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Reviews for A Families Betrayal

By : wildkit
  • From oohshiny on November 10, 2007
    REVIEW!!! naw, anyway, THATS SO MEAN HOW COULD THEY DO THAT TO THEIR CHILD?? HE MAY NOT BE THEIR BIRTH SON BUT THEY RAISED HIM!!! email me when you update this fic, i want to read more ^^ my address is deannathx@comcast.net
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  • From elaynabrooks on August 02, 2007
    Hah, so YOU'RE the one who wrote this and got me hooked. I just hope theres some kind of romance in this later...even as twisted as it is. I wanna see more!
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  • From yeagerbomb on May 05, 2007
    this is messed up. but it's great. keep at it, and i hope to see more!~
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  • From ANON - xdeepdesiresx on May 02, 2007
    Hey there! I don't feel like logging in at the moment...though I just wanted to let you know that I love this story so far! Shino is one of my favorite characters and you're right! The Aburame clan is one of the least explored clans in Naruto. I hope you update soon so I can read another exciting chapter! lol
    -Melanie
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  • From serenagold on May 02, 2007
    This story starts off with a great big dark beginning! Poor Shino! I look forward to where you go with this. The possiblities are endless! :D
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  • From yeagerbomb on April 18, 2007
    well. this is looking promising. i would still suggest a beta, but i think this looked better. goodness, i already can't remember... sorry. um, anyway, i just about had to kick myself the other day when i was glancing around and realized i'd read this without noticing what section it was in. i'm soooo dumb... but it's okay!! ^___^ i read because it's shino! go shino!! (i'm in love with him, and there's a sort of funny story behind it, but really only if you're me. no one else would get it...) anyway, i can't wait to see what happens, so i hope you update soon! though, the paragraph or two you used for this chapter could have easily been the beginning of a longer chapter. but this looks good and i'm anxious to know who he will be with!~
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  • From yeagerbomb on April 15, 2007
    well... okay. actually, i think shino and kiba were IC, maybe not shino's dad, but we really don't know him, so that's okay. uh, you might want to get a beta, because there were some errors -spelling, grammatical, capitalization- that can be easily fixed. i love shino-kun, so i was excited to read something about him! ^__^ good job and i hope to see more!~
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  • From ANON - HumanInfiltrator on April 15, 2007
    Angst!!! Oh, how will Shino (my favourite by the way) survive!!!

    You have to tell soon!
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