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By : Hestia

From Athlyn on July 09, 2018
Hello Hestia
I know you'll probably never see this review considering this story is over 10 years old now and you have probably long moved on but I still wanted to let you know the following. I read this back when you were actually writting it, it was this story that intrigued me that lifestyle. I have been been both a Dom and a sub in the past and now a sub for a few years to the same Dom (Who is now my husband). I must say, recently re-reading this story made my heart sing, my mind spin and my nerves pulse. It captures so much of that lifestyle accurately. The way the sub feels, the way one learns, the way the Dom has so much power yet can still love their sub(s). It is all around an amazing story. And you captured so many of the Naruto characters so well too, on a side note.
I keep checking back, praying and hoping that one day this will pick back up. If it never does then it'll be a cherished piece I'll often re-read. If it does, I'd probably cry tears of joy. Till then, I hope all is well with you Hestia, and thank you for writing such a story.

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From ANON - Rose on February 14, 2013
Are you going to continue with this story? It would be a shame to know it just died unfinished...
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From ANON - EMG on July 18, 2012
Dearest Hestia,

I absolutely love this piece of fiction. I started reading it a few years ago, and have read it many times over the last few years as well. Everytime I read it, I feel as if it is the first time reading it again. I love your attention to detail, the way you have given such interesting personalities to each character, the explicitness of your well imagined scenes, and the complexity of the relationships between characters. However, it absolutely breaks my heart that everytime I read D/s Naruto, there has not been a further update to this story. Will you ever add more? I do hope it is not the end of this fic, I hope that you find time and inspiration to continue this story, even though it is so long already. Please, please, please! I'm begging for more of your greatness!!!! You are one of the very few authors that has such extraordinary talent! Everything you have written so far is incredible!
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From Prism0467 on December 18, 2011
I never, ever get tired of reading this. It is a masterpiece!
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From ANON - annie on June 14, 2011
I must say, I'm not normally one for uke Sasuke...but this fic totally made me fall in love with slutty!Sasuke...although I'm still a die-hard SasuNaru fan, I have a newfound love of NaruSasu ^_^
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From ANON - Rose on February 24, 2011
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE *_*
please :3
i need it @.@ im in love with your story! the way you describe Sasuk's personality, is SPOT on!! And i love you COnfident and cool, but still fun naruto. and im glad your naruto isnt a complete moron!! (the last story like this that i read Naruto was a complete dince and couldnt tell his left from his right)

Please write more, Your faithful Stalker, ~Rose~
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From ANON - xkuramaxhieix on February 17, 2011
Did you know, that the 'Rockin R Bar' in Bozeman Montana is gone? xD Just an FYI, the building it was in exploded in March 2009. :D Just an FYI for you.
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From duskpixie on December 12, 2010
Wahhh, I don't even know where to begin! Your story is nothing short of brilliant, with a side order of genius, Hestia!

This is the second time I have read your fic -- both times was like an epic marathon where I read it all in one go because I was so addicted. The first time I read it though, I was new to the realm of fanfiction and was way too shy to review. That's definitely changed, and I feel bad for not commenting on what an awesome writer you are.

The way you write your characters is enviable. While reading, I felt that I could connect with the characters, because parts of their lives or emotions reflected reality, and none of the characters is simple. Each character has layers; a past which informed their present behaviour and their future. Itachi, for example, I thought was written brilliantly. At first he seemed to be cold and business like, but he developed into a much deeper character when he began to reveal and recognise his insecurities. Kisame too, in the patience he showed in pursuing one person for eight years.

Another of my favourite storylines was the Ibiki/Raidou/Genma combination. When Genma finally lets go of the pain of his relationship with Hayate, his show of vulnerability was completely believable and complemented Raidou's show of strength in being there for his friend. Especially touching was Genma's realisation that perhaps he had been holding Raidou back from moving on, rather than being the hero. His being able to recognise this, and his self-reflection made him seem stronger, despite the fact that he felt guilt for it.

