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By : bkdragone
  • From popcorn on June 01, 2007
    I'm really liking your fic, there are very few decent fics on this site, I'm sure the number will grow though it's like that with all "new" anime, look at the Inu Yasha section it has loads of great fics. Now i really hope this will be a sakuraXsasuke fic, because i want to see her turn him down and how Sasuke takes it and i REALLY want sasuke to find out that Sakura asked Naruto to sleep with her and NOT him, i want to see the ass get his due, before Sakura lets up on him. You have a few errors that are (in my opinion) negligible, heck i make loads of mistakes while writing as well. The reason why i think Kakashi and Sakura won't be so good together in this fic is cuz thus far the way the fic is developing it would make it seem rushed , because lets be honest any good fic with Kakashi and Sakura, needs to be developed very carefully, I'm not saying that your isn't it's just that, if it was meant to be kakashi and Sakura it would have been a bit different then it is. Hence why I think Sakura and sasuke would be great, because sakura seems not to be interested in Naruto. And i really want to see the drama play out between Sasuke and his team mates. Maybe a fight between Sasuke and Kakashi is in order as well? Oki i prattled for long enough, great fic, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Dart Tension on June 01, 2007
    Sorry that was me. (forgot to put name)^
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2007
    ;_; I hate rape and can't stad Sakura wlkaing to her own death!!!!!! Please!!!!!


    Email me, extreme_reborn@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Dart Tension on June 01, 2007
    Hey me again. Seriously!!!! Don't let Sakura get raped!!!! Or die for that matter!!!! Search your soul please!!!! I'm practically like Naruto right breaking in two. I'm on my knees in front of my computer!!! ;_; If not can you at least have sakura admit love to Naruto, even though she is gonna sleep with him. Like have them be more than best friends? ;_;
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  • From ANON - Dart Tension on June 01, 2007
    I just finished the attempted date rape scene. I got a big sigh of relief. I hope Sakura ends with Naruto.
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  • From ANON - lg on May 31, 2007
    Things are coming together very nicely. Grats on another well done chapter.
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  • From ANON - AJ on May 31, 2007
    Hey! loved the chapter, I realy can't wait to see Kakashi's reaction!!! LMAO! Well, I liked the whole Sasuke-Naruto-Sakura team up and the Kakashi/Sakura "talk." I know (really I know because you and I are realted) that you've been busy so I just will wait for the next (hopefully longer) chapter! YAY! Well, luv ya babe!
    xoxo ~ AJ
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  • From roxnroll on May 31, 2007
    great chapter- a little short- but good. I'm a sucker for a longer chapter. Can't wait for update.
    Rox
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  • From ANON - FA on May 14, 2007
    Love it ..your fic is awesome.
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  • From ANON - mel on May 11, 2007
    This story just keeps getting better and better. Please keep updating as fast as you can.
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  • From ANON - Ane S. Thesia on May 11, 2007
    Your writing style changed pretty drastically as I read through all your chapters, it was pretty impressive. /giggles/ Though, in other words, I do believe you've gotten better. It seems you're paying more attention to details and not rushing as much, which is a huge plus. I'm also glad that this story has a plot and isn't just mindless lemon scenes with no reasoning behind it.
    I am looking forward to where this story will go, so please continue writing. ^_^

    xoxo
    A.S.T.
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  • From poornmiserable on May 10, 2007
    awesome....i'm just wondering whether this will get resolved before sakura goes on her mission or will you include the mission in the fic...keep up the GREAT work update soon.....p.s will naruto let it slip out what sakura offered in front of the other boys? how will they feel?
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  • From ANON - Nasis on May 07, 2007
    Getting really good! I can't wait to see what the boys do to that bartender. ;)
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  • From roxnroll on May 07, 2007
    Whoa! Didn't see that coming. Sakura and Naruto. I guess it makes sense. How will Sasuke take that little gem? Can't wait for next chap to find out.
    Rox
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  • From ANON - Lanier on May 07, 2007
    This story is really good. I am totally wrapped up in it and cant wait for more. I hope that her boys can find some way to help her.
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