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Reviews for D/s Naruto

By : Hestia
  • From ANON - Sandra on April 20, 2007
    Well, that was a surprising twist. Now I'm left wondering what will happen to Neji, will he continue to dom or will he submit? And, I desperately want Gaara and Shikamaru to get together...
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  • From ANON - Hello on April 20, 2007
    Wow... Shikamaru and Gaara. So hot.
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  • From llyoung on April 20, 2007
    I really liked the Shika and Gaara chapter. Good job.
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  • From Kerrisa on April 20, 2007
    I don't know which one i want to try more, being dominated, or dominating. Gyah! You have them both written very very appelaingly. You're also quick to update, i love that! I love you! You make my day ^_^
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on April 20, 2007
    New Chapter 12... I don't even have words. I'll try: Absolutely arousing, and cathartic at the same time. And Chapter 15 - wow. Shika/Gaara? Never would have thought about it, even, but I love it! Lazy Shika's willing to put a lot of effort into that red-headed boy, eh? Awesome. Awesome, awesome, awesome.

    LOVE this fic.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 20, 2007
    the story's really good..
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  • From Allys on April 20, 2007
    Holy Shit :blink blink: huuuu.... oh my oh my oh my. How the hell do you this? I must have read like a hundred of your lemons, and every one - God Damn... :bows down low: Hell I'm scraping the floor here. You are UNbelievable - how many times have you rendered me speechless - Do you know how long it takes me to write a review for you? And fully half the amount of time is spend holding my head - breathing - and trying to drag coherent thought out of the mush you've made my brain into.

    Okay - I think I'm ready now: First off - the description of the house, it threw me, I was so bewildered - this earthy, gorgeous, near destitute place, with the foliage - I could almost feel the air, heavy and fragrant - the entire description was the definition of Sultry - owned by Gaara. And then the mini freakout and the fight - Savage, but delicate? resulting of fear and desperation on Both parts. Amazing, everything, even Gaara's fucking cock, was symbolic - brilliant. How do you make smut brilliant O.o XD. You're unreal... it's wonderful.
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  • From ANON - HumanInfiltrator on April 20, 2007
    Again, I am left without words. Wunderbaar. Gaara is just described so perfectly.
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  • From Allys on April 20, 2007
    Okay... That was... strangely interesting - WTF just happened!!?? LOL XD. Okay - review from the beginning XD. Thank God for lazy geniuses. It's a theory of mine that the reason he's so lazy is cause his damn brain takes up all his energy...

    My brother is rushing me to go watch the new Shippuden, I'm going to make him wait, LOL. Anyway a quetsion the situation with Neji and his uncle - Abusive? Interesting. And the way he was so summarily dropped, only someone very secure in their reasoning powers, LOL if everyone was like Shika, relationships would be so much easier.

    The big WTF twist though was ShikaGaa - Never saw that coming!! But now I'm insanely interested, I can't see how it would work, but it would put Shika in a position to make a very in depth observation of Gaara and what he needs. Shika is so good at fixing things and thinking things out, and he was already scouting for Neji - Dare I guess that you have a plan? Or are you just exploring your options? It'll be interesting as all hell to see - Not to mention that the smut would be... I have no freaking idea what it would be - But I rest that in your more than capable hands, I'm just going to be patient. You rock out loud! Oh and Please :kneels and assumes the position: Was I bad my Goddess? should I beg Goddess? What about Naruto and Sasuke? You left them in such a naughty spot - I'll be good I promise - What would you like me to do? :Kisses Hestia's feet: I'll do anything.
    XD, I mean that.
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  • From ANON - oreo on April 20, 2007
    hmmm..... not as great as the previous chapter. also a bit unexpected i though gaara was going to end up with neji for a moment there. i guess i'm just not a big fan of shikamaru. shino or kiba would have been better.
    i kinda felt bad for neji a second there. he sound so fucked up in this fic. i wonder why.
    any chance were going to read an act of exhibitionism between naruto & sasuke?
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  • From obsidianazul on April 20, 2007
    Ahh, poor Kakashi. I don't have a penis yet I was feeling his pain. Ouch!
    I really enjoy this story. You are a good writer and despite frequent updates, the quality of your writing is not suffering at all. It is such a stress reliever to read your story after a day of my super bitchy boss (oh wait that would be myself).
    Thanks for the excellent fic. Can't wait to see where this goes.
    PS: While I am all for Naruto whipping Neji and showing Neji who Neji really is under all his insecurities, I do not think Sasuke would forgive Naruto having sex with Neji. Sasuke is more than a little possessive and jealous - right!

    As for the reviewer that was suggesting lube with pepper - all I can say is YIKES! That has to be on par with using soap as lube (as I see in a lot of fics). You'd have to have either really insensitive inner parts or a liking for stinging and burning in your private areas!
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  • From ANON - HumanInfiltrator on April 19, 2007
    That certainly was worth the wait!
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  • From Allys on April 19, 2007
    LOL, All the little new notes have me jumping around and re-reading all the things I like, classic example - the very first line of chapter 13: Naruto woke up with Sasuke’s finger in his ass. LOL XD. It's like 6_6 , 9_9 :scratch head: "Huh!?" XD hehehe. Okay real review -

    Oooh... Iruka you meanie XD Muahahaha! God how I love the soothing - does medicated lube really exist? It's such a good idea - it probably does. Same as lube with peppermint oil or pepper should exist - ooh the tingly XD... Okay getting distracted.

    Oh my that little twist at the end loved it, Kakashi fucking Iruka up against the door :nosebleed: and the little tip about the neighbours XD LOL :heart: If you can't beat 'em - Join 'Em XD.
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  • From llyoung on April 19, 2007
    Thanks for inserting the Iruka and Kakashi chapter. I really enjoyed it.
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  • From ANON - Cookie on April 19, 2007
    I know, I know, I'm finally getting to this story and I’ve only got up to chapter 6, but so far this is one effin’ hoot of an AU story! I liked the way you set up the story through the prologue. Something about Naruto as a recovering meth-addict only to become hooked on the whole D/s scene seems so …apropriate. I like the idea of Kakashi becoming Iruka’s ultimate slave. It says that they really gone through a lot together in their D/s relationship. Then the intro to Itachi as the Dom of the city running the most posche BDSM club -– oh, but of course! What else could he be! I loved the way you described the power of Itachi’s eyes and his unscrupulous ways of creating video for his “private collection”. Then moving onto Kakashi’s punishment, which was nothing compared to Naruto’s “retraining of Sasuke, where Naruto finally finds the perfect sub while Sasuke finds his most perfect Dom. And the story flows so tight! I definitely will be bookmarking this one. Back to the rest of the chapters to find out how Itachi is going to take this!


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