Anyway, I feel I may start rambling, since I love almost ever facet of your story. I love your character pairings, and the way you wrote them all was incredibly unbelievable, hence my addiction to reading.

I admire many of your other stories too, and will continue to read in the future (^_^)
Many thanks for the hours of effort you've put in, hope you understand how much we readers most definitely appreciate it.
~dusk. xo
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From ANON - Cassandra on September 27, 2010
OMG! When is the next chapter with these 3 going to be out? I love their story so far! I keep re-reading it. lol totally epic!
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From serolina on July 27, 2010
I. Love. This. Story. *whimper* can I have more please, Mistress?
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From ANON - Dews on May 07, 2010
OH MY GOD. WHERE HAS THIS STORY BEEN!!! I always love D/s
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From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on January 25, 2010
Wow, this was so great :) so long and enjoyable, I literally couldn't get rid of this story until I didn't read it until its final chapter.

I want to recommend you also one really great and high - class writer and stories on this adress

http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/authors.php?no=1296875952

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From KumfuMinou on October 14, 2009
First : sorry for my weird english. I'm french but I try to do a correct review even if it's difficult for me.

Ok.

I loved your story. Really. I was very surprised because it seems to be a... hot/sex story but it's a love story !! It's a really beautiful love story. I'm impressed.
I'm a NaruSasu fan so... I must be honest and tell you I didn't really read all the parts about the other characters (and of course because it's difficult for me to read a so long story in english) : in french we say that I flew over some parts, I don't know if it is the good expression in english. But I was surprised by falling in love for your GaaraShika specially : the feelings are so beautiful. This sentence for example : "They love each other because when you are in love, just taking or giving alone isn't enough, you want to do both." (and this is all that I love in the switch). Another example, when Ibiki think about what he see "beneath the scarred surface of Raidou." This is so beautifull... A few people can write so well about love and you do it in this story.
And your NaruSasu is fabulous ! Sweet, sexy, hot, funny too (beanpole ! You made me laugh so hard with this ! and a "friendly hello". I love that part) and... Oh, yes : this is a love story. I like stories with sex/lemon but it can't be enough for making a good story for me. Feelings and psychology are the most important and your story is a very good story.
About sex : I loved the "let's fuck together" relations (hmm.. ok : I dont know how to say it) : the relation between all the characters and the couples. For example, the conversations they have at Uchiwa's or at the Red Fox or the scene with the "double lotus" or at Neji's... ("Double lotus"... that make me really laugh too !).
And the characters are very well respected. Your Naruto is perfect ! Really perfect.

One word about the D/s because this is a point important for me.
I dont like D/s. So, why am I reading your story ? The answer is : curiosity.
Actually, I can see some BDSM fanfics published in french fandom, this is new and I wonder why. So, I wonder, I search...
I never understood something about BDSM before, even if I am curious : why this type of relations, of sexuality and... I didn't think I'll understand this by reading a fanfiction ! (and I'm thirty years old).
For the first time, I can understand it and it's because you're explaining very well the D/s relation... It is very interesting even if I know that fanfiction is something and reality is another thing. Maybe it is something that will rest in my brain for life... Hmm... I'm sorry. I can't explain it correctly, I dont speak as well english (damn !).

Oh, and of course, there are a lot of things I didn't like, that are too much for me. Too hard relations, too much pain, parts with enemas or pee for example... ow... But, because you explain very well the D/s relation it's ok. It doesn't seems to be only too hard or dirty scenes but something to explain the relation between the characters. This isn't something that made your story less good (OMG, my poor english make me affraid...).

I hope my text isn't too difficult to understand.

So, thanks a lot for this amazing story !
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From NarutoVixin on October 10, 2009
i can tell that there are more chapters and i can hardly wait to read them as im sure they will be as good as the others thank you for making my weekend (when i started this) and it took me a week to read it couse i kept going back to make sure i missed nothing
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From ANON - Nessy on October 01, 2009
The end of this chapter was so ridiculously cute.
Gaara opened up!!!
Gah, I love a good sappy section thrown in with all this brutal rapery.
You're my secret favorite author that no one in the real world can know about.

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