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Reviews for D/s Naruto

By : Hestia
  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2007
    that was the most sexiest sex scene i have ever read keep doing a shagg worthy job of this story.
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  • From Allys on April 15, 2007
    Holy Crap, OMG, I could cry I'm so happy and I've only read the prologue!! Is this your first AU?? It's the first I've read from you, I adore the premise and I'm gonna do a short write up after each chapter, because I adore you. So onward...

    Lady you made my heart beat. Itachi, delectable and the meeting between Naruto and Sasuke purr-fection. I love that they argued and the accidental kiss XD - Oh how I love the little homages to the canon. Oh and I haven't mentioned it yet but I Adore Iruka seme - After Erisabesu and Everyone's Got Secrets that was it for me in terms of the IruKaka relationship. Oh and I know you will do this nothing but justice. Alright now having said that I'm going to stop and review at the end of each chapter, I'm taking it back - I don't wanna stop XD. I'll come back at the end - Sasuke sinking to the perfect position and the end comments by Itachi - Excellence. okay brb.

    I love that you highlight the responsibilities of a master and make sure to point out that it's about hurting people, it's about freeing people from themselves, their lives and circumstances. God I adore this, Oh My IruKaka goodness.

    I'm sorry I had to pause again - ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!! Naruto has completely and officially Lost It!! I Love you, I love this story LOL, OMG... He just did everything he could possibly do wrong - Wrong XD LOL, and I've never been happier. The fucking snoring though capped it, XD.

    Holy Shit... chapter 5 was like a religious experience, wasn't I starting a cult devoted to you? I should be - Oh wait, there already is one - it's called hedonism. OMG... I think that you have out done yourself - there is nothing I can say to express how I feel right now. Except that that was perfect and beautiful and Ho-Lee Shit.

    Oh. My. God. :sob: I don't even want to try (to express) I'm finding it hard to breathe. But that would be unfair to you. I loved the rage, the fiery-ness that is Sasuke, that snuck out for a second there at the beginning and then at the end when Naruto called his name. Om my gosh... the intensity, the blood play - The Knife! I was scared for a second, a second only cause I know you would never do that, but oh my... And the oath - Oh God the little canon bits that keep sneaking in - masterful. The colour play, the sounds... The focus on Sasuke and how and what he was feeling, that ultimate surrender. The desire to be good XD, oh the possibilities - He needs to be taken in hand, Sasuke, canon Sasuke. God this is like food for the soul - It's soothing, for everything that ever happened between them for all those unresolved issues and the love, that is so up in the air. You crystallized it and made it fall down, to the realm of the possible. Oh my how I adore you, oh God. I know that they say a picture is worth a thousand words - but you make me doubt that, you've always made me afraid to even try to draw, to express the things that you do in words, on paper. The perfection the forgiveness, the trust, the need, I'm not that talented, but oh God, I could try. I love that they don't have a strictly traditional master/slave relationship. The emotions in there, established in one night, amazing, and eternity in a couple of hours. The claim. The desperation, and all of that coupled with Naruto's dobeness :D Creampie XD, Creamcake XD the orange fucking socks XD LOL :teary smile: Oh and the soothing. that is so the best part. That after all the pain comes the soothing, and the loving, and the cherishing. Oh God and I see you've beat me to the punch so I'll post this long ass review and start another one, cause you deserve many.
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on April 15, 2007
    oh, that is so sexy.
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  • From StaplersBreak on April 14, 2007
    Well.

    DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN!
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  • From narutovixen383 on April 14, 2007
    Wow this is an amazing and HOT story!! I couldn't believe it, never thought Sasuke would give in so easily! But hey, I loved it! And how do you write each chapter up so fast and good and with hardly any errors?? I keep checking back and every time there's a new chap up! Keep up the excellent work and sexy work!!
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  • From ursweetheartless on April 14, 2007
    OMFG naruto doming for sasuke there kicked my fucking ass so hard i doubt i'll be able to sit for a week. fuck ... just fuck. i have to say, D/s is one of those things i always enjoy, but can't write for shit, but r/l it's fascinating (i have friends who do shibari and one of these years they're gonna suspend me, even if it does scare the crap out of me ^.^) but i think you've really got it. fuck, im also a uchihacest whore, the more repressed and closeted the better, so the idea of itachi taping his brother getting broken and then watching downstairs while he gets fucked is just wonderfully perfect. really really hope we keep getting more of this, and if there was a favorites option i'd favorite this so fast it wouldn't even be funny, i wanna keep it forever and ever. ^.^ *dies of bloodloss*
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  • From LifeonHiatus on April 14, 2007
    pure smut was never this kinky. you're awesome. and on top of that you pump this shit out like it's no one's business. You rock! (pardon my profanity) let the hotness ensue.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2007
    ROFLMAO! Zabuza afraid of Iruka? ROFLMAO!!! OH DEAR THATS FUNNY
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on April 14, 2007
    wow! This is so incredibly hot! Oh, I can't wait for the romance to start. Excellent work! Thanks for updating as much as you do. You keep me sane (and behind in work, but that's ok!!)
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  • From ANON - Pic's Pixie on April 14, 2007
    wow you are an amazing author, extremely well written, very descriptive lol, can't wait to read more, i hope you update soon, i really hope sasuke becomes naruto's permanant partner, like iruka and kakashi, or even lovers like itachi and kisame, cause i luv sasuke and naruto as both seme and uke so just as long as they get together with only eachother no others (possessive streak hehe)then i'll be happy :P, again please update soon addicted to this story now ;)
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  • From ANON - Cindy on April 14, 2007
    Amazing f*c*ing s*hit~!

    SO HAWT~~~~!!!!!

    Brilliant porn. I cum just rading it. O_O

    THANK YOU MASTER!



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  • From ANON - Hello on April 14, 2007
    Wow, lots of update and smut action. Yum.
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  • From ANON - Anna on April 14, 2007
    Well, Itachi and Kisame? Lovers? But oh so fucking hot. It really gets better and better!!! And I'm off to bed now before another chapter keeps me awake ;P But I wouldn't mind a good morning read... ;DD
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  • From ANON - meadowspeak on April 14, 2007
    Two words, "Damn Good!"

    meadow
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  • From ANON - Anna on April 14, 2007
    Damn your fast... and good... and I can't say anything coherent right now!!!

    Thank you! Thank you for this great story!
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