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Reviews for D/s Naruto

By : Hestia
  • From ANON - IliumRose on April 19, 2007
    Hey....

    FABULOUS story. I'm a fan of Depravity too...good piece to learn about BDSM from. Anyways, I LOVE your frequent updates...LOVE them....esp. when there were multiples ones in a day...the best thing I've ever seen.

    That said, I love where you are taking this story....I hope Shikamaru is the one to drop Neji (because he's being the worlds biggest asswipe) and go to Chouji, and that when Neji and Gaara meet/get involved, they "fix" each other (much like in the Virgin Kiss! shocker, I loved that one too!!). I also am a definite KisaIta fan in this one, never woulda thought of Kisame like that, but damn its perfect...you are awesome (not a fan of a blue shark myself...prefer the um...humans...so you rock for your creation in that regard). I also hope they end up together in the end, and that Itachi can accept Kisame truly and learn to live without Sasuke (though I do LOVE a good ItaSasu...yes indeed I do...) Hm...I want Naruto to shove it to Neji too...or at least blow the socks off him...why do I have this insane urge to torture Neji? Well, he is the worlds greatest asswipe (thusfar in this fic, I am a Neji fan, i swear!). I also like the idea of much more Naru:D Sasu:s primarily, with the occasional switch but where this way is the norm.

    I'm also a bit curious about the IruKaka...I like that pairing in that way, but so far their relationship seems to be remaining a slight enigma to me (perhaps its just me?)...so I guess, I'm wondering (perhaps stupidly so) are they living together? and if they are, is every moment a D/s one, or are there just "normal" times between them? (realizing that kaka's character has that traumatic past and emotional deficienies etc, so perhaps they cant' ahve normal moments?) that sorta thing...

    I also read the "Epilogue" you posted...it was great, and had you decided to end right then, it was perfect. But with more character developement (as will happen with more chapters) it might need to be changed...though I did love it... Also, I'm rather curious about Sasuke's past...from the beating incident to his brother to his current status in life (living on his own? Working? schooling? connection to family? parental issues? all that lovely jazz) though i'm sure most of that will be covered in the future...patience is sometimes not my forte O:-) esp when it comes to FABULOUS fanfics...like yours....why can't people be professional fan fic writers? *le sigh...

    Anyways, love it, love it, love it, and please don't stop! And these were just my opinions, I hardly expect you to take them...just wanted to say em...
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on April 19, 2007
    ah, please continue! yay! Naruto will be the permanent dom, yes? Sasuke the Slut. Yes, that sounds about right.
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  • From ANON - karin on April 18, 2007
    aaahhhhh!!! no fair *pout* i thought you had a new chapter posted.
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  • From ANON - honeysuckelvine on April 18, 2007
    LOVE LOVE LOVE I WANT MOR OF THIS AMAISING FIC!!!!!!!!!!! Moving, inspiering, and empowering! I am on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Allys on April 18, 2007
    Please tell me you've updated :begging: Please, please, tell me that when I click the review button and click back there'll be a new chapter, because if there isn't - I need to make a phone call, to get this problem you've created, fixed XD. LOL. Oh the power of words XD.

    The little escapade in the dressing room was awesome, Naruto strung up on the wall like that takes me right back to 9½ Weeks - The day I found that book while snooping in the back of my dad's closet changed my life. Oh my... XD. I also adored the spectacle they were making of themselves in the store, Naruto is so unsubtle that's it's painful, but painfully liberating.

    The way that you've characterized Sasuke - Spot on. He's such a repressed being, so focused to the exclusion of all else, all the finer points of life. I also love how he jumped right to Naruto's defense - Kawaii so da XD. And your Naruto - He's so not slick, but soo smexy at the same time - I don't think I'm ever going to get over that -

    But honestly the best part of your fics, is the inside of their heads when they get all geared up - fully half of all things sexual is mental, and you have a wonderful grasp on that.

    Okay, I think I'm ready to click that back button now XD.

    Glomps and luffles,
    Allys.

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  • From ANON - Anon on April 18, 2007
    GAH! i love it. you write BDSM so well. you know what your talking about thats so refreshing! if you stop writting ill cry becuase i love this!
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  • From llyoung on April 18, 2007
    Ok. I've changed my mind. This Neji doesn't deserve Shika. Please put Shika with someone else.


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  • From ANON - morbiDreamscape on April 18, 2007
    OMG, *lol* Gaara makes me laugh so hard... XDD Please, please, more Iruka and Kakashi goodness. They are the HAWT. Hmm... and Shikamaru definitely needs more love. ^____^
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  • From ANON - kiNkyB on April 18, 2007
    for insperation on what some of naruto's creations would look like perhaps...
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  • From ANON - HumanInfiltrator on April 18, 2007
    Oh God, you horrible little tease!!! This is soooo hot. How am I supposed to get any sleep now?

    Please mistress, be kind and let there be another chapter waiting when I wake up! *Blue eyes blink up begging under a sheen of unspilt tears*
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  • From ffpandayaoi on April 18, 2007
    My god, you called your stuff tame compared to mine??? NO WAY! Hestia, your story is SO VERY VERY VERY much more intense than mine! You've gone everywhere I've chickened out on! LOL!! And you've done it SO WELL! Keep the masochism in your story ;-)

    I'm TOTALLY honored that I inspired you :-D That is the GREATEST compliment! And I'm giving it back - you've inspired me to keep going on my own story. In the meantime, I'll drink in the perfection you've given us and will let it get me back in the mood for a little PUNISHMENT!

    Lots of LOVE!!!!
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  • From ANON - burr on April 18, 2007
    oh and i'm also happy you got this many reviews, i guess it's a good thing for a writer. i don't remember any story getting over a hundred responses in less than a week :D!
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  • From ANON - oreo on April 18, 2007
    okay i had to read it again. you know i didn't get the part about sasuke walking a little bit behind naruto at first. i thought it was to check his ass but after reading it again i get it.
    i really want someone to walk in on them, preferably neji. that would be awesome.
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  • From ANON - burr on April 18, 2007
    i love this story so much! :) i wait impatiently for every chapter, it's such a good thing you update quickly, i think that with my current level of addiction to the story i wouldn't be able to survive more than a week without an update! :) i love your creation of naruto and sasuke, as for itachi and the people complaining - heck, you're just original with him! when you look at him, he's not really a super alpha seme as some depict him, he's so short and fragile :D. hehe i also like the fact that neji is so mean - i hate the guy :).
    anyway, please keep up the marvelous work - and update quickly :)!
    kisses
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  • From ANON - oreo on April 18, 2007
    i'm learning so much from this fic. i'm not really sure if i would be a dom or a sub if given the chance. i think i would enjoy being the sub more.

    i love how naruto is w/ sasuke. 1 minute he's the naruto that we all know & love & the next he's the sexy & hot dom. i don't think i want to read about naruto submitting to sasuke. he's the perfect dom.

    i absolutely love this fic. thank you for the chapter.

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