so much it's almost ridiculous.
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  • From ANON - nekoluver666 on August 28, 2008
    ^-^ I think that the Yondaime should be seme over Kakashi. I just can't see the Yondaime taking it from anyone. Maybe once in a while as a treat or something, but he just doesn't seem the uke type, ya know? Sasuke's such a cry baby that it amuses me ever so much. x3 I like seeing him in the seme role over Naruto. Naruto makes a good uke if you ask me. *nod* *nod*
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  • From ANON - SaCyner on August 27, 2008
    I would like to see Yon/Kaka and Naru/Sasu in that order (seme/uke). I totally agree with you, if don't understand the meanings, run or else you'll be suckered into it!!

    Great story. I love you Naru-chan and the way you change the storyline just because Yondaime is alive. Luv it!
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  • From snnj11220 on August 26, 2008
    First off loved the length of this chapter. Hmm lets see Naruto vs. the Hyuugas, Hyuugas don't stand a chance against his cuteness. I loved the fact that Kakashi is developing a maternal instinct with Naruto. And squealed at the end when Minato said Naruto was 'theirs.' As far as the seme/uke thing goes I would prefer Min/Kaka, and Sasu/Naru. I just can't see Minato uke to Kakashi. And I think Naruto uke would be hilarious here, especially assuming he will have a bunch of suitors, with Minato and Kakashi as 'parents' it will be really funny to see their response to him being 'wooed.' Anyway love, love, loved this chapter! Just don't take like forever with the next update, kay!
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  • From Aikotina on August 26, 2008
    Naruto has to be the seme! i demand it! besides, you already made sasuke a cry-baby, why not make him the uke? and mmmm, the kakashi and yondame pairing is hard... but i think i want to go with ,,, mmm... kakashi seems more adultish to me, despite being like 15 years younger. so, kakashi as seme is my suggestion. i just found your story and i loves it! please update soon with your decision on seme/uke pairings. i usually dislike sasuke!seme stories, but even if you choose that i will still follow your story; its too good not to!

    ~T.T.
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  • From ANON - KittyKatClaws on August 25, 2008
    This is an amazing story and I can't wait to read more! I love the way you portray the characters, especially Naruto and Kakashi. On the note of your question: I would personally really like to see Kakashi as the seme and Minato in the more "vulnerable" uke role...

    Thank you for this chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one!
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  • From ANON - Nova on August 25, 2008
    I suppose Naru decided the seme in the YonKaka. He called Kakashi mama after all. So, silver hair is uke. In the NaruSasu...well, I think having two blond seme won't hurt. And you portrayed a whiny Sasuke in private (I absolutely adore him!!!). Compliments for this all!
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  • From DestineysMistake on August 25, 2008
    YonKaka and NaruSasu. There’s entirely too much SasuNaru floating around already.
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